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I Focus My Eyes On Him Each Day- Spanish Huitain

(Spanish Huitain) Focus my eyes on Him each day He's always with me when in need Jesus is best friend I do say He dwells in my heart and head His words inspires me when read With me whenever I do go He's always there when I'm in need Brings joy when pain in my heart grow. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 November,23,2014
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Dunn Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 10:08 PM
Dorian your words of faith have brought a smile to my face and put a warmth of love into this old heart of mine this evening I'm glad I stopped by to read it before I head off to sleep take care my young poet, cheri
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 10:33 PM
Thank you so much for your very kind feedback you just warmed my very heart with it, my dear friend Cheryl. Xxxx D. :) love and hugs! xxxx D.
Callus Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 8:06 AM
An admirable show of faith, Dorian. You walk in excellent company! // paul
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 10:36 PM
That sure do Paul! Thank you so kindly for dropping by and all my dear friend.:) love and hugs! xxxx D.
Carroll Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 12:07 AM
Wonderful spirit filled write Dorian!
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 10:38 PM
Thank you my good friend Ken! Much appreciate your kind comment! :) Love and light! xxxx D.
Martin Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 7:20 PM
I have to agree with "Gnik" below...it's obvious your faith is far greater than the tiny mustard seed but more like a giant oak tree! Nicely penned poem and I'm certain the Lord is smiling because of it. By the way, what's a "Huitain"? Cheers, Terry
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 10:41 PM
Hope you're right Terrell! Thank you my dear friend for wonderful feedback. Have a great week! :) Love and hugs! xxx D
Gnik Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 11:03 AM
Very profound indeed. Words that inspire, full of faith. I wish I was a stronger believer like you are. A well written poem.
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 10:43 PM
Thank you my dear friend Nehpets! Most kind of you!:) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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