Deadweight Poems | Examples


Premium MemberAlong With The Thunder

in the corner
of a blanched bungalow 
sits a self-portrait: 
loose bantu knots 
the color of volcanic ash 
her living nightmare 
   it was so much-
stampeding rain 
wild winds
the icon of tropical thunder
with summer lightning
   but the spite of ash 
threatened the fete
smashed the sun
morning had broken
   an island smeared 
like God had face-palmed us
judgment for another place
another people 
resting on your gables 
the deadweight of ash 
crashing queenie's 
garden party
The Lord is come.
   handling her Scriptures
squeezing the Holy Spirit 
out of print 
was she wholly confessed,
to be due robes of white 
satin? 
  the sun reawakened, 
                ash washed away, passes 
  through her window 
  where she sits 
cornered
Categories: deadweight, culture, depression, fear, god,
Form: Free verse

Prima Facie

Prima Facie
adjective
based on the first impression; accepted as correct until proved otherwise.

so i accept
what choice do I have
i'm such a big fan
i love you so much
you are pure art

so i look past the downward glance of your eyes

Prima Facie
adverb
on the first impression

at first
i thought you were beautiful
but it's not
you're not
per se

it's just that you prefer the pain of others
because guilt is a solid replacement for anguish
you like to see me get hit
get struck down
because you can offer a hand down to me
but i cannot climb up to you

and i'm sorry
if my deadweight was too heavy
when you gripped my body after striking me down
Categories: deadweight, pain,
Form: Free verse


Snow Bird

SNOW BIRD

In the dead of winter comes great beauty, 
with broody storms and the elegant snow. 
The hoarfrost spears hang icy and fluty,
like aliens in guise as they stretch and grow. 
Crisp raw are the branches rasping the sky,
as wind comes in a bluster to disturb.
The shadow creatures den under the sigh, 
from the deadweight of snow they perturb. 
The beauty is sparse and simply at peace, 
a waltz in winter that comes on the fly.
The white blizzard storm, we know it will cease, 
stopped by the echo of red bird’s soft cry.
Ruby in starlight with ice on his wing,
red bird dreams of Sun and the thaw in spring.

December 5th, 2019

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Categories: deadweight, december, nature, seasons, winter,
Form: Sonnet

Benevolence Fund

For several ages 
Our relationship can be compared 
To a benevolence fund 
Always seeking a hand out 
Never offering a hand up 
The scales were never balanced 
On one scale counterbalanced in pure gold 
With dreams not at all foretold 
The other measured in aluminum foil
With the value no equivalent 
Of a penny being sold 
A charity misfortune 
You have been 
Perpetually seeking help
Because you only focused on yourself 
Which delivered me into 
The grasp of death 
I bet you regret 
That I was able to come back 
Uncondensed in full effect 
Only to have you 
Be a deadweight 
For that I’ve developed 
Emotions of loathing and hate 
And this is because of our first date
I should have known 
That I would become 
An expert philanthropist 
In contributing to the poor 
You always requested more 
Materialistic donations 
And now I’ve made a head start 
To take off and run 
So I will not have to be the chairman 
Of your benevolent fund
Categories: deadweight, abuse, betrayal,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberValley of the Shadow of Death

VALLEY OF THE SHADOW OF DEATH

          Death blew his misty breath at me 
      And I trembled in the cold,
  Feelings frozen, I stood affixed,
My heart encrusted with salty crystals...
At that point, the blanket of God's promises
   Covered me, empowered me
      And warmed my soul from within.

          Death placed his heavy hand on me 
      And I crumbled under the load
  Crushed and crestfallen, I staggered,
My being burdened with the deadweight...
At that moment, the strength of God's presence
   Secured me, reassured me
      And sustained my spirit with hope.




03.15.18
Categories: deadweight, death, faith, hope,
Form: Free verse


Weightless

those beaten eyes glazed with a film

of bitter almond

shakily receiving her post partum reward

of a broken thyroid and a lumpy lack of form

 

once upon a time she lived

a lighter life

‘til procreation drubbed her good

these days she’s flesh in a black bag

of tightly straining clothes

 

mother-love keeps her upright

dead on her feet several months ago

but no-one’s noticed she’s gone off

under the wafts of the morning bacon

 

was that a giggle or a sob

or perhaps both, for things past

caring she is but it won’t help her now

as the hormones take a dive

and psychiatry pricks up its ears

 

still her occult self eludes her

skips laughing through months of therapy

peeps out behind the tumble dryer

to whisper “take the pills”

