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The Forgotten

lonely shadows fly like phantoms
sodium arc lights sickly yellow
the pallor of puss; an old mans bellow
the young rages for parents they never had them
the quiet cold of ebony rain
sepia toned photo seeking remembrance
young old women with too much experience
raspberry lip gloss she's homeless but vain
tenement skyline
lighthouse for the lost
children at sea
drowning in a ocean of humanity disdained
the writings on the wall
dope fiends in the hall
penitentiary collect calls
to grandma who accepts them all
mournfully I hear Marvin Gaye
"brother, brother, brother there are far too many of you dying"
lying in bed silently crying
"we got to find a better way here today"
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Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Old Barns, Old Folks and Old Wine

Old barns, old folks and old wine - an unlikely trio upon which to muse,
But the analogies will become manifest as upon each I proffer my views.
Though the vicissitudes of life have taken their toll on each (that is very clear),
They tend to become more beautiful and majestic with each passing year!

Old barns once sported crimson paint and were so handsome in their day,
But o'er the years the scorching sun turned their boards to a silvery gray.
A fragile framework of hand-hewn oak and wooden pegs holds them together.
They lean precariously but despite the howling gales, they resisted raging weather!

Like old barns, old folks may wear a few scars and wrinkles here and there,
And lean upon a cane to steady themselves and wear crowns of silver hair,
But 'tis the inner beauty of their very souls that shines in all they do,
Having overcome the storms of life and the seasons they've struggled through!

Alas, old barns and old folks lose their sap as their years steadily decline,
But they gracefully mellow as they age like a splendid vintage wine!
They've both maintained their dignity through many trials untold,
But each of them must ruefully face the fact that they are growing old!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
© All Rights Reserved
Form: Rhyme

Blaze of Glory

A sudden scurry of light 
flashed across the darkened sky
cosmic particles flew across
the horizon creating enough light to
attract these wandering eyes.
A fiery display like fireflies
leaving a trail of glowing embers
weaving a pattern of radiant light 
through the darkened night.
A sense of cosmic games being played
by bodies as old as time itself
falling from heaven's grace
in a flood of color and flames.
Across the sky comets moving like balloons
on a string to the delight of children 
looking into the night.
Again appeared in that expanse of space
the death of a far away star
blazing its eerie trail across the night sky -
leaving momentarily a ribbon of light; then to be seen-
-no more.
A celestial grand plan put in place
by other than man, only He could devise
such a thing to hang stars as ornaments
in the sky, leaving man to provide only
names for someone else's scheme.

Everything in life has its time and place
yet what more to seek, but not to find,
than a falling star to treat these old eyes of mine.

So whenever our call comes to follow these flaming beauties -
shall we go quietly to a darkened space,
or shall we like these celestial things, leave this life
in a blaze of glory - a lasting moment of beauty and grace,
as we move on to some other place.


New York City Blues

The terminal prophesised an eternal line
 of moving faces arriving at their destination,
 mothers hold their screaming babies
as the business guys drank their coffee
 like insomniac puppets on strings
valleys n lagoons of young children and elderly folk
 all moved in a singular motion
 to a melee of sound buzzing above their heads
 a hubbub of civilisation on soap dish.          
Back to life with the old soul and the funky dollar bill
 like genoas khan lost in new York city
 with new York city blues,
 watching the jet planes fly above the mass of buildings
 circling the weather stations in New Orleans
 in autumn winds and summer rain in Chicago
 floating like clouds with its over whelming usual conscience
  Towering over towers of old motor’s
 with junk yard hands on the dog 
and the women drinking buds swearing at a elderly man 
for having a faulty back tire on his bike 
and the look of hell shaved fear on his face,
 used to be in Korea and nam probably still thinks he is.
© Jak Woods  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Imagism

