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Premium Member I Saw a Sundrop: Constanza

I saw a sundrop in a field,
a daffodil to be exact,
stand brave upon the snow-filled tract.

In blighting cold it would not yield;
long since its fellows disappeared
to that one spot it still adhered,

though flurries did the winter wield.
The autumn did its namesakes in
before the hoarfrost could begin

and slicing gusts now unconcealed,
with falling rain becoming snow.
The way of death it would not go

as though behind a covert shield
that kept its sunlit attitude
when sleet unto the land ensued.

I saw a sundrop in the field,
in blighting cold it would not yield,
though flurries did the winter wield
and slicing gusts now unconcealed,
as though behind a covert shield.

11/15/17
Categories: unconcealed, hope, metaphor, winter,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Decadent Proposal

She senses before she sees
The manicured nails - the elegant fingers
Holding out the hundred dollar bills - enticingly - so temptingly
A generous nights takings of busking here
In one proffered hand
She grabs at it petrified it might be an illusion
Evaporating in a puff of smoke

Fingers hold it back, teasingly
Compelling eye contact
She looks up sceptically 
Dark eyes meet her aqua blues, sparking a sort of affinity
‘Eyes are the window of one’s soul’- so it is said in all sincerity
But the magnetic dark eyes of her enticer are fathomless in their intensity

His type she has encountered before - money for favours
Well she is no novice - a living after all - a girl has to make
And his generous offer rivals his devilish good looks
But she senses a darkness favouring the energy emanating 
A cold shiver runs through her veins like someone just walked on her grave
Fear ripples down her spine akin to a stroking finger chilled in ice

The spell he casts foreboding
The calmness of the night has taken flight
In its haste to set the macabre scene
Mesmerising are the eyes that bore into hers
Projected thoughts furtively slip into her mind
Infiltrating it like a slithery snake
Bringing with it forbidden thoughts of desire
She falls into the inky black abyss
Succumbing to heady dark passionate conceptualization

However the chilling message is coherent
This is not a mere opportunistic one night stand
That he desires
This is more - so much more
This is taboo concupiscence unleashed

This is her life in exchange for what?
Her life for immortality?
Surely not!
Yet his eyes eloquently convey it all
The hunger so unconcealed - so transparently flagrant
To yield to darkness
Satisfying his appetite for
Death of a different nature?
Obliteration of life as she knows it to be
Tenebrous Immortality in exchange for her blood
A prelude to his finale of taking her soul
And then a metamorphosis 
From Prey to Predator
Video clip -
Like a Vampire- Catrien Maxwell
Categories: unconcealed, dark, desire, love, lust,
Form: Dramatic Verse

Of Pan and Man

Of PAN and MAN

Beyond the hedgerow bright with bloom of May
Our daily lives move on with purpose strong 
From where the thrush and warbler sing the day
Soft hum of traffic, plays a different song

The tawny herd lies sleepy-eyed in sun
On lush green mead oblivious to where
The cars, the trucks and buses onward run
With each disposed by one of nature’s heirs

Along the roadside verges, now revealed
In rainbow hues, wild flowers exquisite face
Uncaring road’s dismissal unconcealed
Though passers glance admiring of their grace

To count less the works of man than of Pan, some are fain 
Let us bless them all and embrace as our whole domain
Categories: unconcealed, nature,
Form: Sonnet

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The Dancer's Heart

I never did see a more beautiful expression
As if all four seasons had exploded
Imploded, eroded all the somber
A wonder so delicate...an art she exposed
Utterly unopposed is the dancers heart
animations of vibrations move through her
A Van Gogh of flow
like aged, cellared Bordeux
Wreathes of wind, sun and soul weave
down around her roots through her being
freeing sensations into the air
As if with Gaia's divine love affair. 
Eyes drawn and beating heart unconcealed
She wields her radical, energetic shield...
The power to heal, to breathe, to love
above the brilliant sun, moon and stars
Oh what an orchestrated art in tune.
Spirit calls out to her from Earth
The birth of sound and soul unearthed
Oh what an art i've observed
To preserve the true art of a dancer's heart.
Categories: unconcealed, beautiful, beauty, dance, imagery,
Form: Alliteration

Exploring Deep Space

Earth is but a tiny speck of color, spinning round and round
orbiting the sun in the ebon universe without making a sound.
Come and lay beside me in a meadow and let's pretend
we're floating in space where dreams never have to end

Let's visit the constellations in the depth of celestial skies
Dance from star to star, amazed at how they mesmerize
But we dare not try to catch one when it falls from its place
Stardust does not belong in an hourglass on a bookcase

A meteor shower in the distance, lights our way for a time
I have questions, like 'why' or 'how' to write in poetic rhyme
On we go to distant planets, harboring in the universe so vast
I wonder when it had its beginning, and how long will it last

Planets with moons and galaxies are yet to be unconcealed
What astronomic marvels will then be wondrously revealed
Be careful of that magnetic black hole, trying to pull us in
helped by a strong stellar wind that's tossed us in a tailspin!

