Candlelit Poems | Examples


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Premium Member Candlelit Dinner for Two

Meaty meatballs resting on spaghetti
Toasting garlic bread then top with cheese
Indeed the most delightful sight



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Clandestine Candlelit Night

The soft glow of candlelight,
Illuminates the night,
With flickering and dancing light,
Like distant stars in flight.

It casts shadows on the walls,
That move and sway,
As though alive and sentient,
In the silence of the evening day.

The candle burns so quietly,
Giving off a gentle and pleasant warmth,
It's like a friend that's silently,
Sitting beside you, in the calm of the storm.

Premium Member candlelit room


in my candlelit room I am in a meditation and total withdrawal
and I am travelling back, back, back in time with a sad sigh
I know what comes next and I want to weep with love
my dress a cloud of red chiffon flowing, flowing
you whisper I love you and I turn the page
back, back, I turn back the pages, pages
we swirl twirling and dipping perfectly
and my red chiffon dress is beautiful 
kiss me is your whisper as we dance
your strong arms holding me tight
we are spinning, spinning
the music roaring loudly
  and you are fading
      our hands slipping
          then our fingertips
              and still we are spinning
                 until you are gone and I am alone
                            yet the music goes on and on

and in my candlelit room, I take a deep breath . . .


Candlelit

In the orchestral waves,
Of candlelight,
Her loveliness
Reynaldo Casison

Premium Member Red At Night

Great black clouds
Clot the blood-red sky, 
Pink stained shadows
Where daylights go to die.
Candlelit processions 
In valley ways awake,
Trickle waxen grief
Onto valley lake,
Threading bright the promise
Though choir has ceased refrain, 
Holding back the night
That dawn should come again.

Candlelight

If only I could wish success 
     upon a generation~
           I'd deeply gaze
into the burning core of my
              Candlelight~
        A flame from flame.
Brightness shared in a selfless way. 
             And with that~
    the darkness that had once
Engulfed the lonesome compartment~
           Lays but defeated~
     by the dying melting wax.
              Burning silently~
 with a non - luminous flame;
                   Selfless~
As the light is passed on from one light
       Generation to another.


Premium Member Candlelit Vigil

The sewing machine, long idle, gathered dust
Their farmland sapping every last ounce of energy
Animals and crops, entrusted and on her own to adjust
With welcome visits of encouragement from the clergy

All the men had enlisted swearing they’d be back
Leaving behind wives who hushed their worst fears
Nights spent dreaming of men riding home on horseback
Godforsaken days turned to months turned to tears

The war years seemed like only yesterday
Like a treacherous nightmare that could be swept aside
With each sunrise, all held their breath for judgment day
Dreams of lighthearted love and happy times gone astride

A woman has premonitions others call foresight
Setting aside the unopened envelope with its postmark
Sat alone with his bloodstained letter well into the night
The candle sputtered, spent, and all was dark



AP: 3rd place 2020

Submitted on April 13, 2018 for contest ONE NINE AND SIXTEEN sponsored by VIV WIGLEY  -  RANKED 4TH

Candlelit Fantasy

No words can describe what you do to me
You inject in me some sort of venom-like sweetness
Mind and body erase
Making room for feeling and admiration
On my side of thought, you merely despise me
You leave me in melancholy wonder
Melting me like a candle, I become so low
And burn all the more!
Because this wax in me is lathered in your substance
Sometimes I wonder if you are made of venom at all
Sometimes I bring myself to believe. . .
That you are sweet. . .
And you want me to enjoy it
Why I suffer so profusely I cannot tell
Why I allow myself to believe 
That I may love you
Only toughens my doubt of a shell
Perhaps I never loved you
Or perhaps I do more and more everyday
And the shell grows all the more fragile
I am low as can be in this room
This dreary, candlelit fantasy involving you
I age in a young body
Trapped in ancient pain
Wrapped in insipid, typical emotion
Bludgeoned with irrefutable doubt
Your very few words burn me
Melting me into nothing. . .
But when I am finally blown out
I have no choice but to harden

Sometimes I return tall
Other times I remain small
I wonder which one you prefer

Premium Member Candlelit Dreams

A vanilla candlelit dream
floats down a clear blue stream

The earthy sun does shine on
red hot flame lit til dawn

Floating down the river so sweetly
As you come over with daisies to greet me

Smells of dew and music of doves
movements of shew shew and voices of love

A spirit filled soul inside the river blew
the flame only grew and the I knew

By Susan Mills

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