Premium Member Road Unknown

We've passed it by........so many times 
Along this twisted........ asphalt highway
A sign that's nailed,....... so crudely fashioned
       To peeling bark.......upon the yoke of gnarled, old cottonwood tree.
It marks a fork of the ....backwood road                                                                             
Where gravel branches....bends and sways                                                                         
  And meanders through......the glade                                                                >>.....???
                  Where lies a ...... dry creek bed                                                    >...
     And poison oak thrives ......and secrets hide                                            >...
   Home for an old battered mailbox.......lonely and bereft                        >...
            So many times,.......so many other days in passing by             >...
      Catching glimpse of........peeling painted evidence                     >...
     Of something which lies....... beyond our view                      >...
     Have I wondered.........  pondered, what lies beyond...         >... 
        What course if  .........we followed....                              >...  
      If just this once ........we turned and broke away          >....
                             .......... ......................................>.....>
                          .......... ...................................>......
Changed our course....... followed the unknown.
Where the creek ......... runs dry,
And banks are rife........
   With chokecherry....... and willow scrub
The leaves layered.......  with chalk white dust
                            ........
Will we ever know .............
                                 ......... What lies beyond the fork in the road?
                                   .........    Will we ever know?.....
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Form: Shape

Bitterness

No bitterness, better than me
No measurement of sour, nor apple pulled off
No old man on a corner talking to himself
No old story
No hurt that hadn’t hurt already
No cause for sounding off
No worse than you
No reason for all the things said
No worry, when no one worries, when I’m dead
No reason
No reasonable rhyme
No worries while I’m
No wonder. . . out of time, with
No bitter. . . less. . . than what I left behind
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Form:


Premium Member Moon People

When others sleep 
I lie awake
Waiting
For night
To become day.

Rubbing 
The sun
From my eyes
Everything I 
Tried to forget
Comes back
Like an angry wave.

Hearing about the hurricane
And the neglect
I went to New Orleans
Barely knew the place
Only what I heard
Creoles and Mardi Gras 
The Big Easy and 
Good times
A distant city singing
Its own sad song
From the South.
 
Long days and 
Months later
A fever came round 
From damp nights and bad food
A public health doctor
Looked at me
With an innocence
And worry
I haven’t seen 
Since childhood. 
 
Restless
One night
I set out 
Towards the outskirts 
Of the city.
 
Fires burned everywhere
Violence 
Lay waiting
In gaping holes
Of empty houses
And abandoned cars
The spider web of
Death
Hovered above
Waiting for its next victim 
I thought I saw the worst
But I hadn’t.
 
On a garbage strewn road
Was an old woman
Patiently 
Stirring some sort of gumbo
In a beat up tin pot
I approached her
In the darkness
We were
Two solitary 
Figures on a dirt road
The space between us 
No more than a foot
From the fire 
The veins on the back of her hands 
Stood out
Her face hidden in the flickering shadows
“I’m noticing you 
You’re a stranger
You don’t belong here.”
 
Looking past me
She asked,
“Tell me mister
If they put a man on the moon
Can't they rescue people in a flood?’
I had no answer 
Tapping the spoon
Against the side of the pot
She spoke to no one in particular, 
“Must be
We got to be people
On the moon
Before anyone can help us”.
Behind us
Shadows moved
Heavy voices were heard.

A sudden downpour came 
The rain turning
The dirt road to mud
The old woman shrugged and left
I walked back to camp
Leaving as lost 
As I came.
 
The night
Became a faint memory
I slept forever
Exhausted
I opened my eyes
To see wet clothes
And muddy boots 
In the corner
Of my room
Then I knew
The night
Hadn’t been
A dream after all.
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Form: Narrative

Remembering Erie...

The house wasn't much to look at, 
Although it was grand in its day.
But we never got tired of visiting, 
Or seeing the family on Sunday.

The floors were old and creaky,
The walls were strong and tall.
The yard was ever the smallest,
Yet, we still found a way to play ball.

The clock in the kitchen kept pendulum time,
Its gentle gongs...as the hours were to go.
The louder sounds of plinking from the front room,
As we toyed with the keys of the old piano.

