Colorblindness Poems | Examples


I told you right?

I told you right?
That love and support would make me alright.
Didn't even cared about the shedded blood,
Because all I ever wished was to be loved.
The bar of expectations was literal below the ground,
Until someone came and actually made me feel found.
Earlier, I used to get lost,
And kept waiting while getting covered in the frost.
Someone came and broke that shell,
And pulled me out of that bleak hell.
My soul was hurting,
From the cheerfulness this world was flaunting.
This was coming from someone,
Who has lived in darkness and got it's entire soul burned.
The bruises still hurt,
But somehow they seem to disappear when someone leans it's comfort.
Words won't be enough to talk about drastic change,
And an uncertain life arrangement,
The change, a single thing brought in my life,
When I was on the verge of tearing it apart with the knife.
I'll always be grateful to that someone who removed me from this phase of dark and blue,
Didn't really needed any therapy for that colorblindness because my cure has always been you.
Categories: colorblindness, art, beautiful, care, devotion,
Form: Rhyme

Bigoted Grandfather

Grandfather 
you gave me
no justice
in your seeing
things
with bigoted 
injustice
WHY 
would you say
when I was
young
that if I 
took a black
man
to your home
that 
you would
shoot him
Grandfather
I loved you
so much
but
 those words
scared me
so much
See ..I was
just starting
to date
appreciating
the other
species
and you
 through me
 into a
tailspin
with 
your demands
Grandfather
though 
you are 
long gone
you did me
no justice 
without
colorblindness
Making sure
I dated by
your rules
Grandfather
shortsighted 
you were in 
your bigotry
I grew up
believing
that desiring
a man of
a different color
was going to
end in madness
with a hunters gun
aiming his 
bullets
and pulling 
the trigger
scary thoughts
for some young
Grandfather
you gave me
no justice
to look at 
my brother
with color
and say
to myself
we are all
god's children
and I can be
attracted
to who I want
Grandfather 
I'm putting away
you gun
 and your bullets
and I'm going
  to say
You gave me
no justice 
in your
bigoted ways
Categories: colorblindness, abuse, corruption,
Form: Free verse


Premium MemberNight Is Coming

Night is coming
Even though it already looks and feels of night
It isn't here yet
Gray veil covers the sky
Rain plays its sad tune
But pink flowers contrast green on Japanese Magnolia

Night is coming
Color blind person would not be able to see
The green leaves that are in contrast to the pink
Nor could they see the contrast between the white and green on the Bradford Pear

Night is coming 
Rain increases it rhythm, the grayness in the forest deepens
A heaviness weighs upon my body making it uncomfortable to breath
The rain washes the pollen away for right now

Night is coming 
Colorblindness would be a disadvantage for a person in many ways 
Some of the beauty of spring would be lost
But they would probably notice shape and design more than someone who sees color

Night is coming
When the darkness covers over me then I won't be able to see how to write
This would be a great disadvantage in accomplishing finishing this work
The yellow green or banana yellow yard light has come on it light radiates outward
In the distance a very large tree reaches upward skeletal but has few spring green 
tiny leaves that contrast the gray sky.
If I  were color blind I would not see that.
Categories: colorblindness, introspection, life, spring, light,
Form: Free verse

Colors of Life

Color, beautiful colors so fair.
Decorates life with beauty, gemstones.
Days without splendor could bring despair.

The human retina, its rods and cones,
Designed to paint man’s world with grand hues.
View majestic colors on earth’s throne.

Hues that paint nightlights with great amuse.
Storefronts, theaters and streets bedecked.
Beautiful colors: reds, greens, and blues.

Sometimes there is a spectral defect.
Pigment askew sees colors untrue.
Changing the vistas one might expect.

Colorblind people tell some jobs adieu.
Electricians, painters, and even cooks –
Let’s hope there will be a cure breakthrough.

On the good side, according to books,
Colorblindness detects camouflage.
A benefit, finds enemy nooks.

Corsage, collage, sabotage montage –

© March 6, 2011
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: Color Blindness 	 
Sponsored by: Olajide Adelana
Categories: colorblindness, people, science, sympathy,
Form: Terza Rima

Colorblindness

COLORBLINDNESS


I had a confused childhood  cos I was colorblind
But still I was the  logical  and persistent kind.

I would ask mum what color - maybe brown?
No, she’d say   - it’s beige, 
Well, I didn’t know any French then. . . .  
Or she’d say   - it’s natural
So, I said,  are black, blue, green, yellow unnatural?
Ok she’d say   -  it’s fawn
How do I know what colour a fawn is?
Well son, it’s kinda  biscuit  colour
Did she mean chocolate biscuit or coconut? 
Ok, you can call  it  - stone-coloured,  son
Did she mean  white limestone  or black basalt?  
No,  she changed her mind  - it’s more like oatmeal
Ok,  so what  colour is oatmeal?
Well,  kinda  biscuity-natural,  son. . . . . 

And not to mention the problem with 
Lilac, heliotrope, purple, pinky-mauve, lavender, heather,
But the worst was wine-coloured. . . did she mean red or white??
And don’t get me started about 
Lemon, mustard, cream, daffodil, and.. . . .   

I think I went colorblind just to avoid all the confusion
Of shades of colors in profusion

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Entered in Olajide Adelana's Contest 	Color Blindness
Categories: colorblindness, childhood, mum,
Form: Free verse


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