There's danger from a solar eclipse when we couldn't see
we were headed for Mars and not the moon's Sea of Tranquility
Being extraterrestrials was a chance we were willing to take
but traveling weightlessly in the cosmos is not a piece of cake

Unlike Buzz Lightyear, who can navigate 'Infinity and beyond'
we have to find our way back home without a magic wand
There's no USS Enterprise and Captain James Kirk in command
Our attempt to explore deep space was not very well planned

We wouldn't want our astral journey to disrupt a galactic zone
and like ET, it will be impossible to call home without a phone
Amid the pendants of planets, hanging on a black velvet drape
we'll have to pretend we're on a spaceship to make our escape



15th of January, 2021
Musings on space contest
Sponsor ~ Unseeking Seeker
Categories: unconcealed, space, universe,
Form: Rhyme

The Seventh Child

But I walk along.
Forte to my cause.
A fort of strength…
Militarily built -
     Therefore, must be militarily defeated.
Many say I am a buyout -
     Too much intelligence to decipher.

No lack of esteem that can be embraced maybe a confrontation to face.
Personification of knowledge is an individual’s acumen ginned.
Gen by a rite of passage to quest for greater things.
Malachia is her name.

Anyone that desires the sanity of righteousness is a reformer.
A trial and purpose they have formed.
Strong suited to develop structure.
Strong points are shared prolifically.
A talent acquisitionist carries the scrolls.
A role player and leader at the podium.

Mississippi born and a Mississippian raised…
Acumen gins - informed by knowledge nowadays.

But I walk along.
Forte to the cause.
A fort of strength growing stronger!
Military built –
     Thus, never militarily defeated.
Only a buyout prevails –
     Cipher cannot be unconcealed  or revealed.
___________________________________________________________________|
Written April 1, 2016!
Categories: unconcealed, adventure, america, appreciation, autumn,
Form: Dramatic Verse


Premium Member My Ancestry Surprise - Dk


One-hundred percent Italian descent:
   four grandparents crossed the ocean, went
through Ellis Island, from Italy sent;
   my Italian roots, one-hundred percent.

But  D N A  samples now tested, ruled-
   genetic ancestry can have you fooled!
With full Italian descent overruled-
   gene structure in me- completely retooled.

Dumbstruck that percentages showed so clear
   my pie chart was sliced- not a full sphere,
my mind was lost in this new-found frontier,
   and wiped out ideas that I held so dear.

Through tests, my genetic past now revealed,
   sixty-four percent Italian did yield!
Thirty-six percent now unconcealed
   some ancestors came from lands far afield!

Mid-Eastern, Caucasus, Iberian too,
   Some Jewish, Scandinavian, plus a few
chance Irish genes to mix up the brew.
   My former beliefs are now so untrue.

But, soon I accepted this new-found me,
   like others amazed, as shown on TV,
surprised, but excited as I can be-
   with a varied, colorful, mixed ancestry!



April 19, 2017

Contest: Dumbstruck
Sponsor: Charles Messina

True facts:  I received my Ancestry DNA 
test results on April 1, 2017
Categories: unconcealed, family, history,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Pretty La Conner

La Conner is such a pretty small town

That has grown and has changed for many years.

One of the first settlements in the state,

It is so much more than it first appears.



Many buildings from the earlier town

Have been recorded as historic places.

Residents point them out to visitors

With unconcealed pride upon their faces.



The town is surely an artist's mecca.

You'll find them smocked and painting everywhere.

But no painting quite catches the aura

That permeates La Conner's ocean air.



It has become a yearned for destination,

Where vacationers determine to come.

Visitors fill its one shopping street in summer

And keep coming when the summer is done.



Some shops are stocked with finest of fashions,

Where every woman is eager to shop.

Fine art attracts through other big windows.

You'll find that each place is a worthwhile stop.



The town is perched upon wide hillside,

With channel of water on West Side.

North, South and East meet the big fertile fields.

Town of La Conner is contained inside.



Fine yachts and fishing boats drop their anchors

At docks located on the Channel side.

One can almost feel the town's slow rocking

At exact moments of  incoming tide.



The lovely high Rainbow Bridge spans the Channel

Connecting La Conner and Swinomish

Indian Reservation across the way.

