Keep Criticizing Me
Keep telling me I was wrong,
Because you thought you were right.
You believed you were smarter than me,
You thought you were better,
You are dead wrong!
Always trying to make me perfect!
You want me to be your soldier,
And follow your rules!
I won’t follow anymore!
You are not worth it!
You are disgusting!
Hopeless!
And you will always be alone…
Because you never cared!
You never wanted me to be anything!
Just your little toy!
Forget your rules!
Forget you…
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