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Just Another Fern

Just Another Fern (A confession…) Love at first sight this must be, Such beauty and grace I live to see. Portrait of perfection in the spring air as you dance, My precious daffodil, spare me a glance. I peeked, I stared, I witnessed, I died, By the sight of a foe longing to be at your side. Jealousy whispered, its icy breath I felt, Packed with love and courage, to your highness I knelt. You answered my prayer, even said you were pleased, But why do I feel that your happiness I seized? It struck me like thunder, your coldness revealed, You’re in love, but not with me, an ugly truth unconcealed. I dreamt, I saw, I tried, I failed, Disappointed and hurt, but love never paled. I would rather go blind, I would hold on ‘til I dry, I would keep on hoping, I would try and try. To retreat and surrender, I will never learn. I'm just another lover, just another fern.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/29/2014 6:13:00 PM
Such an intense poem with much emotion. Beautifully written. ^^
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Date: 8/27/2014 7:48:00 PM
MARKEE, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 8/24/2014 7:53:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Markee - I choose your first lovely written poem in rhyme - Well done - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/22/2014 7:04:00 PM
I sure could feel your words as if they were my own, and I am sure many would as well. Wonderful write, and a warm welcome to facebook. As for the contests, there is a link up there in the blue header, tons of people sponsor contests, just click on them and read the directions they sure do inspire. hope that helps and hope to see ya around :)
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Date: 8/22/2014 2:39:00 PM
Markee,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Markee Rudas
Date: 8/22/2014 3:39:00 PM
Thanks, Linda! For some odd reason, I could not find I OFFER MY CONTEST on the link you left. Please walk me through as I am very interested in joining. Thanks. :)))

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