The sweet aromas from the bakery next door, 
Wafter over us in the air.
Always reminding one of that pleasant place,
Filled with cakes and cookies and eclairs.

We didn't understand the words, 
That our Grandparents often were to say.
The polish banter among our parents,
The adults kept their secrets from us that way.

Our Moms were helping Grandma in the kitchen,
Our Dads on the porch playing cards.
We ran our own little games outside,
More noise and laughter from the yard.

Only the memories now remain.
And sometimes after a day of aching hands and weary feet,
My mind turns to those happy childhood days,
As I remember the times spent...on Erie Street.
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Real Beauty

Beauty …
Has this word lost its meaning?
Is not the flower opening its
pedals to the morning more
beautiful than the
repressed mother
dressing up her 8 year old to 
compete in her own,
lost dream?
Is there not more beauty in
the 9 year old with
no mom
who still loves life and
achieves her dreams?
Has beauty really become
bought
and Nature can only take you
so far?
Isn’t beauty helping someone cross
the street? Fixing someone’s flat?
Carrying groceries to
their car?
Breast implants, nose jobs,
tummy tucks and
collagen are being touted
as the new you …
 really?
Aren’t you beautiful when you smile
because you heard
something funny? Or when your
eyes glitter
because you see something you love?
Isn’t beauty the crickets talking at
night as you think?
Holding hands with one
you love 
as you walk bare-foot in the 
grass? Isn’t that beautiful?
Beauty …
Don’t lose sight of
what it really is.

Premium Member Dreamtime: State Fair of Mind

DREAMTIME: STATE FAIR OF MIND 

the barren vendor 
 sold wishes 
 to those 

 hoping 
 to 
 forget 

 at the back of the room 
 wizened old men 
 sat together on a bench 
 across from old fur hats 

 tricornes and hamburgs 
 bowlers and fedoras 
 high hats, admiral hats 
 and others 
 too rare 
 for my knowledge 
 or experience 
 all positioned firmly 
 on 
 head stretchers 
 covered in dust 

 a reminder 
 linking the past 

 now 
  the old Black man 
 who governed this booth 
 sold large 
 round chocolate bars 
 handmade 
 of finest quality 

 he offered my friend one 
 but 
 strangely 
 ignored me 

 everyone 
 gathered in the field 
 as wagons passed by 
 on parade 

 the 
 atmosphere 
 was quite gay 
 carnival like 

 friends 
 waving to each other 

 no 
 one 
 recognized 
 me
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Too Much Time

petals
they fall freely to the ground
why do they not fly
is the earth so warm that they must be reunited

where were you when you saw me
I wonder this a lot
was I truly beautiful in my simplicity that I was and I am
that I blossomed something unique
O how plain she is; you must of thought
she must be hiding a great sense that I must uncover

life is so boorish 
especially in times like this
times where the bed and laying in it, is the event of day
and my hand is the person I will be speaking to of things of not

Am I selfish?
Am I a human being that wishes the well being of other human beings
or do I wish for a mass of people to die to better my own comforts
so there will be more room for me and my love
and less people to decimate this planet

I love puppies
I love kittens
I seem to love creatures in the infant form
Many others do also
we coo and aw the babies of others
and cuddle the month old dog
but does it mean we appreciate life and it's giving
or do we cherish the beginning of youth
and wish to discard the coming of age
the coming of the old looking face in the mirror that you not know be yours
or the fear of death is coming closer with every year 
and step of a body not young

ever changing is the swallow in the sky that does not fly
but stay stuck in the throat of one that has not eaten...

sometimes I think
sometimes I think too much
sometimes I think I have too much time on my hands

The World's Way

The old and young are seldom near,
Their voices sound apart:
What makes one laugh, brings one a tear,
Each has a different heart.

The young think Love’s a Tragedy,
And older men are fools;
The old reject youth’s honesty,
And challenging of rules.
© Steve Eng  Create an image from this poem.
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Form: Verse

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