Best Slackened Poems


Sailboat - a Shape Poem

~                               Sailboat,
                                  in
                  ~~~        calm
                                  weather
       ~~             you  are wasted
                       but if  the winds gust
                and howl  you are hastened. 
        ~       So I too,  through adversity,
             ~~   am as  you are indeed.
                          For  turbulence
          pulls taut the slackened lines of apathy, 
             it fills torpid sails with purpose, 
                and impels me to proceed.
    ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
© Jesse Rowe  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: slackened, change, sea, wind,
Form: Shape

First Snowfall

The last of autumn’s leaves begins assault
Of winter gales. The sap within the trees
In hibernating xylems call a halt
To most activity to some degree.
The birds that once resided amongst them
Already left for warmer spots unknown.
A few remain behind but are condemned
To weather winters snow and ice alone.
The snow begins to fall. At first, a flake, 
Then more and more until the trees are white
And weighted. Branches, weak, begin to break
And fall to earth and soon are crowned despite
The slackened storm. The wind subsides and all
Is quiet and calmness follows the squall.
Categories: slackened, seasonssnow, snow,
Form: Sonnet

Premium Member Sweet Grandparents

They ask, "What's the sweetest thing that's happened to you"?
I would have to reply, "It started when I was two".
That is when I, Mother, sister and brother,
went to live with our Grandpa and Grandmother.

They both sacrificed, from that day forward,
working long, hard hours, always undeterred.
To give us a home and happy memories.
It couldn't have been better, for Mom and us three.

Mom worked evenings at the Sears and RoeBuck store.
Grandpa at the publishers, working on the printing floor.
Grandma changed jobs to the school cafeterias,
so when we were home from school, she could be near us.

Grandpa was our dad, in our hearts and minds.
Growing up with two Moms was a terrific time.
Yes, living with our Grandparents was a special world.
I grew up to be a very thankful girl.

What's the sweetest thing that has ever happened?
It started when I was two, and has never slackened



For the contest'Sweetheart"
Hosted by Tirzah Conway
Placement: 5th place
Categories: slackened, familyhome, home,
Form: Rhyme

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In a Sleepless Silent Fog

and in a sleepless silent fog
memories burnt out in faded sun
ossified bones shape quaker guns
the past a needle of deeds undone
dusk another skirmish yet unwon

and fogbound in silent sleep
hypnagogic gagged and bound
susurrous floating low and 'round
inducing visions, throaty sound
form the stranger, kundalini found

and silent in a foggy sleep
drop the level, slip the drum
slackened grip, faintly succumb
a final twist with nasal hum
shadows cling like spirit gum

and now asleep in fog and silence
quelling heart and stifled brume
nestled deep in cotton's tender womb
dawn burning off chimeric gloom
hearts in morning burst abloom.
Categories: slackened, dream, sleep,
Form: Rhyme

This Is the Day the Lord Gave

This is the day the lord gave
                                         From the trave of our life 
                                      Two roads met, one to grave
                                          And one to eternal strife

                                          And the belief was rife 
                                       We had kissed the day off
                                           In the trough of scoff
                                     We lived on the edge of knife

                                 In the grave when earth blackened
                             Out in the dark the time was slackened
                             We knew that it was not the way of life



Sponsor	Verlena S. Walker
Contest Name	-THIS IS THE DAY THE LORD GAVE- 

12 January,2015
Categories: slackened, day, god,
Form: Rhyme

Congratulation With My Eyedropps

A huge Congratulations 
to everyone who passed
matriculation this year 
but please don't congratulate 
to me because I have no one 
to happy hearing your sweet voices.

In the past years I was waiting 
to hear some congratulations
from my parents but they are gone
some nine  months ago
then I heard A BIG congratulation
from Allah that was everything 
to me as my  happiness is now 
concealed forever. 
Today I full filled their wishes 
but I cannot mention how much
they would be happy. 

When it realized me that my power 
is slackened to do some things I opposited their rules so now 
I got  it's answer too, lol today 
I am with you got some distinctions
But I cannot happy as you.

You now stronger than other
you must be a zealot any 
time and where ever you will be.
Sharp your pencils remembering 
to whom we lost in past months. 
There may have so many smart 
And stars who could build better 
future than me . 

To my brothers and sisters 
Who's list did not show on 
the result papers follow some rules

Take the name of Allah from the start 
Don't lost your breathes 
Don't  lost your hopes
Be stronger than other 
Be a header not follower 
Remember the past .


