Notes About The Poem
I did some research on colorblindness..I watched two videos featuring two people who are color blind..It was an interesting subject to learn about..If a parent did not know if a child was color blind, they might think that something was bad wrong with their child..One video showed some things like a person who is color blind would see them and from my point of view they would be missing so much..

Night Is Coming

Night is coming
Even though it already looks and feels of night
It isn't here yet
Gray veil covers the sky
Rain plays its sad tune
But pink flowers contrast green on Japanese Magnolia

Night is coming
Color blind person would not be able to see
The green leaves that are in contrast to the pink
Nor could they see the contrast between the white and green on the Bradford Pear

Night is coming 
Rain increases it rhythm, the grayness in the forest deepens
A heaviness weighs upon my body making it uncomfortable to breath
The rain washes the pollen away for right now

Night is coming 
Colorblindness would be a disadvantage for a person in many ways 
Some of the beauty of spring would be lost
But they would probably notice shape and design more than someone who sees color

Night is coming
When the darkness covers over me then I won't be able to see how to write
This would be a great disadvantage in accomplishing finishing this work
The yellow green or banana yellow yard light has come on it light radiates outward
In the distance a very large tree reaches upward skeletal but has few spring green 
tiny leaves that contrast the gray sky.
If I  were color blind I would not see that.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horne Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 4:41 PM
Love this beautiful descriptive write, my friend
A   Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 9:35 PM
Sara, i like the way you repeated the words.."night is coming"... after reading this poem,,, I'm glad I'm not color blind... thank you for this poem,, and soup mail... your the best..always..pd
Culverhouse Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 6:22 PM
enjoyed reading your work!!
Merryman Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 3:21 PM
A wonderfully written piece, Sara. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
Yamin Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 3:11 PM
A brilliant write, Sara. I am glad I stopped by to read it. Your poems are all classy. I like them. -Mohammad
Sweetheart Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 3:08 PM
a loveely write and presentation for the color blind contest Sara.. good luck this is magnificent and I predict a winning wonder luv..
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