Frizzled Huitain

Drizzle and frizzled hair crinkles,
such sounds demand a symphony;
Clammy cold showered with sprinkles 
there’s a vibe that says ‘Be easy.’
Stock up the wood burning fire place,
it’s raining I’ll send you a song;
Smoke creates a treble clef trace,
that rhythm will help you along.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 4:44 AM
Truly poetic, short, full of life! fave
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