Best Admonition Poems


Calcinating Admonition

The mist of the dew
smokes my vision
before the shadows
that penetrate my mind
because of your fallacies, felonies
and fallible conviction;
that with notable ghostings
they falsify your reason...

Well, I'm the phoenix
renascent before dark carburization
and cenesthetic ashes,
that has reached its zenith
ardently scintillant...

And, in front of your dew
and grim manipulator
I admonish and warn you
that firmly and solemnly
solidarily calcinated and burned
your counterfeit heart will remain...

Calcinante Admonicion

La niebla del rocío
ahuma mi visión
ante los sombríos
que calan mi mente
por tus falacias, felonias
y falible convicción;
que con notables fantasmadas
falsean tu razón...

Pues soy el fénix,
renaciente ante oscura carburación
y cenestésicas cenizas,
que ha llegado a su cenit
ardientemente centelleante...

Y, ante tu calante rocío
y manipulante sombrío
te admonizo y advierto
que con firmeza y solemnidad
solidariamente calcinado y quemado
quedará tu falsificante corazón...

My Admonition

Title: My Admonition
By: Saka Afeez O.(Psychology)

Many a time you've been told the stories of the prophet and his companions,
His wives and children, to Allah is their total submissions 
These lessons aren't for fun, but to reflect and make new decisions
Then, why have you chosen to follow your fruitless ignorant opinions?

When you aren't devoted 
You become defaulted 
For all admonitions you listened to are becoming abated

Simple rules you need to follow
Why have you chosen to stray and wallow?
In the path you really know that ultimately leads to endless sorrow

You are advised to use complete hijab but you chose to make do with pashmina
You post those sexy pictures for likes and comments on media
Don't you think you aren't only displaying your nudity , but also calling the males to zina?

Give in your best to lower your gaze and stay away from zina
Stop deceiving yourself by saying " atteqwa a huna"
We know it's not easy but let's try and follow the sunnah

You seriously need to take heed and make a new change
It's never too late for you to turn over and make a new page
Say no to disobedience, and don't go beyond the range.


Ii- My Admonition - To Some Sunnih Brethren

You've made the public tag Islam, a religion of fanatics
Just because of your attitudes,  people see sunnis as extremists
Why making it difficult for others to abide by Islamic ethics?

Brother,
The fact that you use those short length trousers
shouldn't make you ignore and disrespect others
Be real and relate with good characters,
may be through these, they will surely ponder.

Sister,
The length of your beautiful hijaab
doesn't rate you with the highest eeman,
seek more knowledge to ascertain the lessons behind using that pretty khimaar.

Soft words with hikmah are enough to correct your sisters
Teach them the ethics of a good zawjah and as well a righteous believer
For you help to rehabiltate ummah and avoid shaytan the deceiver.

Muzlims that pretends to be Muslims are no doubt, being atypical. 
Be a Muslim and a Mu'min by not being hypocritical 
For Allah rewards every deed, but its sometimes metaphysical.

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When you pass, and arrive at the gold of Heaven’s Gate,
God, in His glory, will read, what you wrote, my poetic mate.

Did you write with no conscience, just for a  big, racous laugh?
Remember, my poet, God made our bodies to honor, in His behalf.



8/24/2024


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Admonition For Good Action

Relish this life and be happy,
Wish to lead this life finely,

Ways to be happy are many,
Always trust in God wisely

Delay never in doing duty,
Obey all the rules gladly

Fearing mustn't be done,
Being very bold is better

Punctuality is a fine step,
Duty must have fine quality

Calm approach is advisable
Form that by being sensible

Anger must be avoided,
Stronger are calm souls

Cheer must be fully had,
Appear to be damn bold

Discover the positive side,
Sever shrewdly pessimism

Do every task with perfection
New ways to do must be found

Kind moves must be made,
Find a remedy with wisdom

Favors time a bold man,
Wavers a fool uncertainly

Go ahead and win the deal
Show your talent in full flow

All the best for success
Call God during stress!


Admonition

Warn little people
Who worship bad superior
Flatter inferior.

Poetic Admonition

J-ust
E-xpress
A-nother
N-ew

P-oetic
A-dmonition
U-sing
L-ine
I-n
N-ice
E-mphatic

D-esign
I-f
M-essages
A-re
U-niversally
N-oted

Topic: Birthday of Jean Pauline C. Dimaun (February 04) 
Form: Vertical Monocrostic

admonition

The generals cries
A blind baby 
Released of faith
His bloods eyes screen
Undone binds
Freeing the filthed
Upon his head
No justice
Beneath the shod
Brother he can’t find
Called war

Good Admonition

E-xcellent
L-ine
E-mploys
N-ame's
A-wesomeness

U-nder
S-cribe's
A-crostic
R-ighteousness
A-dvancing
G-ood
A-dmonition

Topic: Birthday of Elena Usaraga (July 06) 
Form: Vertical Monocrostic

Noble Admonition

G-reat
A-crostic
B-rings
R-ighteous
I-dea
E-xpressing
L-iterary

B-rilliance
A-s
R-eaders
B-egin
A-bsorbing
C-ool
I-nformation's
N-oble
A-dmonition

Topic: Birthday of Gabriel M. Barbacina (April 16) 
Form: Vertical Monocrostic

Admonition of Almighty Lord

B-rilliant
E-xcellent
V-erse
E-xpresses
R-ighteousness
L-etting
Y-ou

I-mplement
D-ivine
A-lmighty
L-ord's
A-dmonition

Topic: Birthday of Beverly K. Idala (May 04) 
Form: Vertical Monocrostic

Righteous Admonition

A-wesome
N-ame's
G-reat
E-xpression
L-ets
O-ne

L-ife
O-pen
U-sing
I-ts
S-ubstance

O-nce
R-ighteous
A-dmonition
Y-ields
A-crostic
N-ote

Topic: Birthday of Bro. Angelo Louis Orayan (May 02) 
Form: Vertical Monocrostic

Great Admonition

B-rilliant
A-crostic
B-rings
Y-early

L-ine
Y-ielding
N-ifty

Z-est
U-nder
N-ame's
I-nspiring
G-reat
A-dmonition

Topic: Birthday of Baby Lyn G. Zuniga (July 04) 
Form: Vertical Monocrostic

Divine Admonition

M-eaningful
E-xpression
R-ightfully
L-ets
Y-our

E-yes
R-ead
I-mpressive
N-ote
A-nd
D-ivine
A-dmonition

Topic: Birthday of Merly Erinada (April 13) 
Form: Vertical Monocrostic

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