Idolised Poems | Examples


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Premium Member Stepping Stones Standing

step stones across stream
look easy to pick and tread
some were raised upright
wanting to be idolised ~
as landfall stands for the soul

Premium Member Living With the Enemy

Truth’s not just in the beauty of our trees
cherry blossom
it’s pervading bouquet 
the falling confetti 

Truth’s whatever hangs from the tree
like branches 
and fruit 
perhaps that lynched refugee

Truth’s also insidiously part of the tree
toxic leaves 
poison bark
spears used in our savagery 

Truth’s sometimes hidden by the tree
shallow roots 
slithery snakes 
the rotten core we cannot see

Truth’s deeply carved into the tree
a lovers name
the idolised hero
our past disgrace of being monkeys 

Truth’s symbolism comes from the tree
a carpenters son
the scourging whip’s handle 
burning cross of supremacy 

So what truth do we represent to the tree
maybe it’s master
could be it’s slave 
More than that! we’re the common enemy 


By David Kavanagh

Jack and His Pledge

When he died he made a pledge and a vow 
The florist must deliver a rose somehow 
His wife would be the one to receive this rose
So despite his death their love still grows 

Who was the man to do such a loving thing?
An entertainer who was always up for joking 
He was adored and idolised by so many 
I'm referring to the legendary Jack Benny  

Nearly fifty years now since he died and gone
Jack had comic timing that was second to none
A lovely thing for him to be remembered by
No doubt his wife Mary had a tear in her eye


Alas, a Pandemic On Earth

Alas! A pandemic on earth;
Spread over the earth like a counterpane
And feasts with no respect for personality.
Has the end come?

What manner of pandemic is this
That humiliated the world powers
And buried the head of idolised humans?
Has the end come?

Alas! A pandemic on earth.
The rich live in fear;
The proud ones became wingless.
Has the end come?

What shall I do to protect myself against thee?
Shall I turn hand washing to ritual?
Shall I humble myself before the creator?
Has the end come?

Alas! A pandemic on earth
Whose effect will soon become history
And trigger man to prepare his life's account.
Has the end come?

Premium Member Artifice To Edifice

Oh how we value artifice;
Indeed we'll bow and 'scrape'

Upon a stage of the falsest rage We hang; 
on every word and break

The props are  real to viewers 
the plots we know by heart

They’re lionized and idolised 
most people of these arts

We imbue them with much value
Though some are not so good.'

There seems an understanding
That the softer life is best

Though of those that there 'labour' 
 seem limp wristed in the main

However this easy life it seems
Was the choice of harder brains.

©Joe Maverick 25-2-2018

A Dance With a Prancing Prawn Should Be Held At Dawn With Birdsongs

The idiosyncrasies of a semi idolised biscuit is often symbolised by riotous clapping sessions. By camels who love to crunch. But a crunch is neither a cream, a crevasse, a cape nor is it a crammed carton. So in fact is it better to rise then fall or fall then rise? In many a disguarded apron lies the epitome of expertise in experimental expeditions. But not whilst cleaning out the shower for that brings forth notes and vast arias of synchronised sounds from the sink. A snoring is often akin to the sweet sounds from a cast iron twenty foot long boar. Whose epic dreams of parachuting are often thwarted by the passing of the seasonal shrouded shams. But this is never to be released by mr shampoo bottle as shampoo bottles are too simple to simplify and to simplify is to simply signify significant stirring sticks. And there is the glow from the morning brew. Winking. Waiting. Z harpsichordist Z at 33 feet looking for 8 pairs of socks. X c v b q x and a big rotating Z


Commandments of the Lord

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As was written, on Mount Sinai
As Moses stood on high, commandments of virtue
A shower of blessings, to bestow upon
As for the people, they adhered not
Unguided minds, an idolised calf of gold
Yet to unfold, in a moment of anger
Stones thrust down, sin was all around, though forgiveness abound
Two further tablets, inscriptions anew
Early on the mount, forty days and nights
At one with the father
Both food and drink – the absence of
From such a return, proceeding down
A glow of brilliance, radiant face
Of whom could stare
Dispel at once
Covering veil
Of such commands, in accordance with
Prosperity stands
To stray from the path, affliction coincides
Worship the Lord
Assemble the Tabernacle
With sacrificial offerings, designated ark
Glory be filled
A time to remain
The cloud has arisen
Journey on

