Best Detractor Poems
Shackles of LoveShackles of cynicism have displaced your heart,
the love that once transcended time is no more.
No wordsmith can bring beauty to an invisible emotion,
lost in translation to an ignorant uncultured mind.
As you searched for a definition of the tangible,
intangible feelings were ignored, even with eyes shut.
Funny,...
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Categories:
detractor, analogy, love,
Form:
Free verse
A Flower of Peace`
The last breath expelled from my lungs called your name
as I fall to the ground on this dark battlefield
Weary and worn from the conflict so senseless,
I reach now in search of your locket concealed
It has tasted my blood and my sweat in its lifetime,
my strength...
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Categories:
detractor, flower, peace, war,
Form:
Rhyme
Dark Matter MattersDark matter seems to be
What isn’t there to be seen
In between
What we see.
They dub it dark since you cannot detect it
Nor can they inspect it
With telescopy.
Yet, while it can’t be descried
It cannot be denied
For equations that irk
To work.
Should dark matter matter,
Would dark matter matter
A titter...
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Categories:
detractor, creation, dark, deep, earth,
Form:
Rhyme
Count On Itcount on it...
that numbers made the world
we came to believe
after all ten digits
long ago ran out
and we stuck our toes into the fray
to count and be counted anyway
and they too ran out
a foot at a time
and numbers became stuck to
our rulers feet or...
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Categories:
detractor, imagination, introspection,
Form:
Narrative
Is It IFor whom do you write, vainglorious poet?
Who are the disciples you seek?
Shall converts worship at the altar of your prose;
Devoutly reciting your works?
Is there passion alight in your breast;
The call of some unknown muse?
Or does your pen labor of its own accord,
Guided by some universal...
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Categories:
detractor, confusion, corruption, creation, introspection,
Form:
Free verse
Word Order World OrderOrder of creation. And Light was.) and from darkness separate'
God created the globe..' No other can lay claim to that state.!
Though satan continually tries, in covetousness and by lies
A squatter only, I hear he has sold leaseholds that some vip's hold.?
Or so they lay claim...
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Categories:
detractor, abuse, angst, anti bullying,
Form:
Rhyme
James StewartJames Stewart was a prolific actor,
superstar of the stage and silver screen.
His lanky frame wasn't a detractor,
James Stewart was a prolific actor.
His deliberate drawl was a factor,
he'd draw the audience into each scene.
James Stewart was a prolific actor,
superstar of the stage and silver screen.
He'd draw...
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Categories:
detractor, 10th grade, appreciation, feelings,
Form:
Triolet
Quiet SoulQuiet Soul
1963
Her skin is that of alabaster. Wide circles of red rouge pronounced her thin lips and each cheek.
She is soulfully unique.
Her hair of dried stalk was approving to her eyes of vacuous emeralds.
She traveled the two blocks from her home to a destiny where...
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Categories:
detractor, romantic love,
Form:
Prose
A Genuine HeroA hero is a genuinely born fighter
A hero does not fear death
A hero fears no danger
A hero is concerned about self
But also about the others
Who are fighting as brave soldiers
Deep below the sea levels
Deep in the hadopelagic gutters.
A hero is absolutely fair
A hero has no...
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Categories:
detractor, class, confidence, cool, courage,
Form:
Rhyme
Mister Summer ManMethinks I'll write about snow today
It's a subject about which I've known
Canadian by birth, so snow is no stranger
As a kid many snowballs I've thrown
But now that I'm old, damn snow's a pain
Winter without snow would be grand
Driving in snow, our lives are in jeopardy
Perhaps...
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Categories:
detractor, winter,
Form:
Quatrain
Canadian By BirthMethinks I'll write about snow today
It's a subject about which I've known
Canadian by birth, so snow is no stranger
As a kid many snowballs I've thrown
But now that I'm old, damn snow's a pain
Winter without snow would be grand
Driving in snow, our lives are in jeopardy
Perhaps...
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Categories:
detractor, summer,
Form:
Rhyme
Little CriticLittle voice inside my head.
It likes to kick and scream in my skull.
It enjoys yelling cruel things like how I should be dead.
Its little words are never dull.
It loves to beat on my poor brain.
It enjoys stabbing the back of my eyes.
It tries to convince...
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Categories:
detractor, me,
Form:
Sonnet
Like Sphinx Rise From AshesOn the cusp of stepping into your promised land
Listen to the little voice
Enjoining you to cling, to hold on for dear life to the hand
Of God where your boundless choice
Lies in wait to reset your bearing and course
To restore, renew the vitality
God bestows on...
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Categories:
detractor, poems,
Form:
Free verse
Things I Wish People Would Say To MeTHINGS I WISH PEOPLE WOULD SAY TO ME
Just once for someone to say ‘you have a nice smile’
Instead of ‘what are you grinning at all the while’
Or ‘you really were clever to figure that problem out’
Instead of ‘another...
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Categories:
detractor, funny, music, music,
Form:
Couplet
Birds of a Feather Bind TogetherThrough telepathy
We mingle
With each other in empathy
Though single
In status and name
Society derides
Arguing we carry blame for the lame name
Detractor X rides
On interaction thrown
Into denigrating debate
To malice grown
Venomous of late
In a conundrum
With neither head nor face
That beats a war drum
Beaten aloud on the surface
Where ripples wander
Agog...
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Categories:
detractor, poems,
Form:
Free verse