An Epiphanic Moment

An epiphanic moment

pale dew drops clung to silky petals as
light breeze held wispy branchlets in its sway
blooms lay snug steeped in enigmatic scents,
waves pirouetting ,dainty in ascent
soon settled into ripples teasing seas
while mountains stood agape; tall silhouettes
of   sand   immortalised in castle shapes
bronze temple bells chimed  mellific  sweet tones
 hymns circumambulated God's grand thrones
who poured their  munificent boons across
the  yearning ambience without restraint.
time bowed down to a standstill watching with
deep reverence; sky gleamed in bright azure
aligning solemnly with beaming sun.
and distant twilight slackened its keen steps

    th a t   e p I p h a n I c  m o m e n t...
     

Date June 17 2017
Contest : Summer premier any theme any form max 25 lines sponsored by Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Canerdy Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 9:16 AM
Congrats on your win, Sushma. Janice
Singh Avatar
June 25, 2017 at 8:41 AM
Thanks, Janice!
Andresen Avatar
June 17, 2017 at 8:45 AM
- A beautiful moment for the eyes - A wonderful poem, Sushma :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Singh Avatar
June 18, 2017 at 11:39 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise!
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