 

they want to help, they cannot help

those people who mean well

there is no holding dock

for deadweight mum

she sails away with breakfast things left clean

performs a joyful whale-dive, drifts

unseen

 

©C Watkins All rights reserved.
Categories: deadweight, body, depression, mother, sad,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberA Necessary Evil

Have you never tasted hunger
Tread the alleys with the stealthy
Cried the tears of someone younger
While you dined among the wealthy
Shuffled through the papers
Through the pages of despair
Embittered by the capers
Neglect, hanging in the air
Step with me through the sadness
Let me open up your eyes
Weave, careful past the madness
Past the sorrow and the lies
 
The chains of bondage tighten
No future's in your sights
Do you wish to be enlightened
To embrace those dizzy heights
Piled high upon the pyre
The lost and the insane
The corpses piling higher
Entombed in the mundane
The root of all that's evil
A meaning to their end
More money than they'll ever need
More wealth than they can spend
 
The scales of justice tipping
With the deadweight of their sins
The wings of Angels ripping
As the final count begins
The boatman treads the water
As you wade the river Styx
The silver in your pocket
For to score the Devils fix
Lost in this sea of torment
While Hell exacts its toll
Your name is etched, inclement
On His register of souls
Categories: deadweight, corruption, evil, feelings, poverty,
Form: Rhyme

Be Alive

Headlong I fall into a trap
The ascend back a slippery slope
My hands absorb the weight
My feet are deadweight
The puffs of exhaustion, 
Sink with all intension
Trying to save myself
Despite my ending life
I still have so much to live for
Thoughts never considered before
Appointments, golf days
Alone, I say my prayers

To live and not to die
I’ve failed life’s gift, it's singular idea
I’d propagate my survival, if granted 
To theirs unappreciated, I’m alive, shouted!
Precious life, now not enough
To pull me out of a pit this tough

I walked alone
A one army man
For help to come, I cry
A lifeline, a rope to take me home, I try
Categories: deadweight, appreciation, life, wisdom,
Form: Rhyme

Albert Schnauzer

Should i worry for her
if She holds a knife
but with crimson intent?
if She spreads velvet
of thick consistency
unto her loaf of bread,
but pauses with a shaking hand
tightening gripe around the butter
“harmless” silver?

Goodmorning.
i saw her words fall like
deadweight
then hit the ground
denting even marble.
i didn’t flinch one bit
i’ve seen this before.
Her eyes blink but they do not see
Her chest heaves but not for air;
for troubles.
Standing on my hind legs
i tried to converse
But all i let out was a muffled whine
She gives me a reassuring look
then pats my head
Everything is going to be alright.

Should i worry if She leans too far out the window?
Or whenever She sits on the ledge?
Should i worry if the last time
when her smile was empty
She took thirty white cylinders
before going to bed?

The last time this happened
She slept for three days
and never awoke to feed me.
I damn near starved
to Death!


S.M. Alexis
Categories: deadweight,
Form: Free verse

Are You Happy Now?

How are you gonna collect the beauty when it turns to dust?

Are you gonna chase every particle as it blows away in the wind?

Or are you gonna let it fall into a puddle and rust?

You say that you’re sorry, but apologies are worthless.

You should have thought about this when you used to leave me breathless.

Now all you have to offer me is a bad taste in my mouth

And scarred memories of times we used to share.

But that all changed when you walked away and said you didn’t care.

Well apparently you changed your mind.

But it’s a little too late.

You should have thought about that before you left me behind like I was deadweight.

I’ll admit, the times we shared were great, but things have changed.

I hope you’re happy with the way things turned out

Because I am without a doubt, as Happy as I’ll ever be

Without you next to me.
Categories: deadweight, dedication, friendship, happiness, life,
Form: Rhyme

Iv. a Flytrap Slams Shut

A Flytrap slams shut
					Blink
			of
				an
		eye

And a stone
			splash
		sink
			at 	twilight

Down to the
	core
		of
			essence

Silent and formless the bottom
close eyes
strain to hear
		listen
			listen
				ah!
There is your heartbeat
	A	pair	of
				deadweight
						arms
					wrapped	around

A Parasite!
		the 	Flytrap
					closing
						
	in
						
		on
						
			yr
						
				heart

Once invisible, now bathed in the 
spotlight 
for an instant!
Kill It! 
Rip 	out 	the 	roots! 
No 
remorse! 
There! 				Aha!
The 
Thing 						
is 
dead!
and 	now 		you 			are
						ffree
Categories: deadweight, confusion, imagination, introspection, lost
Form: Free verse
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