Demerit Poems | Examples


Premium Member Comforter Indwells

Comforter indwells within us
He's the Holy Spirit
Convicting us of sins and thus
Of each dark demerit

When we disobey God
With untruth we are shod
Need to confess we're flawed

Hark the warning bells
Comforter indwells

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Comforter indwells believers
Do not quench His soft voice
Be not misled by deceivers
There is always a choice

Forsake dark desires' clutch
Give heed to God's soft touch
Confess, repent as such

Overcome sin spells
Comforter indwells



Form: Double Quietus

19th April 2022




And Samuel said, Hath the Lord as great delight in burnt offerings and sacrifices, as in obeying the voice of the Lord? Behold, to obey is better than sacrifice, and to hearken than the fat of rams. - 1 Samuel 22:15

And when He (the Comforter/ Holy Spirit) is come, He will reprove (convict) the world of sin, and of righteousness, and of judgment. - John 16:8

He that covereth his sins shall not prosper: but whoso confesseth and forsaketh them shall have mercy. - Proverbs 28:13



For Unseeking Seeker's "Soul Betrayal" Contest
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Untidy Pluto Demerit

Pluto made a dwarf
not for being far too small
precinct too cluttered
Form: Haiku


Premium Member Demerit

demerit points
with each unkind thought
guilt at heaven's gate



posted on July 29, 2018
Form: Senryu

Premium Member I Think I Get It Now

No therapist wanted to do any kind of counseling for B School, which to my home is quite near.
I was frankly bewildered that three of my friends, Susan, Tad, and Sun had told me they would never come back here.
B school looked lovely; the grounds were impeccably beautiful - flowers, wind spinners, and fountains with water ever so clear.
The reception area was colorful, welcoming, pretty even, a tribute to whoever designed it so dear.
I wondered why everyone I had spoken to who had been here hated it so, it was totally unclear.
The dean of students was lovely, smart, engaging, a good listener; a woman who seemed totally dear.
"I would like Tricia Tee take you around, "Dean told me, "So you can see what a ship-shape school we run here. 
We had no sooner got to the first locker when a child started to walk past, and I yelled,"Mere!"
My former student looked up, scared, frightened, mesmerized, unable to move, hypnotized by fear.
"That's a demerit for you, Mrs. K, and a demerit for Mere," Tricia said snippily, writing it down in a notebook she had near.
Um...
I think I get it now.
Form: Rhyme

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