Celestial Affair

Take off your veil o beauty,
  your moles can't hide your sorrows and nudity,
    is the longing causing quiet and peace?,
      you will arrive again and him will seek,
        loaded with stones and shaded with shades,
         like a beautiful bride smiling in escapade,
          decorated with black and a flirtatious tiara,
            seduce your lovers and take them to euphoria,
              celebrate your wait before he arrives,
                elevate our senses and your lover deprived,
                 following him daily is your ritual,
                  fortunate our advantage he ain't so punctual,
                   you wait patiently with your tiara and stones,
                    maintain utmost calm in stubborn bones,
                     make no movement, make no sigh, wait for him and you hope high,
                      hours have passed and centuries gone,
                       your undying love and longing never groans,
He appears finally... smitten by your charms, wishes to grab a chance in your game of trance,
  smiling wide and filled with power he squishes your moles, feeling like a tower,
    you don't smile... you don't cry...rather shy away and think not fine,
      to let him feel... so long denied,
         with red cheeks and crimson temple...you smile at him nonchalantly,
           he comes in your way and questions you gallantly, no reply, you don't try 
              to forgive and give...love long declined,
                 angered and suffered he aims high and breaks your tiara so crystalline,
                   slip away o beauty! 
                      Shadows define your presence in his agony,
                        slip away o beauty! 
                           To arrive again in your stones and nudity......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/31/2010 12:46:00 PM
I love how you decided to write your poem as well as it sounding like a good old fashioned epic type poem. Congratulations on your win!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/27/2010 12:18:00 PM
I give you a top mark for two reasons. You shft the words with seamless craft and your passion flows controlled, just barely, but never into ranting or self parody, which is not easy to do-in effect, walking a tighrope. Here, you suceeded. Keep this. Best wishes to you, Gerard
Login to Reply
Date: 8/25/2010 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations Rinki on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Holy Mole-y". Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 8/23/2010 7:29:00 AM
congrats on your win with this lovely poem
Login to Reply
Date: 8/22/2010 7:10:00 PM
Very expressive, rinki, Congratulations! LUv, Andrea
Login to Reply
Date: 8/22/2010 2:09:00 PM
Congrats RAJ on your winning poem in Nikko's contest... awesome as usual.. enjoyed on my wedding day..luv...ciao..
Login to Reply
Date: 8/22/2010 5:38:00 AM
Great poem, Rinki. Congratulations on your win! Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 8/22/2010 4:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nikko's contest Rinki, enjoy your day :) Wilma
Login to Reply
Date: 8/22/2010 4:49:00 AM
Hi Rinki -- I just found this so beautiful yet also haunting in its own way and I just had to consider it even if it wasn't listed as rhyme-- I think the format was also captivating-- what a story you've woven here! Congratulations for being among my winners :) -- nikko :)
Login to Reply
Date: 8/22/2010 3:53:00 AM
Many congratulations rinki on your win in Nikko's contest with this fine witty poem >> James
Login to Reply
Date: 8/11/2010 8:02:00 PM
I would enter it if it were me .. it may be something NIKKO is looking for in her contest and if u win wonderful..if u don't no harm done..keep trying as contests are the way to get read and noticed ..sponsors remember poems that hit them just right.. keep trying my friend.. with luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 8/11/2010 3:41:00 PM
WoW.. this is awesome.. don't know if u could call it rhyme butif u could u could enter it in the Holy Mole-y contest posted..luv..
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad