Just for fun. I saw two buzzards in a dead pine tree yesterday and turn my head to keep following them for an idea for a poem came to mind but then I started seeing stars and polka dots from putting pressure on a herniated disc in my neck. LOL..
Two old buzzards stand High in a dead slick pine tree Vision limited Two old people speed in pick-up One turns head sees polka-dots No chance of seeing Flamingoes anywhere near Polka-dotted stars appear Turning my head like an owl Herniated disc cracks loud
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