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Negative aura

Harsh tongue lashings and judgments.
Incurring demerit points with each unkind thought.
Guilt awaits at heaven's gate.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2026

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2018

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Andrea Dietrich

July 29, 2018 at 5:09 PM

I think we should not be so hard on ourselves! However, I really like this one of yours, Line

July 29, 2018 at 7:15 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Andrea.

July 29, 2018 at 1:00 PM

And there you'll be forgiven, Lin, for you are aware. So much said in so little.

July 29, 2018 at 4:58 PM

Not really if you continue to do it knowingly. Nice try, Sunlite. Line xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

July 29, 2018 at 12:08 PM

Hee hee, aka karma, I'm not religious, but (womb)man, do I love this one!

July 29, 2018 at 12:30 PM

Thank you so much, Maureen, for your lovely visit and comment.

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