Best Huitain Poems

Drizzle and frizzled hair crinkles,
such sounds demand a symphony;
Clammy cold showered with sprinkles 
there’s a vibe that says ‘Be easy.’
Stock up the wood burning fire place,
it’s raining I’ll send you a song;
Smoke creates a treble clef trace,
that rhythm will help you along....

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~Dreaming~
(Spanish Huitain)


Dreaming the impossible not a crime
You can do it don't make it hard
Many mountains there are to climb
But it is your choice you hold card
Be bold and just hold your ground
You will make it right to the top
Sooner or later you'll get reward
Don't give...

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(Spanish Huitain) 


Focus my eyes on Him each day 
He's always with me when in need 
Jesus is best friend I do say 
He dwells in my heart and head 
His words inspires me when read 
With me whenever I do go 
He's always there...

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~Spring's Almost Here~
(Huitain)


One more time spring is almost here
Such a nice season to enjoy
When weather gets warmer and fair
Children play outside with their toy.

Not a lot of cold to annoy
Brand new green leaves grow in each tree
The sights of spring gives lots of joy
Birds butterflies...

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~Spring Is  Almost Here~
(Huitain)


One more time spring is almost here
Such a nice season to enjoy
When weather gets warmer and fair
Children play outside with their toy.

Not a lot of cold to annoy
Brand new green leaves grow in each tree
The sights of spring gives lots of...

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~God's Beautiful Masterpiece~
(Huitain)

The beauty of springtime shows great
God paints everything nice and new
Nature's beauty seems complete
See delightful sights and hues
Magic of spring is nice to view
After the rigors of winter
Spring charmingly appears to woo
Spring, a breeze of fresh air so true.


Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2012


December.12.2015...

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My walk’s slow, but I’m in no rush my friend.
Day will finish itself, night comes so what?
I’ll stop by some ‘bo’s campfire at light’s end,
be with like men, share some humor or smut.
I’ll spend night with vacant space in my gut.
Rail walk’s no soft piece...

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ITS FINE TO CRY AND GRIEVE
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my tale of fairies please believe.
many a day i meditate,
sat crossed legged or often prostrate,
and fairies come, my woes relieve.
casting fun spells they preconceive.
they know how to restore my mind,
back to where it should be, they're kind.
told me its fine,...

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Pleasing me is easy to do;
A trip your rambunctious nature,
I’m happy just being near you;
Speaking with that brand of candor 
I get a buzz off of what’s true;
So why do you make it so hard?
Flying straight into such rapture,
caress me don’t be a coward....

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More than a little bit transient 
except when I look in your eyes; 
My soul frozen by your cement
grounded by faith my spirit flies; 
Balance is what you emphasize 
without a ‘you’ there is no ‘me’;
Our lows are the flip side of highs, 
the yin...

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The inner stench hangs in the air 
permeating the entire room;
Straight funk is just too much to bear;
Residue swept up with a broom,
can’t hide decrepit with perfume;
What’s real and fantasy can’t switch;
Throw trash out or you may consume 
 a rotten idiot sandwich....

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Third degree burns? I just get hot;
Finally, deep enough to wound;
Painful skin grafts can't get a shot,
to my frequency you were tuned;
Beneath the surface desire crooned,
I'll be your willing apprentice;
Eyes flashing 'Danger' I just swooned,
thriving in a consuming kiss....

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Fireballs of far off feather stars 
lucid dreams they touch and tickle;
Diamonds dancing dazzling Mars
mirage of something magical;
It passed  me something practical
writing on my soul with knowledge;
Tossed in a well with a nickel
waiting to capture high voltage....

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Flushed cheeks and filled with serene truth,  
on a lake of rose quartz I skate; 
Coral ice surrounds and starts to soothe
a warm smile slowly radiates; 
My temperature elevates
I do a spin and understand 
part of the dance is always fate;
If I slip hold...

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I can be something of a ham,
take my energy or leave it;
Here’s the deal I am what I am;
Imperfectly immaculate
is the vibe I aim to transmit;
Addictive I have no gateway;
Left so hungry with a tidbit,
come feed on a seasoned entree....

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