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Dreamtime: State Fair of Mind

DREAMTIME: STATE FAIR OF MIND the barren vendor sold wishes to those hoping to forget at the back of the room wizened old men sat together on a bench across from old fur hats tricornes and hamburgs bowlers and fedoras high hats, admiral hats and others too rare for my knowledge or experience all positioned firmly on head stretchers covered in dust a reminder linking the past now the old Black man who governed this booth sold large round chocolate bars handmade of finest quality he offered my friend one but strangely ignored me everyone gathered in the field as wagons passed by on parade the atmosphere was quite gay carnival like friends waving to each other no one recognized me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/16/2018 12:13:00 PM
An intriguing dream I wish I could sit and listen to more of Jim. This is hauntingly wonderful.
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 4/16/2018 7:09:00 PM
Thanks FJ...would love to tell you!
Date: 5/13/2011 6:51:00 PM
James.. congratulations on your wonderful feature of the week... I sure enjoyed... take care,..p.d
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Date: 5/9/2011 4:45:00 PM
not sure I got it..but I sure liked it. congrats on being featured.l BG
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Date: 5/9/2011 10:24:00 AM
James,congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/9/2011 7:59:00 AM
All the smoke, spitoons and old time flavor. Love this dream and the way you unfold it. Congrats on this super write. Love, daver
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 4/16/2018 7:08:00 PM
Miss you Daver r.i.p. my longtime friend...
Date: 5/9/2011 5:26:00 AM
Conratulations on your poem being featured this week, James
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Date: 5/8/2011 4:51:00 PM
Congrats james on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. a great one to share with us all my friend with luv... on this special day of luv..
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Date: 9/1/2009 9:17:00 AM
Sometimes that's a blessing. Sometimes it just hurts. Vince
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Date: 6/11/2009 9:00:00 AM
Invisible To Others. A Known Feeling In My Life.
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Date: 4/5/2009 12:54:00 PM
I get that alot. :)
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Date: 3/17/2009 6:43:00 PM
Dear Jim, This reminds me of the Beatles song "NOWHERE MAN" I have been Here in THIS POEM I even waved to those who did not see me ALWAYS YOURS...HG
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