T.Lin Soe (Soul of Rohang)
Categories: slackened, confidence, education, encouraging,
Form: Blank verse


An Epiphanic Moment

An epiphanic moment

pale dew drops clung to silky petals as
light breeze held wispy branchlets in its sway
blooms lay snug steeped in enigmatic scents,
waves pirouetting ,dainty in ascent
soon settled into ripples teasing seas
while mountains stood agape; tall silhouettes
of   sand   immortalised in castle shapes
bronze temple bells chimed  mellific  sweet tones
 hymns circumambulated God's grand thrones
who poured their  munificent boons across
the  yearning ambience without restraint.
time bowed down to a standstill watching with
deep reverence; sky gleamed in bright azure
aligning solemnly with beaming sun.
and distant twilight slackened its keen steps

    th a t   e p I p h a n I c  m o m e n t...
     

Date June 17 2017
Contest : Summer premier any theme any form max 25 lines sponsored by Brian Strand
Categories: slackened, beautiful, blessing,
Form: Iambic Pentameter

Ballad of Broken Friendships

I've burnt so many bridges
with an empty box of matches.
Friendships fall to waysides,
and I watch it while it happens.
Distant conversations;
Eyes no longer fastened
on the times when all we knew
were echoes of our laughter.
The flames of time have blazened.
They've left me charred and blackened.
The bonds between us, once so tight,
have since been frayed and slackened.
My days have become so lonely.
I feel they're quickly passing.
Yet, slowly am I moving
while depression is amassing.
So my friend, this is my sorry.
I'm wayward from my pathway.
Just know I'm here, and always am,
if you're willing to meet halfway.
Categories: slackened, depression, friendship, metaphor, sorry,
Form: Sonnet

Treatments of Silence

So burdened by a crushing silence more weightier than words 
born from likened mirrored thoughts 
These reflections shown in slackened hunches 
They come to bear such cruelty 
Carried with this certainty , seen darkly down and dragging 
in the fell of fallen shoulders 
Which question in their ways of inner fearing fractured feelings 
Things best left or right unspoken
For answers to them may they be or not a gambles die 
cast in chance of truths best left unseen 
Toys for such capricious ways of wanting at a leisure 
that seems torturing to say the least 
When words of praise and tribute laid down thoughtfully
so willingly 
Yet none return to me
Categories: slackened, absence, feelings, how i
Form: Narrative

Codependency

Her logic binds with golden ties and strands of silken thought
her elocution sparkles, it's a skill she has been taught.
Her lies are better than the truth, a drug that dulls defenses,
And I give up my reason to explosions of the senses.

Why, oh why, has she decided she should be my muse?
A toy of easily molded clay detained for her abuse.
Her eyes are fire, hold her gaze, you do it at your peril.
it only takes a glance to see how wild she is, quite feral.

Deceit is taught in many forms and she deploys them all
walk the line, a slackened rope, and teeter 'fore the fall.
Why have I been cursed you ask, and I can hardly say.
The truth is that I wouldn't want it any other way.
© Reed Hasty  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: slackened, dream, longing, love,
Form: Rhyme

Inspired Version of the Rattling Train

The carriages sway and how they shudder                  
Rattling behind the one-eyed monster                     
A powerful beam lighting the tracks ahead
Piercing the gloom, onward it sped
Unaware, uncaring the driver slept
Was destination destined or would it be death?

Windows barred to keep cold night at bay
The passengers asleep where they sit or lay
The rhythm of wheels, fast and frenetic
The rock of wagons deepening their sleep
Belching black smoke, the behemoth thundered
Could death be averted, the angels wondered

Ere the train broke the night’s quiet
The countryside slumbered in the cold night
And after the train had thundered past
Birds screeched, freed from the spell that night had cast
Their banshee shrieks echoing ominously in the dark  
Nature’s feathered creatures had gone berserk

Clickety clack clickety clack went the wheels
Changing tracks and terrain with no change in speed
Just when it seemed that all souls were lost
The pace slackened - speed and distance had extracted its cost
With limbs gone limp, the stoker collapsed and lay still
And the train slowed down, creaking and groaning as it went uphill
Categories: slackened, fear, night, night,
Form: Rhyme

Fromthis2that

FROMTHIS2THAT


Biscuits and gravy
Salads and snot
Chicken fried salamanders
The clams and mussels 
The oysters	the army 		marines and the navy
No such relief will be brought
Delusions of Grandeur
The dankness in disparity 	the putridity
The slackened standards
Oh the wasted cognation 
The scabs 
The gangrene 
The horrible rot!

