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Unkind thoughts and deeds tallied
Demerit points implicitly accrued throughout a lifetime
Belated guilt at heaven’s gate



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 6:46 PM
definitely belated guilt or karma or both :-)
Gauthier Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 6:58 PM
too little too late ~ best to plan ahead
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