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Let Fate See Another Day

His path, like those of many before him, knew countless craters and caverns Until rewarded with his true love, he walked a sure step, undeterred Through his carriage, he protected his love, though her path often did bank For he knew without her, the mysteries of life would remain unexplored Yet another stumble betided her walk, unsteady, erratic in totter Once again, his devotion guided his measure as he journeyed in keep But this time, his feet did not give rise, was it fated that love would resolve Though weary, his strength solicited passage to let fate see another day

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Date: 7/21/2018 9:41:00 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Mike. Well done.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/22/2018 6:40:00 AM
Thanks Line xxoo
Date: 7/20/2018 11:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed this. Different and intriguing poem on fate. Well done!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/21/2018 8:56:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan xxoo
Date: 7/20/2018 1:16:00 PM
Mike, what a great poem and a great win. Congratulations!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/20/2018 1:44:00 PM
Thank you so much Curtis, Hope you are having a great Friday!!!
Date: 7/19/2018 7:47:00 AM
- Many of the poems are so beautiful that they hit me in the heart ... I'm so glad I'm not going to judge ... I'm just gonna congratulate you on your beautiful win, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/19/2018 8:15:00 AM
Thank yo0u so much, Anne-Lise, your kind words are always appreciated. happy Thursday xxoo
Date: 7/19/2018 7:21:00 AM
Deep personal take on the contest Mike.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/19/2018 8:14:00 AM
Thank you so much, Silent One, I am so happy to have placed so high in your contest and I really enjoyed exploring the theme!!!
Date: 6/27/2018 7:50:00 AM
Hello Mike I found this poem to be sad. Have a nice day my friend. xxxx-0000.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/27/2018 8:06:00 AM
Hello Darlene, thank you always for your kind visit and comments happy Wednesday xxoo
Date: 6/26/2018 9:53:00 PM
Mike.. enjoyed your venture into the unknown!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/27/2018 5:49:00 AM
Thank you Lyric Man!!!
Date: 6/26/2018 3:49:00 PM
A sure step turns into a stumble..as fate takes hold. We all long for another day..well said, Mike..best for a win.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/26/2018 3:55:00 PM
Thank you Vijay !!
Date: 6/26/2018 3:16:00 PM
A lot of mystery and questions. Well written Mike :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/26/2018 3:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi xxoo

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