Best Anaemia Poems


Premium Member Vampire Visits the Dentist

Dracula had the most terrible toothache,
so he booked to see his dentist Mr Payne.
An evening appointment was requested;
as Dracula only rose after the sun had set

When Dracula walked through the door
a blast of garlic breath hit him in the face;
Dracula bit his lip as he had a huge fit
Mr Payne had forgotten his patient’s allergy!

The dentist put on his surgical mask,
whilst he removed Dracula’s rotten fangs;
Sadly for Dracula, he can no longer bite necks,
now he’s being treated for severe anaemia!

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09-24-17

Intense Heat

I was taught to protect the good name 
of the family;to be honest and straight forward,
But,Am I being deceived?

I toil day and night,hoping to find peace 
and solace in hard work,
But,it becomes an illusion,vague!
completely vague!
Am I different?

I went to school to enrich my knowledge,
to be able to use my skills for my country,
to be upright and diligent,
but,what do I get?; unemployment!,
Hardship and shame glued to my body
like a stubborn tumor.

They mock and laugh at me 
as I walk on the street with rumpled shirt 
and opened wide mouth shoe with faded lace,
my body temperature is higher than the intense blazing sun,
Can`t bear this anymore,
Eight years of roaming....waiting...and...writing..

Many have called me to leave this straight  road
and journey with them in dubious acts and
illegal deals which have fetched them millions,
Yet,I refused;
Allowing poverty to tear my skin
 wide open and devour my intestine;
For how long,am I going to endure this intense heat?

My hands are shaking,eyes seeing stars,body shivering;
I`m suffocating..;get me out of here!,
It seems my blood is short,
Anaemia!..F..e..ver!
S...o...m...e...bo...dy.....
H......e....l....p...
m...ee!..

*Dedicated to all unemployed youths*
I say 'Please endure,there is still hope'.


CONTEST:"Heat" sponsored by Debbie Guzzi

Unwanted Guest

Suck blood like a vampire from a strange empire ,
Not invited but invite herself,
Pass through tiny holes and mesh of the net to 
Set her proboscis on the skin…
Night crawler and unwanted flying creature ..
Dances around your earlobe to infuriate you..And ..
You end up slapping your  ear with a big  bang..!
Her piecing mouth part sends strong signals to 
the  brain which can make the sane to be insane ..
Fever  is the outcome ,running temperature is his friend ,
And headache the mother..of all murders….
Anaemia plus lassitude will pay you a warm visit ,
Leading to excursion to the doctor’s home ;
Lab test shows plasmodium or salmonella…or …what?
Carried by this vector or rector called female anopheles…
 ....Mosquito.......





2-27-2017


Relapse

I'm not sure what she's using 
though I have an idea
her body she's abusing
and her mind has anaemia
as the excuses drip off her tongue
as to why she can't call
not the first to be sung
not the last bar room brawl
helpless I wait
til she tells me these truths
I'm a fish after bait
being trolled to the truth
not to sound dramatic
but what a disaster
her brain is rheumatic
her vice is her master
I hear her cry from a distance
though stifled and cold
hope I break through the resistance
a story of old
temptation is fond 
of those who are weary
I'll swim through this pond
and escape the hook of the leery

Dialysis

Dialysis 

Dialysis 
What is that 
Let's do some  research 
Get a few facts 
It's a procedure to remove waste products and excess fluid from the blood when the kidneys stop working properly
They have to take your blood out 
Clean it put it back in 
You experience the chills 
And sometimes it leaves you in shock 
They need heating blankets and cozy socks 
To stay warm 
They experience so much with their bodies 
They have to be dialysised three times a week 
It's exhausting 
Overbearing 
It's scary 
I thought this was worth sharing 
Your blood pressure can be lowered 
You experience muscle cramps 
is physically and emotionally draining, causes complications such as nerve problems, anaemia, bone disease and infection. In addition, an arduous regime of three days a week on dialysis can lead to symptoms including nausea, vomiting, cramps and depression.
Whew Let's have a session
My mom had to go go to dialysis for 4 years 
Three times a week 
She went through a lot 
On a machine 
Trying to give it your all 
Sometimes she would have to get off of it because her body would cramp 
She would cry 
Unless you were a dialysis patient. 
You wouldn't understand why 
I salute ?? each one 
Each one i wish I could give a hug
You guys are tough ?? 
And deserve a lot of love 
A chronic kidney disease 
That comes with no ease 
Getting stuck with needles 
Getting blood drawn 
In and out
Out and in
It can affect the Skin 
Leaving all kinds of bruises 
And dark spots 
You my diaylsis friends  will never be forgot 
Let's put our hearts together and hold hands 
Make this disease better if we can 
How can you get checked 
If you feel something is wrong 
Do us a favor get checked on
Yes it can affect your urine 
Maybe even stop you from having children.
I don't know 
The more information I get for you 
The more I'll let you know 
Dialysis doesn't necessarily mean it's the end 
Just pick up where you left off 
You can still win

I wrote this tribute in honor of my mother 
Who is no longer physically here 
Rest in Paradise Beautifully my dear 
And to all if you feel like it gets Overbearing 
Let's honor dialysis and all that we have lost and those who are still fighting 
In honor of my mom 
Lets get 
Kozy for Karen
Written by Concetta Hardnett 
01/12/2025

Anaemia

Anaemia

Who cares for her once glorious dreams
Utopia is the new reality
Dopamine-starved citizens gaze forlornly
As blood feverishly flows out
From her gaping wounds

Siamese twins of hunger and anger
Starving her of peace and progress 
In a land of high Testosterone
Security gone AWOL
Citizens on their own
Slowly but steadily
Life ebbs out
Deprived of nutrients and water

Homeland turned fiefdom by renegades
Despising folks, they make foes
Pious laughter loosens frown 
of frail freedom
Blood-sapping East wind
Turns grasslands into deserts

Bruised and beaten by the day
Body and soul in dread of dawn
Conquer battlefields of the mind
With riots of laughter 

This Mephistophelian theatre
With broken social ligaments and
Ruptured moral tendons
Will one day get a transfusion of a new life
Or die slowly and solemnly 
of Anaemia


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