On either bank one could just stop to fish.





Written 8/25/14
Categories: unconcealed, places,
Form: Quatrain

Premium Member The Trials of Meretrix Canto V

Here, this day, on this inglorious
Field
Thy vain struggles will count no
Valour.
All hope now abandoned,
Imminent defeat unconcealed;
Erstwhile countenance display 
Such waxen, languid pallor.
Surround by your dwindling 
Forces
Ye will but sadly find...
That the stout keep of your 
Valiant fortress is all but breached,
Once strong foundations failing -
Wherest badly undermined!

For a rigorous examination beckons
ye;
Stood before impassioned jurors 
Chosen from the feared and all
Powerful families of the ignoble
Medici.
Black curtains drawn back from 
Deep reveals
That look out over the enlightened
Years...
Where conceals...
Hidden between leafs of peremptory
Decree:-
A blight spread upon these lands,
Inflicted from Romes insidious 
Plans -
That cause stain upon the
Renaissance of a golden century!

When clapping thunder breaks and
Brazen lightening clashes
Still I would know ye again: 
A pounding, frenzied reflex devoid
Of all Godly purpose -
Detached from any amount of 
Blame!
For I have sought ye out, O lowly 
Meretrix;
Heaping upon you with bondage
Enforced through servitude and
Shame;
And I, O lowly Meretrix,
I...hereby command thy name.

A fastidious Advocate of intellectual
Character
Shallst I elect,
He who be a practitioner of 
Theological proposal unrefrained,
To represent you -
Raised from the rank files of the
Dead and slain!
A public gallery, wherest seated,
Ghostly phantasms 
That I purposefully select;
And for a judge - A deathly one:
Ill measured, worshipfully detached,
Beneath it all,
And hopelessly arcane.

This "Innocent" fool, dressed in
Guise of highest ecclesiastical 
Enforcer,
Perpetuated a medieval Inquisition,
Both protracted and prolonged,
That openly boasted and rejoiced
In its zealous slaughter!
Thereby spawned a terrible edict -
"Ad Extirpanda":-
Cannon law that advocates the
Use of "Legitimate torture"!

Know thee also, Meretrix, the Pius
Pontiff,
Heaven sent,
Who in his greater wisdom 
Convened over
The council of Trent:
Four hundred years spanning 
Across a Reformations fears;
Reaffirmed when Pope John,
In reflective reiteration,
Was heard to chillingly hiss:
"What was...Still is"!

TO BE CONTINUED...
Categories: unconcealed, philosophy, proposal,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Beautiful Bouquet of Red Roses -The Acrostic Style

~Beautiful Bouquet Of Red Roses~
(Acrostic)


Beautiful bouquet of vibrant very lovely red roses
Elegant fragrant they're a gift from God above
A most romantic enchantingly soft delicate flower so very
Unique and beautiful in every single way
Their permeating perfume is truly a delight to my heart
Indeed their powerful presence is a bright sight to my eyes
Find them in a diverse array of colors, hues and names and all
Under a ton of their very exuberant unconcealed mythical celebrated charm and the
List of their endless variety just goes on and on

Roses are my very favorite flowers of all of them out there and
On  this I can always honestly swear
Since they truly just amaze me  and
Enthrall  all of my heart and senses with all their unique loveliness and pure beauty.


Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2016


April.26.2016


Author's Notes:

An "Acrostic" is a poem or other form of writing in which the first letter, syllable or word of each line, paragraph or other recurring feature in the text spells out a word or a message. The word comes from the French "acrostiche" from post-classical Latin acrostichis.
Categories: unconcealed, beautiful, flower, love, romantic,
Form: Acrostic

Just Another Fern

Just Another Fern 
(A confession…) 


Love at first sight this must be, 
Such beauty and grace I live to see. 
Portrait of perfection in the spring air as you dance,
My precious daffodil, spare me a glance.

I peeked, I stared, I witnessed, I died, 
By the sight of a foe longing to be at your side.
Jealousy whispered, its icy breath I felt, 
Packed with love and courage, to your highness I knelt.

You answered my prayer, even said you were pleased, 
But why do I feel that your happiness I seized? 
It struck me like thunder, your coldness revealed,
You’re in love, but not with me, an ugly truth unconcealed.

I dreamt, I saw, I tried, I failed, 
Disappointed and hurt, but love never paled. 
I would rather go blind, I would hold on ‘til I dry, 
I would keep on hoping, I would try and try.

