Candlelit Dreams
A vanilla candlelit dream
floats down a clear blue stream
The earthy sun does shine on
red hot flame lit til dawn
Floating down the river so sweetly
As you come over with daisies to greet me
Smells of dew and music of doves
movements of shew shew and voices of love
A spirit filled soul inside the river blew
the flame only grew and the I knew
By Susan Mills
Copyright © Susan Mills | Year Posted 2010
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