Smooth Caress

Fingers pause across the ivory
         longing to create melodies
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Watts Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 6:40 PM
This was very well written. I enjoyed the verse greatly.
Freeman Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 10:38 AM
"Congratulations Doris!" on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 10:08 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Doris in ^Rick Parise's contest "The Piano". Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 1:03 PM
Congratulations on your HM in Rick's contest, Doris! Always, Annalise
Villarosa Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 11:35 PM
Very clever, you showed the outlined figure of the temptation to play a piano. Congratulations in your successful win for this contest, Doris. (^_^) Noel.
Kendrick Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 2:44 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful work..Mom
Poet Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 10:10 AM
Congratulations Doris on your HM win with this beautiful Crystalline-kashinath
Mehta Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 9:22 AM
Congratulations on this HM win in the contest, Doris
Bagnall Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 3:57 AM
Very nice - enjoyed reading
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 10:10 PM
I really love yours, Doris. Congratulations. Luv, Andrea
Roberts Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 5:37 PM
lovely crystalline , congrats on your HM Doris
Sweetheart Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 5:14 PM
Congrats Doris on your HM in Rick's Piano contest with this vibrant entry luv.. enjoy your very special honor tonight with luv...
Devonshire Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 5:11 PM
Way to to, Doris. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn
Fraser Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 5:32 AM
Lovely Crystalline Doris, good luck in the contest....:)
Anderson Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 7:14 PM
Hey Doris...this is a very nice Crystalline...good luck in the contest...Jimmy
Maverick Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 1:27 PM
best wishes in the contest with this Doris.
Babcock Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 12:02 PM
It makes you wonder if great composers sat and paused while they were creating melodies. Nice write. Love Phyl
Ruebel Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 10:42 AM
Hello Doris, I can see myself sitting and playing at the piano as we speak. Beautiful, just Beautiful. As Always, Shar
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January 8, 2011 at 10:12 AM
Excellent entry Doris.... Beautiful image of the Piano and what it gives..love Michael
Knop Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 7:38 AM
Hi Doris, this is really funny! I tried it several times to send you my receipe and always received an "Error-Info" from Soup. No I realized that the first part of my receipe was mailed! The second part I'd sent you oon Facebook! Your beef must taste very good! Here we h´got a food-scandal with toxic eggs and meat (poultry and porc) with a high dosage of dioxin (!!!) So I prefer fish at the moment. Thank you for your kind comments and have a great new year!...All the best, Gert
Peranteau Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 6:31 AM
Very visual Crystalline dear poet ! Picture perfect ! much love, james
Mehta Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 5:14 AM
Yes, passion of heart is awakened with the soft and smooth caress, Doris
Kendrick Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 5:11 AM
Good one..Reads like a winner to me ..Good luck ..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Mom
Knop Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 5:06 AM
Hi doris, here is the receipe for Green Sauce: Green Sauce Ingrediences 1 pint Yoghurt (fat reduced) ½ pint of sour cream Mixture of 8 herbs, fresh or frozen and minced 1 Tablespoon mustard 1 Tablespoon horseradish Ground black pepper (according to taste) Salt If the Green Sauce should be more liquid, you can add some milk
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January 8, 2011 at 3:07 AM
ohhh, the yearning for love of music... such an array of lyrical words that punctuate your feelings! lovely, doris... here's to much winning luck in the contest... just did mine too!! :) nette
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