Waltzing Bear

Written: November 03, 2023, For Brian Strand Contest
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I was just a child,
enraged by my inaptitude to act
I dashed home,
surprised,
my eyes wide open
trying to retain the tears at bay,
fists clenched
palms are pierced by nails,
lungs contract, begging for breath...
I couldn't keep an eye on him.

He was
a dark furred man-bear
with forlorn, teary eyes,
waltzing to the beat of a drum.
In his irises, I saw
the lushness of wetlands,
cherries and wild fruits
the vastness of the mountains
as well as the nectar of icy streams,
and honey-laden trees.
With a chain around his neck,
standing tall on his back legs
all
he was pleading for 
was
freedom.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 11/5/2023 7:11:00 AM
Whoa this is a bit different from your usual poems but i must say i am loving how descriptive your lines are, you’ve paid attention to tiny details when describing the reaction, emotions as well as scenery in such profound flow! I especially love the ending, how a bear was waltzing to the beat, and looking for freedom with a chain around his neck! Thats haunting and very sad for a child to witness! I hope this is fiction as i cant even imagine this happening to u, and what u must have gone throu
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Date: 11/4/2023 8:53:00 PM
Very raw. Deep.
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