Written by Geraldine Taylor ©

It's All About the Rage

You hate men

You don’t wanna exist anymore

Men are all about the rage

And you are just like them, just like them

C'mon hit that weak woman

And then say that you hate yourself

I love you and you loved me sometimes

Without feeling, living your life day by day

You are just like my father

Just like all men

Please, come back again with a peace

My mother idolised my father

And now I idolise you like a little fool

You think you haven’t hurt me yet

And you won’t hurt me never

But venom is already going through my veins

I love you and you loved me sometimes

Without feeling, living your life day by day

You are just like my father

Just like all men

Please, come back again with a peace

Sometimes quiet is violent

Over thinking is a form of a fear

And there is always some madness in love

I love you and you loved me sometimes

Without feeling, living your life day by day

You are just like my father

Just like all men

Please, come back again with a peace

Nothing At All

You cant imagine what you've done to me,
The girl who once loved to love
Now doesnt love at all.
All my beliefs and dreams you've shattered 
Fairy tales and love? They dont even matter.
You dont know how it feels,
When the person you've idolised turns out to be a myth.
You've emptied me of all my hatered,
 for you 'nothing' is the only feeling i feel.
I dont know how you even look at yourself,
Dont you see all the decieve and lies ? 
The sins you committed under the blue skies?
'You love her ' you told me..
Where was that love when beneath you i was writhing? 
You never promised me the world ,
But you could have atleast given me the truth.
Had you been half of the man i thought you to be,
I would have fought for you nail and tooth.
But now i lie broken and hurt ,
Not your fault i was just too easy to dessert.
I wish i could gather all that wasted love
And give it to the one who deserves ,
But because of you that wont be the case.
Because the girl who once loved too much 
Now doesnt feel at all
Nothing at all.

Felis Domestica

Revered, worshipped and idolised
For many a century past,
This model of faultless divinity
Continues to capture our hearts.


Clandestine, profound and bewitching
Epitome of pride and decorum, 
A splendid work of nature’s fine art
Enlightens our lives with its aura.

Enchanting eyes reflective in light
During stealthy nocturnal ramblings, 
Carnivorous stalker of boundless endurance,
A feline vampire of unfortunate prey.

This diminutive tiger of domestic dwelling,
Switches from aloof predator to loyal 
Ally at the crossing of the threshold,
Expressing contentment with a deep vibrating purr.

Worth of An Icon

(For late Mrs Stella Obasanjo)

You are a paragon of beauty
Yes, a maiden of honour
Your steps are held true
In limelight of media

Your translucent fair skin 
Held many an eye
Your strawberry-coloured lips
Captivated, salivated many hearts

An icon of substance
Of the Abebe breed
The worth of your simplicity?
In Aso villa lives.

You are a paragon of beauty
Yes, a maiden of honour...

The stronghold of that rock
The mother of all
Mother of few
The eyes of one,
All have eyes.

Tick-tock, tock-tick;
Your clock tocked at sixty
Sixty awesome years
Beautiful, inspiring ones

...your steps are held true
In limelight of nations.

One final TOCK shook Nigeria
Green-white-green
Lay still on the floor
Sixty seconds flat
Sixty awesome years

Dragging nothingness to your grave
O fair lady brave
Nothing did you crave
So much as perfect beauty.

Yes, a paragon of beauty
Truly a maiden of honour
Your steps are idolised
Sweet Obasanjo’s bride...

Premium Member Appreciation

Desire to survive, dream to 
thrive,
Everybody needs appreciation,
And if so do I , what's wrong ? 

My parents adored me dear,to 
absolute,
Graced me with ideas, shaped 
my future,
I appreciate.

My siblings embraced me in 
emity,
Making me witty and crazy,
I appreciate.

My confidant pal, my convoy,
Pioneered me to prosper,
I appreciate.

My companion stood by me,
Through all thick and thin,
I appreciate .

My little boy painted the blue,
In a perfect hue,
I appreciate.

I endeavoured to my supreme,
Idolised with all my passion,
Oh God ! Bestow upon me
Some divine appreciation!!


By Upma Sharma 
25/05/13

Awarded 2nd place win

T.R.I.B.U.T.E. T.O. R.A.B.B.Y.(Accross Poetry)

The greatest Bard of all Scotia.
Reigning immortal king O peasant familia.
Idealistic and unique commentator.
Born to magic words of any orator.
United differences empathised.
Tuned to the masses and idolised.
Eternal gratitude to our Rabbie.
Tickling our attitude for a party.
Oor Robert Burns O the Celtic.
Rhymer of yarns and purest magic.
Auld lang syne and Scots wha hae.
Beautiful member of the human ways.
Born here and forever after.
Your name is The Bard of Scottish patter.

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