Road Unknown

We've passed it by........so many times 
Along this twisted........ asphalt highway
A sign that's nailed,....... so crudely fashioned
       To peeling bark.......upon the yoke of gnarled, old cottonwood tree.
It marks a fork of the ....backwood road                                                                             
Where gravel branches....bends and sways                                                                         
  And meanders through......the glade                                                                >>.....???
                  Where lies a ...... dry creek bed                                                    >...
     And poison oak thrives ......and secrets hide                                            >...
   Home for an old battered mailbox.......lonely and bereft                        >...
            So many times,.......so many other days in passing by             >...
      Catching glimpse of........peeling painted evidence                     >...
     Of something which lies....... beyond our view                      >...
     Have I wondered.........  pondered, what lies beyond...         >... 
        What course if  .........we followed....                              >...  
      If just this once ........we turned and broke away          >....
                             .......... ......................................>.....>
                          .......... ...................................>......
Changed our course....... followed the unknown.
Where the creek ......... runs dry,
And banks are rife........
   With chokecherry....... and willow scrub
The leaves layered.......  with chalk white dust
                            ........
Will we ever know .............
                                 ......... What lies beyond the fork in the road?
                                   .........    Will we ever know?.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Hickman Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 8:29 PM
I have seen this road in real life and dreams,what a vivid picture with wonderful descriptions you have penned within,,,Thank you for reading my words and leaving behind your words,,,Blessings..Cecil
George   Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 6:59 AM
Dear Carrie, Very creative and thought evoking. Thank you for shariang. Love Lainie
Strand Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 11:29 PM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Carrie.Rgds Brian
Dvorkis Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 7:28 PM
I see it, I see where the sign would be, and for me it would read "Enter at own risk". The unknown is at once dangerous and enthralling. There's no safety net, no predictability. Some people crave it believing the mystery has all the answers to their wildest dreams. Others, like me, avoid taking risks knowing sooner or later the risks will come to us. The unknown is everywhere, all we do is hide from it under a semblance of normalcy and routine. For me every road is unknown...ay there's the rub.
Goff Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 6:08 AM
incredible art! Carrie!... story-line is amazing! wll done! my friend! and thanks for congrats!... jim
Golden Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 8:41 PM
Fantastic write, Carrie! Are you entering this into the contest? Hope so. Hugs, Donna
Sheart Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 1:26 PM
Hi Carrie So very creative, smile. Very provocative, I was captivated reading it! Thanks for sharing.Love Light Truth Patricia
Guzzi Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 12:21 PM
lovely concept verse..the road less travel! very like R. Frost. Light & Love
Freeman Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 9:01 AM
Unique in the form itself Carrie. And the message itself so intriguing. My what a though it provokes in me. Just to share a little, if we would travel that unknown road it would lead us out of the box our minds have painted us into, and set us free from so many problems in our life, we have created only in our minds. Sincerely, Love, Moses
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 7:39 AM
Beautiful words flow along this winding road. Very nice, Carrie. Lovingly, Dane
Strand Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 11:46 PM
Carrie thank yoy for sharing your precious giftings here with us and thank you for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian
Chircop Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 3:12 PM
one of the best of best--to myfavs my dear friend--Charma
Moreno Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 11:45 AM
Love this Carrie, you are on fire, Concrete is a favorite of mine and you did an amazing job...Raul
Kendrick Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 11:29 AM
Drew me into this fantasy. Made me think of another time and place. Keep writng. Sara
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