A Good Life

From sun up till dark, day after day,
Hard and tiring work, but it was honest pay.
Worked like a dog scratching out a living,
On this old rundown farm where life can be cruel and always unforgiving.

Fighting every element that was ever known to man,
From droughts to blizzards you learn to do the best, the best that you can.
You watch your wife grow old before her time,
Saving every nickel, squeezing every dime.

Your children, always a blessing, as you sit down for your evening meal,
And share their days adventures and reap their love, such an awesome deal.
You hold hands and say grace, and give to God, His justly praise,
For these are unforgettable memories that reward your twilight days.

He thanks the Lord for his wife who stands steadfast by his side,
He knows without her it would all be for naught as he stares at her with pride.
Being poor has its many blessings that some will never see,
The closeness of a family that has known love, God, and poverty.

After supper the children clear the table and do the dishes too,
And paw and maw sit on their old porch and talk about things they need to do.
Then the children join in, and tell stories and sing some old church hymns.
Then it’s off to bed, but not before getting on his knees and giving thanks once more to Him.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/23/2009 6:47:00 AM
Beautiful indeed!!!! -Jessica
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Date: 5/12/2009 2:43:00 AM
thanks for your kind comments on my poem 5000, I too dont always manage to give feed back its ok, no probs, anyway God bless you from diane
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Date: 5/11/2009 4:06:00 PM
Isn't it amazing who those whose lives are the most challenging are the first to give thanks? Farmers are still the backbone of America and we will rely on them even more if the recession continues to deepen. This is a wonderful tribute to the hard work and abiding faith of farm families. Excellent! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/11/2009 2:20:00 PM
Beautiful view and wonderful message about faith and family. They are two of life's greatest blessings. Enjoyable and uplifting poem. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind words on my haiku. Have a nice day. Karen
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Date: 5/11/2009 1:03:00 PM
I must agree with Carrie. A beautiful nostalgic poem. Sigh. Well we do the best with what we have these days, and although times are different we can still try our best to instill in our kids all that is good and right. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/11/2009 8:28:00 AM
Such a lovely poem of yesteryear....I'm afraid this type of family has faded with time...instead by ending their evenings in seperate worlds watching a television screeen or computer screen. I prefer the day of old....perhaps a hard life...but filled with love and satisfaction. Something too often missed in modern times. Beautifully written, Ronald.
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Date: 5/11/2009 2:02:00 AM
a beautiful poem Ron so heart felt so devotional, God bless you from diane
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