To retreat and surrender, I will never learn.
I'm just another lover, just another fern.
Categories: unconcealed, funny love, heartbroken, i
Form: Rhyme

When Loneliness Comes Calling

Our window bids good morning 
as sunshine winks her delicate light,
cascading against crimson curves 
as the yearning spoon is stirred
and dawn shines past a moonlight trite
Fingertips caressing,
hips that beckon a lovers moan,
A slow descent of gentle squeezes 
and feather soft ascents.
Securities blanket of manly frame 
still wrapped behind me
of a winters night beside me
like the sky robes a shivering slivered moon.

My cradled neck hungers for your breath,
and your kisses suckling twins of softest flesh.
Privation cries to roll deeper into your embrace
finding your manhood foraging my legs,
standing at the ready to enter candy land 
through sugar coated gate.

With pause you edge some distance
as your piercing eyes reveal
you've memorized by sense of touch,
every delicacy unconcealed.
A smile pulls across your lips
in silence exulting your pride 
As your hand slowly s
                                    li
                                        de
                                             s
only to discover 
pools of wanting you 
running over.

Lips that must be kissed
savoring the taste lingering on your lips
to share with me a morsel of my passions taste
with longing to be filled.
To speak, my tongue must form in perfect motion 
the thoughts I must convey,
so it is to cast my seducing potion
expressing my gift in pleasure's game

At leisurely pace I open my eyes...

Awakening now to an ordinary day
where simple comforts breed the mundane
and poetry abides my habitual escape
from magics rare existence 
and remnants of disillusionment remain

Like drive thru food in lieu of a feast
for taste buds grown abated.
Sullenly today, so alone I am,
with hungers appetite so far from sated.
Perhaps I was dreaming of Juliet, consummated in Romero's hands

As disenchantment knocks at my door...
When loneliness comes calling.
Categories: unconcealed, absence, dream, emotions, how
Form: Rhyme

Conscious

I’ll sing you dream songs
that last as long as the hills
but know this my love
it’s fullness IS
the striving of our wills

Against the darkness
that has crept stealthily
into the hearts of man
I cannot describe
this latent longing
to rest mine eyes
upon the faces of my joy
to stay there reticent
upon the turn of your gaze
Soft sentience gathers
like a cloak of gauze
to be not disaffected by
the backs of those who consume
the refuse of worthlessness
and despise excellencies
but prefer the violations of every
virtue , whose villainy
is unconcealed on any level
considered the character
OF MAN
Salacious , drooling compounded
with the Sophistry of sophistication
Supercilious in their vanities
as rottenness to a tree

Nay , but here I seek
a palate for the delicacy
yielding tender fruit
so desirable as it’s fleeting
from a world gone course
that swallows any thoughts
of pursuing a nature
whose potency can be clearly seen

I defy your erosions
corrosion of thought and deeds
whose love is less than
rutting animals
I decry your mogul media
your grand theatrics
I have divorced you
to pursue a finer thought

I’ll pass you on the street
you will have my hello
but don’t expect to drag me
to your peers whose
consciousness is gone
even in the daytime

I will , my time
with the quality , geniality
of thoughts vibrant
of the orchestral heights
and cast your lows
into some other state

COPYRIGHT © 2013 C Michael Miller
via Duboff Law Group LLC
Categories: unconcealed, character, environment, god, heart,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Circle of Light

I smile or frown from joy or pain
Sometimes,the light of love won't dim
My features become beacon itself
And simmered aches my mind won't swell.

But shell and veil of us we see,
Time finds its way with you and me
Archaeologists won't wonder why we die
In circle of light, the pupil is yet alive.

Life is mostly tender light right now
And when midnight comes, I'll know
that, that, too, shall surely pass
Winter, spring, summer, fall is earth's compass.

The weak finds quietude in humility
The strong faces scent of reality
The wise claims compassion for humanity;

Ancient views, and you, your inner eyes will find
Sometimes, melancholy seeps from pores of mine
But I'll smile with delight, though eyes do sigh
For One Unconcealed Light are yours and mine.

*
(c), September 20, 2015)
Categories: unconcealed,
Form: Bio

The Kestrel Selene

Hovering silently above the sunkissed field
                                she stalks her prey, tail adjusting movement
                                 then swoops effortlessly towards the unconcealed
                                  
                                
                                      Field mouse has no idea, life`s about to sieze
                                        with eyes transfixed, claws outgasped
                                          she swoops down,not a breeze

                                              Her prey is caught,off back to her nest
                                                four newly born chicks await
                                                  because food,nutrition is what she does best


 
P.Beadnall for

Sponsor nette onclaud 
Contest Name INTO THE MOOD OF IMAGERY
Categories: unconcealed, animals, nature,
Form: Light Verse
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