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First Snowfall

The last of autumn’s leaves begins assault Of winter gales. The sap within the trees In hibernating xylems call a halt To most activity to some degree. The birds that once resided amongst them Already left for warmer spots unknown. A few remain behind but are condemned To weather winters snow and ice alone. The snow begins to fall. At first, a flake, Then more and more until the trees are white And weighted. Branches, weak, begin to break And fall to earth and soon are crowned despite The slackened storm. The wind subsides and all Is quiet and calmness follows the squall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/28/2010 9:02:00 AM
Another great read.
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Date: 2/3/2010 1:52:00 PM
I love the sonnet form though it took me a half dozen years to get it LOL and thanks for the great new word! xylems
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Date: 1/31/2010 9:54:00 AM
Gorgeous imagery in this most enjoyable write. Albert I am going to favorite both you and this poem. I hope to read a lot more of your work. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/14/2010 1:08:00 PM
VERY good sonnet writing. Love to see that iambic pentameter and the content! andrea (another sonneteer!)
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Date: 12/10/2009 6:55:00 AM
Albert - Wonderful imagery gives the reader a very peaceful feeling - Wonderful poetry my friend - God Bless & Merry Christmas - mj
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Date: 12/9/2009 7:06:00 PM
Nice imagery used here winters beauty is a force to be weary of! Love It! Laura :)
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Date: 12/9/2009 6:34:00 PM
Nice poem...Maybe we'll get some snow this year in NC...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 12/9/2009 4:44:00 PM
Albert, nice poem. Been there done that for alot of years...now I know where those birds were going. .. right here in fla.! :) Robert
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