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Smooth Caress

Fingers pause across the ivory
         longing to create melodies

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Iridescence and subliminal flow has condensed within your fragrant bower,
a scene of isolated beauty that portrays the essence of all splendour and redeeming 
power.

You are repose and renewal to my longing soul
which in hunger for such a sight could have stayed unrequited still!
barren and with plighted role unto my desperate ill.

Now seen suffused in the radiant glow of you, like mirrors
are placed  surrounding flowers inset in your resting place or in bunches, 
frieze like and still, are coloured floral showers.

They experience no passing hour, in lilac clad repose, you gift this domain
with abundant russet locks a’ spray in a cascade of feral purity
shining vibrant gleams, diaphanous and serenity proclaimed.

You exude ephemeral and delicate majesty in coalescence 
with this limpid mystic scene, pure spiritual visions profound combine 
with siren-like illusion seen.

Desire calls as from traces etched on heavenly walls,
reflected pinions fan-like show through emerald hued illumination
in subtle sweeps below the surface of this inviolable creation. 


© Joe Maverick 21-02-2011

Footnote: I have written this piece for the Reflections contest by Constance La 
France. This is a fictional write and I ascribe none of the above attributes to the 
scene or character names, these same attributes belonging solely to Yahwah, the 
one God manifest as Father, Son and Holy Spirit.
Form: Rhyme

Celestial Affair

Take off your veil o beauty,
  your moles can't hide your sorrows and nudity,
    is the longing causing quiet and peace?,
      you will arrive again and him will seek,
        loaded with stones and shaded with shades,
         like a beautiful bride smiling in escapade,
          decorated with black and a flirtatious tiara,
            seduce your lovers and take them to euphoria,
              celebrate your wait before he arrives,
                elevate our senses and your lover deprived,
                 following him daily is your ritual,
                  fortunate our advantage he ain't so punctual,
                   you wait patiently with your tiara and stones,
                    maintain utmost calm in stubborn bones,
                     make no movement, make no sigh, wait for him and you hope high,
                      hours have passed and centuries gone,
                       your undying love and longing never groans,
He appears finally... smitten by your charms, wishes to grab a chance in your game of trance,
  smiling wide and filled with power he squishes your moles, feeling like a tower,
    you don't smile... you don't cry...rather shy away and think not fine,
      to let him feel... so long denied,
         with red cheeks and crimson temple...you smile at him nonchalantly,
           he comes in your way and questions you gallantly, no reply, you don't try 
              to forgive and give...love long declined,
                 angered and suffered he aims high and breaks your tiara so crystalline,
                   slip away o beauty! 
                      Shadows define your presence in his agony,
                        slip away o beauty! 
                           To arrive again in your stones and nudity......
Form: Narrative


Can You Teel Me the Way To Middle Earth?

Friend - Can you show 
me the way to Middle Earth?

Enough of this century 
of angst and warfare

My desire is to see
  elves singing in the
twilight

The creations of the dwarves 
beckon to me 
and I understand their love 
of mirthril

Friend - please point
me in the direction 
of the Last Homely House

My longing to see Elrond 
and Arwen Evenstar is 
something I can barely control

Does your map show 
  the way to Lothlorien?

Celeborn and Galadriel still
  reign in that enchanted wood

I pine to see mallorn trees

Do you know the way 
to the Shire?

I want to be there
in early autumn

When the harvests are in 

And I would like to 
quaff cold Shire - Ale 

With any Baggins, Took 
or Gamgee who will 
drink with me

Friend - Please show me 
the way to Middle Earth
me

The Place

Let me take you to a land,sit my sweet and listen,
about dragons,and wizards, and fairies that glisten,
where the sun shines red,and the land so blue,
and raindrops so pink when they shower on you,
and you walk through this place,that kisses your feet,
and animals follow,they are longing to meet,
strange and gentle they follow your sound,
our sing attracts with the music around,
together we walk and take in the place,
and i look down at you and your little face,
but now we go home and wake from our dream,
and remember,and talk about all that we've seen.
Form:

Hope

In rampant destruction cities over run by the sea,
On high ground she tames to love the ones still alive.
The helicopters move with in the dark war clouds looking;
For survivors from the holocaust that plagues the earth.

Some that survive are jungle women on the mountain slopes,
Digging for food in the under growth of wild green bushes, 
Together they compliment each other in their searches;
With longing she holds the reptile to learn she is alive.

Forsaken the humanity collapses around her,
Enjoys his supple moist body trailing over her naked skin,   
Waking to the joy, like a man’s hand crushing her softness.
Wishes for the lords’ intervention to end her ordeal:

Yonder behind the lone big boulder a young boy watches;
Wondering if she was a worthy suitable match for him?     



 Picture Prompt Ref:-
http://hebuss.free.fr/img/bw4/boris_vallejo_bw_neverseeneveragain.jpg
© Jai Garg  Create an image from this poem.


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