First Snowfall

The last of autumn’s leaves begins assault
Of winter gales. The sap within the trees
In hibernating xylems call a halt
To most activity to some degree.
The birds that once resided amongst them
Already left for warmer spots unknown.
A few remain behind but are condemned
To weather winters snow and ice alone.
The snow begins to fall. At first, a flake, 
Then more and more until the trees are white
And weighted. Branches, weak, begin to break
And fall to earth and soon are crowned despite
The slackened storm. The wind subsides and all
Is quiet and calmness follows the squall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/28/2010 9:02:00 AM
Another great read.
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Date: 2/3/2010 1:52:00 PM
I love the sonnet form though it took me a half dozen years to get it LOL and thanks for the great new word! xylems
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Date: 1/31/2010 9:54:00 AM
Gorgeous imagery in this most enjoyable write. Albert I am going to favorite both you and this poem. I hope to read a lot more of your work. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/14/2010 1:08:00 PM
VERY good sonnet writing. Love to see that iambic pentameter and the content! andrea (another sonneteer!)
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Date: 12/10/2009 6:55:00 AM
Albert - Wonderful imagery gives the reader a very peaceful feeling - Wonderful poetry my friend - God Bless & Merry Christmas - mj
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Date: 12/9/2009 7:06:00 PM
Nice imagery used here winters beauty is a force to be weary of! Love It! Laura :)
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Date: 12/9/2009 6:34:00 PM
Nice poem...Maybe we'll get some snow this year in NC...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 12/9/2009 4:44:00 PM
Albert, nice poem. Been there done that for alot of years...now I know where those birds were going. .. right here in fla.! :) Robert
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