The Trees

The Trees Dawn Redwood Golden needles Grace accentuated Bare limbs Hold snow Like loose cloak Spring green comes forth Nest appear in safe place Eggs hatch
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Tsiluma Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 2:00 AM
Lovely descriptions Sara! I love the thought of the tree as a haven habitat. Nicely done!
Kovrlija Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 10:53 AM
I really think that you are very talented.
Horne Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 6:30 AM
I love this one, Sara - I'll have to try this form.
Liwayway Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 12:18 AM
an awesome write friend Sara...i like it. thanks for sharing..Good day always!! :)
Grisetti Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 8:35 PM
A splendid write. Thanks for sharing tonight.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 11:55 AM
AN AWESOME CANVAS OF DESCRIPTION OF THE TREES SARA .. MAGNIFICENT WORD VIEW .. GOOD LUCK IF FOR CONTEST .. THERE R SO MANY LUV ..
Akhtar Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 10:25 AM
You have the ability to create miracles from words. It is a treat to read your poems. Thanks Sara for your most encouraging comments on my poem The Bright Star. You have made my day. You are not only an eminent poet but also a wonderful person. I have to learn much from you. Regards. -Farida
Song Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 5:29 AM
It is so wonderful how this cinqku unravels towards the end building with natural momentum...very nice wk, Sara! Spring will be here in no time...luv, gwendolen
Mcadams Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 11:42 PM
Nicely written! Love the flow and images!
Onclaud Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 6:07 PM
ohh, i like the progression of imagery here, sara, and the final punch of eggs hatching.. baby birds!!... ;) fabulous write!..:) huggs
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October 19, 2012 at 5:37 PM
Sara, I'm getting a nice view from here... that tree is very pretty,,, nice way with the expression of an incoming life... xox~pd
Sivey Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 3:49 PM
I love the fact that you excelled while using such a difficult form, Cinqku! You did masterfully with this write! I really enjoyed this delightful and fully wondrous poem! What a spectacular piece my friend, Great Work!!
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