Concussive Poems | Examples


Rumblestone

Rumbling earth offers it's own baseline
Bones of the underworld crackle thunderously
Concussive forces driving Gaia's ecstasy.
The man watches as her eyes crackle menacingly
Mortal flirtations lusting for battle
Stone and Crystal, immense and fragile.
Booming, resonating, radiating, alive,
Conjured rumblings otherworldly
Each threaten alternately
To burst his chest
Or to implode it.
With each pulse, each soul-searing challenge of her gaze, 
Every aching breath
Yet he remains, agonizingly still
And there is nought but to wait for her to move first.
It is a reaper's die cast in darkness
Uncalculated gamble of unwitting fortune
So he must wait.
Her almar might yet give a wary soul rest
Hiraeth, and hope.
Or unmercifully rend him hapless.
So lingers his being, languishing in exquisite agony
Hoping desperately, and rumbling as eldritch runes 'neath horrors unknown.
Categories: concussive, courage,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberAssessment a Sigh of Relief

The yellow scraps perform a thrill during fierce storms. 
The breeze turbine is a lofty pattern within local farms. 
Amazed, I can spot concussive impacts in the wet stones. 
Bursting a ball of fire to tackle to impel amply atones.

A golden ovoid floats through unfathomable seas.
In symbiosis, green clusters wave in the gentle breeze. 
Portentous obscurities better the mighty sweep. 
During this time, igniting was lit on cremated sheep. 

Misty areas are evolving naturally to be wildly small. 
Efficient turbines humming, the trees shriek as well. 
The dappled shade of padded blossom subtly changed. 
A tentative mid-year sunset will have utterly emerged. 

Twirled, observing the shadow in youngster-like awe. 
A rare bird split a point worm and devoured him raw.


Written: November 15, 2021
Categories: concussive, analogy, appreciation, autumn, metaphor,
Form: Sonnet


Power

Black diamond, fools gold,
overpriced and undersold.

Falling vices, rising prices,
and all the things that we are told.

Percussive concussion, concussive percussion,
endless discussion.
 
A round of applause for revealing your flaws,
your sin serves to feed them their spin.
If you had our fears, if we gave you our hopes,
we'd devour ourselves from within.
Categories: concussive, power,
Form: I do not know?

Dusk Covers Wwi Trench

As dusk their line visibly bows
Cropped heads beneath mounds fold
Glum shadows through addle fields row

Listless turrets sprout o'er demarcated woe
Sallowed eyes in bleary sockets rolled
As dusk their line visibly bows

Shocked ears to concussive barrage close
As sighs from clogged lungs are paroled
Raspy shadows through addle fields row

Smoldering smoke in singed heavens glows
Vaporous cloud o'er scout binoculars scrolled
As dusk their line visibly bows

Each rifle into a sterile stack goes
Rumbling caissons to dark corners doled
Steel shadows through addle fields row

The fog of war o'er dazed minds flows
An eerie wind curdles each silent mold
As dusk their line visibly bows
Wispy shadows through addle fields row
Categories: concussive, war,
Form: Villanelle

Wwi Trench

Treading lightly through snaking, 
muddy trench
Squeaking boots with slippery 
grooves synch
A mass of matted flesh bares its 
rotten stench
Thirsting maggots, doting flies 
cannot quench
No rustic accoutrements adorn, not 
even a bench
Deep longing for warm touches of 
caring mother, practiced wench
But only cold, rancid rain does 
shriveled limbs drench
In crowded hovel, selfishly hoarding 
space, miserly grinch
On the perimeter, attentively 
guarding every blood-soaked inch
At the sound of concussive fire, 
conditioned body doesn't flinch
Chiseled teeth in tandem solemnly 
do clinch
Only my spent gut, as churning 
butter does wrench
With dutiful vigor, watching every 
strand of demarcated pinch
At the slightest, forward motion, 
my hawk eyes squinch
Categories: concussive, adventure, angst,
Form: Rhyme


Civil War Battle

Pulsating honor doth corroded hearts impound
A blustery breeze echoes cries from each, preceding battleground
A recurring, eager parade of reporters, gawkers freely roam distant mound
Below, fatigued, tidy mass of steeled infantry; to death's throes bound
Neighing horses conditioned to mayhem the pageantry doth confound
On opposite ridges, mounted turrets prepared hell's fury to expound
On signal, a synchronized, concussive chorus doth its dark melody propound
Scraps of metal shards initiate; commencing another, toilsome round
After lengthy barrage, wits collected a more lethal volley to stound
Familiar, urgent order to charge christens hallowed ground
With youthful ardor a wide-eyed bugler doth the bridled expanse unbound
Shrieking rancor from recoiling rifles; a familiar anthem doth resound
Recurring cacophonous medley, weathered nerves drowned
Once more, a mass of flesh surges into the abyss with mortal hopes crowned
Anon, shattered limbs; gory wounds misery's cache compound
Categories: concussive, adventure, death, devotion,
Form: Monorhyme

Ghosts of the Battlefield

Listless touches
graze me
    as I pass
over the wooden bridge,
clouds dancing
   before a three-quarter moon,
about me
       misty faces form
             and dissipate
in the blink of an eye.

      The musty, briny scent
of the marsh
   hangs on the air
      like a heart spoken
broken promise,
tattered flags
        wave in the mist
   on this deathly still night.

         As I enter
the uneven field, 
   images
     of bayonet strikes
  and muzzle blasts
    float before my eyes,
I can almost hear
    the cannon fire,
  smell the acidic smoke,
      feel the concussive blast
rattle through my body.

      Swirls of blue and grey 
  pass in the fog
         as I skim
the edge of the woods,
    off in the darkness,
                  on a hill,
    with a rusting wrought iron gate
crosses are silhouetted
        on the night’s canvas.
Categories: concussive, death, dedication, war
Form: Free verse
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