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Bartholomew Barton; his friends called him Barty
Eighteen years old but no birthday party
Slumped in the mud, a gunshot to the shoulder 
But unlike his comrades at least he’d get older

Tyrannical forces sought world domination
And Barty had marched with his mates for his nation
They gave him...

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Categories: thanks but no thanks, appreciation, betrayal, hero, thank
Form: Rhyme
Thanks, But No Thanks, Dorian Gray
Dorian Gray came to me the other day
Offered to trade his portarit with one of mine
I politely refused and had this to say
Thank you, but I already have one that's fine

Everyday I do something really vile
It stares back at me with a most ugly face
Evil...

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Categories: thanks but no thanks, allegory, allusion,
Form: Quatrain
Our God Is Able
our God is able to provide all of our needs
for it was in us that He planted His very seed
no matter what's happening in life no matter how hard are the days
God is able to keep us uplifted as we journey on our way
in the...

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Categories: thanks but no thanks, angst, faith, hope, inspirational,
Form: Dramatic Monologue

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry



Winter Be Gone
The green buds burst forth on the stem
Open gently breathe, as life returns again
Pressing forth, drinking the new days light
The sun returns from its winter flight

The leaves open and spread their charms
As a lover opens wide her arms
Taking the inquisitive honey bee
To pollinate and set...

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Categories: thanks but no thanks, faith, winter, thanks, creation,
Form: Quatrain
Millionaire
A millionaire,

By now, 

I should be.

No thanks,

To haters,

In my family,

And my community.


Big ups,

To all, 

Who supported me.

A millionaire,

Yes, it should've happened

By now.

Seven books,

In one year,

And working too, wow!


But no, now,

I had to start over,

From dealing with,

People who I knew,

Dearly who clearly,

Messed over me.


This time last...

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Categories: thanks but no thanks, thank you, visionary, god,
Form: Rhyme
My Protecting Mama
Mama please comfort me I'm your little child.
Please protect me from the dreams I have that are so wild.
Mama thanks for being there when I started first grade.
You were my comfort and stay and came to my aid.
Then there was middle school
You were always there,...

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Categories: thanks but no thanks, caregiving, childhood, love, mother,
Form: Rhyme



A Good Life
From sun up till dark, day after day,
Hard and tiring work, but it was honest pay.
Worked like a dog scratching out a living,
On this old rundown farm where life can be cruel and always unforgiving.

Fighting every element that was ever known to man,
From droughts to...

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Categories: thanks but no thanks, devotion, faith, family, loveold,
Form: Verse
Thanx For the Welcome
Hey, thanks a heavy bunch for the welcome
Hey, thanks a larger lot for the welcome

My heart is duly enthralled
My mind has been positively stirred

Two days ago I had a lot on my mind
Now ‘coz of y’all, here I exist in delight

Heaven must be missing quite...

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Categories: thanks but no thanks, dedication, family, friendship, happiness,
Form: Narrative
It Is Thanksgiving
Thanksgiving is here. To a family, or friend's
home, you have been invited. You get all 
dressed up for the ocation. You get there and 
everyone is happy to see you.

You greet everyone, than you just sit around
talking and catching up on old news from family
and...

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Categories: thanks but no thanks, holiday, happy, thanks, thanksgiving,
Form: Free verse
Mentor and Tormentor
a skinny, dreamy-eyed boy in a suburban Jesuit school 
showed up in your English class...to learn a bit of class.

you taught me Milton, introduced me to Stevenson,
made this boy make sense out of words 
directly lifted from some popular tunes;
I learned the power of the...

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Categories: thanks but no thanks, angst, education, people, sad,
Form: Free verse
Mama's Restuarant
Mama opens to doors to her restuarant
where the people dine on romance.
Leave food sitting on their plates,
forgotten about while they dance.

Leftovers get thrown away,
'cause Mama don't like beggars.
She chases the homeless every day,
be they drunks or unfortunate fellas.

Then she dusts her hands as she waddles...

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Categories: thanks but no thanks, death, faith, life, sad,
Form: Rhyme
Special Teacher of Dance
Through the years students come and go, and time after time you teach and put on a show. 
The students dance and sing, and the audiance is proud of what they have seen. You 
remeber every name that walked through the door, and you keep...

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Categories: thanks but no thanks, inspirational, dance, thanks, dance,
Form: Rhyme
This Thanksgiving Day
This Thanksgiving Day...

During this time known as
 Thanksgiving Day.
I hope you'll give thanks and pray.

A prayer of thanks for 
everything God has given.
He has blessed us in the way
 we've been livin'!

Our country is blessed like no other.
God has supplied our
 "bread and butter."

He's given...

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Categories: thanks but no thanks, dedication, devotion, faith, family,
Form: Rhyme
Joy Peace and Hope
Christmas comes but once a year;
a time for celebration,
of the greatest birth amongst man,
in all of God’s creation.
Joy, peace and hope
are the gifts of Christmas cheer;
the joy and peace of the here and now;
the hope of eternity that’s near.

Let’s give thanks to the Father
for His...

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Categories: thanks but no thanks, religion, seasons, peace, thanks,
Form: Ballade
Midnight Dream
midnight dream 

 I awoke from a midnight dream, where love, hope , and faith, was the only thing seen
 where people gathered as a people under one god, one world and children sang the praises of god above explaining about peace and love.
 where...

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Categories: thanks but no thanks, life, people, thanks, giving,
Form: Rhyme

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry