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Smooth Caress

Fingers pause across the ivory
         longing to create melodies

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Stacey Watts

Date: 1/25/2011 6:40:00 PM

This was very well written. I enjoyed the verse greatly.

John Freeman

Date: 1/24/2011 10:38:00 AM

"Congratulations Doris!" on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/14/2011 10:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Doris in ^Rick Parise's contest "The Piano". Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/12/2011 1:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your HM in Rick's contest, Doris! Always, Annalise

Noel Villarosa

Date: 1/11/2011 11:35:00 PM

Very clever, you showed the outlined figure of the temptation to play a piano. Congratulations in your successful win for this contest, Doris. (^_^) Noel.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/11/2011 2:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this wonderful work..Mom

Kash Poet

Date: 1/11/2011 10:10:00 AM

Congratulations Doris on your HM win with this beautiful Crystalline-kashinath

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/11/2011 9:22:00 AM

Congratulations on this HM win in the contest, Doris

Nick Bagnall

Date: 1/11/2011 3:57:00 AM

Very nice - enjoyed reading

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2011 10:10:00 PM

I really love yours, Doris. Congratulations. Luv, Andrea

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/10/2011 5:37:00 PM

lovely crystalline , congrats on your HM Doris

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/10/2011 5:14:00 PM

Congrats Doris on your HM in Rick's Piano contest with this vibrant entry luv.. enjoy your very special honor tonight with luv...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/10/2011 5:11:00 PM

Way to to, Doris. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 1/9/2011 5:32:00 AM

Lovely Crystalline Doris, good luck in the contest....:)

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 1/8/2011 7:14:00 PM

Hey Doris...this is a very nice Crystalline...good luck in the contest...Jimmy

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/8/2011 1:27:00 PM

best wishes in the contest with this Doris.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/8/2011 12:02:00 PM

It makes you wonder if great composers sat and paused while they were creating melodies. Nice write. Love Phyl

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/8/2011 10:42:00 AM

Hello Doris, I can see myself sitting and playing at the piano as we speak. Beautiful, just Beautiful. As Always, Shar

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/8/2011 10:12:00 AM

Excellent entry Doris.... Beautiful image of the Piano and what it gives..love Michael

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/8/2011 7:38:00 AM

Hi Doris, this is really funny! I tried it several times to send you my receipe and always received an "Error-Info" from Soup. No I realized that the first part of my receipe was mailed! The second part I'd sent you oon Facebook! Your beef must taste very good! Here we h´got a food-scandal with toxic eggs and meat (poultry and porc) with a high dosage of dioxin (!!!) So I prefer fish at the moment. Thank you for your kind comments and have a great new year!...All the best, Gert

James Peranteau

Date: 1/8/2011 6:31:00 AM

Very visual Crystalline dear poet ! Picture perfect ! much love, james

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/8/2011 5:14:00 AM

Yes, passion of heart is awakened with the soft and smooth caress, Doris

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/8/2011 5:11:00 AM

Good one..Reads like a winner to me ..Good luck ..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Mom

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/8/2011 5:06:00 AM

Hi doris, here is the receipe for Green Sauce: Green Sauce Ingrediences 1 pint Yoghurt (fat reduced) ½ pint of sour cream Mixture of 8 herbs, fresh or frozen and minced 1 Tablespoon mustard 1 Tablespoon horseradish Ground black pepper (according to taste) Salt If the Green Sauce should be more liquid, you can add some milk

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/8/2011 3:07:00 AM

ohhh, the yearning for love of music... such an array of lyrical words that punctuate your feelings! lovely, doris... here's to much winning luck in the contest... just did mine too!! :) nette

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