Herniated Poems | Examples


Premium MemberSatan and My Leg

Satan wants my leg
    The right one
He's been trying
    for years

First when as a child
    in Gonja Hospital
Butt injection smack
    in sciatic nerve

The pain - oh my god
    flexed my knee
Dr. Lubia with a board
    straightened it

Then an excited preteen
    on class excursion
Tomato plant in Pwalugu
    leg in drain gutter

The osteo that mom treated
    with prayers & tears
Anyamu the medicine man
    with boiling herbs

Today the herniated disc
    pain - oh my god
The drop foot and more
    L4-L5 L3-L4

Satan wants my right leg
    he wont get it
Try as hard as he can
    I'll still keep it
Categories: herniated, africa, pain,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberTwo Old Buzzards

Two old buzzards stand
High in a dead slick pine tree
Vision limited

Two old people speed in pick-up
One turns head sees polka-dots

No chance of seeing
Flamingoes anywhere near
Polka-dotted stars appear 

Turning my head like an owl
Herniated disc cracks loud
Categories: herniated, life,
Form: Tanka


Premium MemberThe Note

Your eyes are too dodgey
Your hearing is shot
Your body just ain't got
The means to stay hot
Your back's herniated
You can't bend when you dress
To tie your shoe-laces
Will cause you distress

Your intake's been clogging
Your choke's out too long
If you don't write it down, son
You'll sure get it wrong
Your knee joint's a mess, kid
Your ankles are weak
Your wrists cause you pain
When you move them, they squeak

Just write me a letter, doc
Tell 'em I can
They don't know the best of me
The man that I am
I worked at the strangest
And toughest of tasks
Just sign on the line, doc
That's all that I ask

Your lungs have been scarred
By the fumes and the dust
I'd leave you outside
But I'm scared that you'd rust
You don't seem to fit in
Your undoing's been done
Your two steps behind, son
Your race has been run

You're over the hill, kid
Too long in the tooth
If you were a horse
You're the one that they'd shoot
And then if I do
Sure where will you go
There's millions as qualified
Isn't that so
Categories: herniated, conflict, emotions, work,
Form: Rhyme

Oh, To Be Young

Oh, to be young again
To do the things I did then
To run and play, dance and sing
With not a worry about anything

Oh to be young once more
Before middle age crept in the door
Before the pull of gravity
Made these wrinkles on my knee

Oh, to be young and in my prime
Happy-go-lucky all of the time
All my dreams were ahead of me
Knowing just what I wanted to be

Oh, to be young an physically fit
Doing things just for the fun of it
Crazy and wild and taking risks
Before I had herniated disks

Oh, to be young and so smart
No worries about a broken heart
Thinking life would always be
The way it was for you and me

Oh, to be young and free
I would not go back, you see
Unless I knew what I know now
Mistakes I made, I'd fix somehow
Categories: herniated, childhood, funny, nostalgia,
Form: Couplet
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