Betided Poems | Examples


Let Fate See Another Day

His path, like those of many before him, knew countless craters and caverns
Until rewarded with his true love, he walked a sure step, undeterred
Through his carriage, he protected his love, though her path often did bank
For he knew without her, the mysteries of life would remain unexplored

Yet another stumble betided her walk, unsteady, erratic in totter
Once again, his devotion guided his measure as he journeyed in keep
But this time, his feet did not give rise, was it fated that love would resolve
Though weary, his strength solicited passage to let fate see another day

Dreaming Tree Desires

progression withered aged vines

  after clarity was shaken,

dreaming tree shed its leaves

   ceased to take pity

    on the eternal bloom,

fell through the cracks mid

   concrete wildflowers

standing in dusky shadows

   of betided darkness,

air thick like molasses

 oozing into changed crevices

dreams expired before 

  memories transpired,

childlike innocence died upon

  ventured horizon's fading meadows

      & first relinquished blushing kisses

   as reality's cruel persistence 

      contrived of illogical devices

          decaying flowery resolutions

             disillusioned mixed metaphors;

 deliver me back to a time of naiveté

 whence stardust hung from shaded blossoms

        rendered 'midst moonbeam showers



"The Dreaming Tree Has Died"

- inspired by Dave Matthews Dreaming Tree


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