An expired emotion
A disgusting thought
The ocean of death
Fighting the tide
Like a bucket of sand
The Crabs scatter from futility
All mollusk moan in aggravation 
The morbid discord a bandless eulogy
Education leaves so much untaught
The mind bending psychoactive laughs
Lighting the darkened inside

The genetic modification progressively paves this path
The superhuman sublime Externalized id
The age of science and the prosperity it has brought
The genome split, 		the double helix divide
Biochemical experimentation
Brings forth the future of man
The savage beast	-	laboratory tamed
The super-naught delivers the human
 child from the caves to the Promised Land.
Categories: slackened, fear, future, imagination, science,
Form: Lyric

Galleries of Life

Galleries of life, ignorant and tough,
Sometimes as sandarac’s incense, usually morose.
I erase bluntness that grew a cravat around my heart,
Abominable inheritance riveted into the soul of farce,
But there is nothing more valued in life than experience,
And there is a bag-full of it in every one of us.
No remorse or isolation, nor any type of solitude can adjust
The solemn desertion that he had to live through.

I am a repeat stranger of sleepless nights, 
Lord of rage and hope deposited in a vending machine,
Even during this epistolary hour as a rusty apparatus,
I tick away the time of my life with a slackened pace,
I bore pain, and challenge the horizons where hope seeps
Into the shadows of silence. ---- And it drags its tails,
And it downs the trust that was instilled into the twig since its birth.
The lucent moment of the very first fresh breath ever taken,
During the opulence of love, ---- I beside him.
And he??  He bears the name of a god, in the name and in the spirit,
Dragon-heart-in-a-boy knocking down the stacks of wonder,
In awe one is to marvel his persistence, in awe I remained.

And there is the black sky that roasts my visions,
As the quiet weeping, from the fringes of a moral conduct,
Fastened, with a shawl around the neck that blurs the boundaries,
Of the conflagration as the labyrinth of thought brings to 
The verisimilar life-tales, one unintentionally, creates along the way.

And there is the ground-zero widow, the dead bride, an apparition
From a different universe that stands atop a pyramid seemingly vincible
Yet untouchable, yet invisible, yet as vocal as bell in a chevron wave,
When I think to dare, when I am happy, and when I am cross as a bear.
Categories: slackened, life,
Form: Free verse

Random Lives

The reaper reaps in random ways
no signpost warns of last lived days
but ancient ears can hear the sound
of thundered hooves upon the ground
 
on blackened steed with fiery breath
the sickle scythes of pending death
with slackened reins the reaper rides
as changing gait our fate decides
 
and now the day on random ground
the sickles path has laid us down
and on he rides for those to come
whose random lives soon now be done
 
till silence falls the fields around
and winter snows make white the ground
we rest awhile with random friends
and in the spring anew begins
 
as clover lines the babbling brooks
and flowers spring from tiny nooks
and deer and rabbit come to graze
the reaper reaps in random ways
 
and so again that day will be
with promise new of destiny
till thundered hooves of blackened steed
the reaper comes again.
© Mike Bross  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: slackened, deathspring, day, spring,
Form: Rhyme

The Rainbow

It was a new year's party
Footfalls of the cups and glasses
Dances of the eyes and tongue
The time swung with the music
She wore a light pink lipstick
A lithe body of twenty 
A handndsome cascade in the eyes
Time forgot to fly

Across the table
Sat a young man of about twenty one
The brilliant eyes there and then won
Her thoughts
The river and the yacht
The conversation spurred
Further invitations and meets
For the hungry heartbeats

They got married
One day in the evening
Were into a starry swing
Under the dream-filled stars
He talked of the Venus and Mars
Mentioned the milkyway and black holes
Adjusted the rose in the buttonhole
She recited Eliot under the oak and chestnut
The time rippling in the two pink huts

Just a few weeks later
When he was about to unveil the nature
Looking into the time and space 
Amazed at its grace
To find out
If God really did not play 
The dice with the universe
He was diagnosed with a deadly disease

She stood by refusing to be daunted
We will not allow it to be terminal
She was emphatic
As in the wheel chair
He would amble

Though the doctors gave no more than
Three years of life
The river resolved
To stand by the desert
The chlorophyll by the grey leaves
Eyes keeping close watch on the disease
She pieced together the broken sun
Aggregate of many a moment of the nun
Weaving his tattered confidence
With the wools of warm love for the husband
A fragrance of the garden

The home and family
Rested exclusively on her shoulders
Though overwhelmed
They carried out the responsibility
Ungrudginly

The disease relented
Its progress slackened
The stars in the night sky celebrated
The togetherness unbridled

He travelled on
From the summit to the next summit
Done it, she exclaimed
________________________________________________________

March 21, 2018

Together we are strong - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Silent One

Note : As I was not personally involved in what happened, I understand the poem might not fit into the frame of the sponsor. Still considering the strength of the togetherness highlighted in the poem I am entering it for the contest
Categories: slackened, appreciation, culture, endurance, environment,
Form: Free verse
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