Imperceivable Poems | Examples


Premium MemberMy Passion

To pass through dura matter, leave the wilderness behind 
Exit above vast spaces, join imperceivable dots 
Have an out of body experience, each and every night 

Uncover reality, burn away banality 
Know why, observing a quanta gives it choice 
Place this very thought on weighing scales, does it contain mass

Enter a singularity, ask why it occupies no space 
Fly backwards through eternity, and emerge straight ahead 
Find out what compelled me to write this damn verse 
Something did, but from which universe

I know I’m barely nothing in the grand scheme of things 
but I am something, 
which means, without me the whole’s incomplete
To ponder that line, oh to ponder it so deep 

Do ends and beginnings run parallel along membranous lines 
can omnipotence fill the hollow within 
Will cosmic branes shimmer and buckle, 
then divide exponentially 
Why steeped in passion came an aberration of kindness, 
prepared and willing to be hung out to dry 



Originally written 05/24/22
2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 7 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Mark Toney 
07/09/22
Categories: imperceivable, allusion, passion, perspective,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberIn Response To My First Poem

In response to my first poem


Coherent thoughts- posted 16/5/13

Truth could not be eclipsed, And you said it was a joke. 
There was a mystical feeling,Behind your saying that you didn't care. 
I could feel obscure pain beneath, And you said it was alright . 
A desire was shrouded, Once you said I should leave you alone. 
An Imperceivable feeling was sensed, And you said you didn't know. 
I could feel you in disguise, There was a silence of deep sea water. 


New poem 

 
Unmatched words
looks can't defy,
I can well perceive
even as you deny,
Rhyming of thoughts
the heart spies.

How long can you veil the truth 
and let it go in humour,
The caring, the emotion
can't be a rumour,
To stay lonely 
and snub desires,
Pretence to beloved
can't ever douse fire !




Written Sept 30th, 2015
For contest by Silent one

Awarded 5th place win
Categories: imperceivable, desire, lonely, love,
Form: Free verse


Premium MemberCoherent Thoughts

Truth could not be eclipsed,
And you said it was a joke.

There was a mystical feeling,
Behind your saying that you 
didn't care.

I could feel obscure pain 
beneath, 
And you said it was alright .

A desire was shrouded,
Once you said I should leave 
you alone.

An Imperceivable feeling was 
sensed,
And you said you didn't know.

I could feel you in disguise,
There was a silence of deep sea 
water.


Written May 16th, 2013

Featured poem of the wk as on Sept 9th'13
Categories: imperceivable, baseball, emotions,
Form: Prose Poetry

Anthem

You wear a ripped up slice of agony to show you what emotion is
that cuts and penetrates so deep you have a million tiny pieces
and never ceases
to remind you of your weakness
Weakness, a painful work you don't allow
created by the ones without the tools who are the fools that take the vow
of life
where the pain and ache is not applicable
and the only way to suffer is to make it imperceivable

If you block out the faces, places, silent spaces
rewind-erase it
come and take it here I am
splintered, broken - here i stand
and yet the song still plays and reprimands
the song of all our fears
a cadence made of tears
of sin and disobedience, and yet despite this
I hope someday to find a pocket full of posies
Ashes to dust and dust due to neglect
What happens when the ring around the rose becomes the noose around your neck?
Categories: imperceivable, life, philosophysong, song,
Form: Free verse
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