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The Kestrel Selene

Hovering silently above the sunkissed field she stalks her prey, tail adjusting movement then swoops effortlessly towards the unconcealed Field mouse has no idea, life`s about to sieze with eyes transfixed, claws outgasped she swoops down,not a breeze Her prey is caught,off back to her nest four newly born chicks await because food,nutrition is what she does best P.Beadnall for Sponsor nette onclaud Contest Name INTO THE MOOD OF IMAGERY

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/11/2011 10:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry placing in Brian's contest Paul. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/10/2011 7:34:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Oh the sweet taste of victory..Sara

Paul Beadnall
Date: 10/10/2011 7:47:00 PM

Thanks alot Sara appreciated with blessings .

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/10/2011 11:08:00 AM

Congrats Paul on third place win with these excellent words for your entry luv.. enjoyed..

Paul Beadnall
Date: 10/10/2011 2:22:00 PM

Thanks alot Linda-Marie,appreciated blessings from Paul.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/30/2011 5:26:00 AM

A belated congratulations Paul on your win in Brian Strand's "Let's See Poetry" contest. Love, Carol

Kevin Clark

Date: 6/25/2011 5:06:00 PM

Nice use of nature in poem

David Williams

Date: 6/25/2011 10:16:00 AM

hey Paul love this one it is well set out and nicely written, i love watching birds of prey when they swoop. thanks for your comments on my poem, and it;s any dry stone wall, David.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/25/2011 6:56:00 AM

super congrats Paul on your amazing win in the contest with this dynamic entry.. good job luv.. enjoy top billing for excellent poetry...

Judy Ball

Date: 6/23/2011 10:13:00 PM

An excellent piece to a beautiful bird. Nicely done with super imagery. Loved it. God Bless, JB

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/22/2011 6:33:00 PM

amazing imagery Paul in this creative write .. sounds like this bird of prey is right on target as a huntress... your presentation is key to reading the poem.. appreciate the sweet critique of my poetry .. good job.. think about entering contests posted luv.. good luck..