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When I can, I try to find time to write?

My days are very busy with an eight-
Month-old boy and a small Yorkie.
Before the day is done, I  feel kind of dorky.
I start my day walking the dog, feeding the baby, cleaning, cooking,
And a full-time playmate to this little boy;  to him I am his toy.
Having almost no time, even when the cuckoo clock chimes,
I lie down and rest while he sleeps, 
or I will feel crappy; I have to refresh myself.

Reading is one of my pass-times, now all of my books are on a shelf.

On a warm day, I put him and the dog in the stroller,
Like a good little soldier.
I walk them down to the park with my feet achy
And sit under a dawn redwood tree.
The dog runs around,
While baby and I enjoy the cool spring
Breeze as it teases with its coolness
And plays with the baby's hair with its kindness
Tousling it around. He closes his eyes and takes a deep breath
In, like water running over his head while taking a bath.
I feel glad, but also mad, and sad,
I should have brought my pencil and writing pad.







7/6/2019

Premium Member The Trees

The Trees
Dawn Redwood
Golden needles
Grace accentuated
Bare limbs
Hold snow 
Like loose cloak
Spring green comes forth
Nest appear in safe place
Eggs hatch

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