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Criticizing Poems - Poems about Criticizing


Criticizing a Coat
Please, refuse the disguised rag That wearer still makes a hag. Be bold to say “No, thank you” While leaving “Later, see you! A coat of curious color That offers the eye pallor, Long threadbare to soonest sag And straight goes into a bag…. Delight not in robe you’ve got, Last wearer had liked it not; Underneath its arms ink blot And on its left breast...

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Categories: criticizing, allusion, analogy, clothes, image,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member On Criticizing Others
Rein in those opportunities to criticize Think of all the good things to be said Remember to see through others’ eyes. Or sometimes simply resort to sighs. In disagreement, merely shake your head Rein in those opportunities to criticize. Be a bigger person, even if you must disguise Displeasures weighing on you heavy as lead, Remember to see through others’ eyes. If you announce...

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Categories: criticizing, anti bullying, how i
Form: Villanelle



Premium Member Criticizing My Stuff
Had to erase the chin, then the left eye. Right eye looks wrong now. Erasing it too. Erase. Erase. Erase. Erase. Why do I always draw so deeply? I know better, and yet I consistently make this mistake. Redraw the eye. Erase the other one. Redraw both of them. Shoot. The right eye was better the first time. Erase. Erase. Redraw, redraw, redraw. Everything is worse now. Pick...

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Categories: criticizing, introspection,
Form: Light Verse
Keep Criticizing Me
Keep telling me I was wrong, Because you thought you were right. You believed you were smarter than me, You thought you were better, You are dead wrong! Always trying to make me perfect! You want me to be your soldier, And follow your rules! I won’t follow anymore! You are not worth it! You are disgusting! Hopeless! And you will always be alone… Because you never...

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Categories: criticizing, abuse, betrayal, feelings, hate,
Form: Free verse
Criticizing Teens
This is another age of amazing discovery, and teens are drown into its magical light by taking giant steps to keep up with technology; and yet older folks stare at them with fright. I won't get angry, or laugh at them and criticize, but they do certain things that aren't allowed; parents don't provoke your children to anger, understand... by giving...

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Categories: criticizing, conflict, introspection, parents, technology,
Form: Rhyme




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