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Love, version 1: reflections on personal experiences of love, inspired by reading bell hooks

Wounded by its lack
Distrustful of it 
Inured to its absence 
In thrall to its allure
Fooled by its simulacrum
Estranged from it 
Paralysed by fear of losing it
Inexorably exposed to it 
Resolved against it 
Consumed by longing for it
A scholar to its foreign texts 
A slave to its compulsions 
Compelled to search for it
Forever 
Hopeful

I Am the Blue Marlin


 I was made
To venture undulating time
 And chase the tides forever facing forward 
  Through glinting waves by unknown shores 

I migrate 
The oceans’ warm currents for 
Thousands of miles yearly,  continuing
Always onward, always embraced by water

I am
The mighty blue marlin mirroring a sight
Of the blue heavens above, divinely
I was created to breathe and to glide

As this ocean life’s own, 
Yet by His magnificent, pure Holy design, 
I am
Powerful, challenging, defying death often

I leap 
Above the rolling waves into radiant light
As water gleaming streams off my sides
Over the scars of hooks still there by fishers’ tries

I am a blue marlin
Born and destined to survive for decades
In sparkling waves observed by my sparkling eyes,
Loving the eternal swim through His created
   Waters that brought our planet to life.

Sky Hooks Hang Themselves

Will the sky topple inward
or the hills heap upwards
it I do not make these symbols
upon a snow-white field?

Will a poet turn to stone
before my eyes
or will a jackdaw caw
pointlessly into a gale?

And now the thin thread
thickens
becomes a full gutted snake 
laying across a dusty road

or is it a rope
knotted and curling
as obtuse as any 
imponderable script?


Hooks

i have business here
not in your world but mine

your hat is hanging on a different hook
when the wind blows
both hats fly in different sky-scapes

if you dream of this
i dream of that

see you later
when the wind settles down
on a planet
neither of us belong to

Sky Hooks

SKYHOOKS

They pulled me up when 
I was mired in a quagmire
of rules and regulations,
and helped me parry
the thrust of a bayonet
in the heat of a battle 
we never could win.
They showed me the path 
to everlasting love
when no one believed 
it could ever endure.
They guided my heart
on how to grow old
as nothing but a pile of dust.
Skyhooks can’t be seen
or touched, but they’re there
as sure as the nose on your face.

                  Milton P. Ehrlich 199 Christie St. Leonia, N.J. 07605
                  [email protected]

Premium Member S-Hooks

S-hooks upon the lake,
Swimming swans gracing water
With their presence in June.

A stage of
Graceful performers
In a ballet.


Hooks

I wrote this song as a sort of self-therapy. I've only just started up writing again, so I'd really really love criticism, in as much detail as possible if you have it or feel like giving it. Only one rule: please be polite and keep your criticisms within reason. 

 (Verse 1) 
We pay for brand new faces,
Cause they don't like our own 

They say that it's not good enough,
So buy a better one 

We're dressing up our pain,
In silks and five star shoes 

Treat things as if they're people

Now people just get used

(Chorus) 

The shiny things that draw our hearts are vultures in disguise,
Circling 'round our heads until it's time to strike 

Without a sound, come shooting down, like bullets in the night 

And we're to numb and drunk off pleasure,
To look up at the sky 


(Verse 2) 

We party with our shades on,
The world is bleeding rose

Careful not to take them off though, 
You're saner with them on 

(Chorus repeats) 



(Bridge) 

Instrumental 



(Chorus repeats final time)

Fish Hooks and High Heels

Standing along side souls,
You sit here where no one
ever sits.


Trembling dead roses
lost there beauty,
as women sing songs of being alone,
for all of love
is unfinished.


when it was quiet
you knew it was over.

Space-Age Hooks and Barbs

It has been DECADES!

And yet, for some ridiculous reason, we 
still choose to TIE our shoes and
BUTTON our trousers, ZIP our
blouses.

How ridiculous.

When Man first invented the wheel, do 
you suppose that there were some naysayers who said;
"I'm still going to drag my loads through the dirt on a rope. It was 
good enough for my father and by gawd it's good enough for me!"

I doubt it.

So. (BUTTONS FLYS LACES)
Why do we stoop to such Medieval methods of
attatchment Today?
Who knows. But I eagerly await the day that Velcro finally
gets the credit it rightfully deserves.

Boys Ii - Worms, Hooks and Foreplay

the boys were lazy
except when they wanted something
like your car
or food
or sex
oh yes sex
was a good motivater
for attention and detention
good thing I had a good appetite and could
match them one for one
boys were lazy
but trolling
if a girl could do all the work
that would be fine
that would be perfect
sure I'll be your boyfriend
when can we have sex
We knew the boys
with the experience, they were confident
they knew how to get it
and oh god
we wanted to be gotton
we would have stood in line
but they never knew it
we were just as curious as they were
so bating the hook was foreplay for sure
just like anything else in life
that gets you what you want
the

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