In Response To My First Poem
In response to my first poem
Coherent thoughts- posted 16/5/13
Truth could not be eclipsed, And you said it was a joke.
There was a mystical feeling,Behind your saying that you didn't care.
I could feel obscure pain beneath, And you said it was alright .
A desire was shrouded, Once you said I should leave you alone.
An Imperceivable feeling was sensed, And you said you didn't know.
I could feel you in disguise, There was a silence of deep sea water.
New poem
Unmatched words
looks can't defy,
I can well perceive
even as you deny,
Rhyming of thoughts
the heart spies.
How long can you veil the truth
and let it go in humour,
The caring, the emotion
can't be a rumour,
To stay lonely
and snub desires,
Pretence to beloved
can't ever douse fire !
Written Sept 30th, 2015
For contest by Silent one
Awarded 5th place win
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