Best Adaptation Poems


Premium Member A Woman Said To the Universe (Adaptation)

A woman said to the universe:
"Sir, see me as equal!"
"I hear you," replied the universe,
"But I can't see you 
Because that tall man's head is blocking your face."


Adaption from Steven Crane's "A Man Said to the Universe"

A man said to the universe: 
"Sir I exist!" 
"However," replied the universe, 
"The fact has not created in me 
A sense of obligation."


When I was 18 Steven Crane's poem was pasted over my desk at work.  It has always been 
a source of inspiration and intrigue.

Erlking: An Adaptation - English Version of Goethe's Ballad, To Be Sung To Schubert's Setting

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THE ERLKING

[NARRATOR]
Who's riding so late through night so wild?
It is the father who holds his child.
He keeps the boy held close with his arm:
He clasps him tightly, he keeps him warm.

[FATHER]
My son, why hide you your face in such fear?

[SON]
Oh, father, see! The Erlking is near!
The Erlking crowned with his train in fist...

[FATHER]
My son, 'tis but a streak of mist.

[THE ERLKING]
Thou darling child, come go with me!
Such lovely games shall I play with thee!
So many flowers bloom on the downs,
And my mother hath such beautiful gowns.

[SON]
My father, my father, but do you not hear
What Erlking whispers so soft in my ear?

[FATHER]
Be still now, oh, be hush now, my child:
In withered leaves moan tempests so wild.

[THE ERLKING]
Now, splendid boy, wilt thou go with me?
All my daughters are eager to romp with thee!
All my daughters will lead thee with mincing tread,
And rock thee and dance thee and sing thee to bed--
They'll rock thee and dance thee and sing thee to bed!

[SON]
My father, my father! Oh, can you not see
The Erlking's daughters all beckon me?

[FATHER]
My son, my son, I see like the day:
'Tis naught but the ancient willows so gray.

[THE ERLKING]
I covet thee! I want thee, and feel no remorse--
And be thou not willing, I'll take thee by force!

[SON]
My father, my father! He's seizing my arm!
Erlking has done me an awful harm!

[NARRATOR]
The father trembles; all speed does employ.
He holds his arms round the shuddering boy.
He reaches home with fear and dread:
For in his arms now the child --- was dead.

                                                     ______

Facing the Unknown

I adapted to my pain 
And felt it's existence no longer 
Sometimes facing the unknown 
Makes it less a wonder 

My mockery became my amour 
And yes! it shielded me 
For in the absence of the sun
The moon must learn to shine 

A thousand times did I crawl
In the dark 
And collided with unseen objects
Still now I run in the same darkness
And need not any light 

In this scar was a flesh so broken 
I never thought could heal 
In this night i was once asleep
And never dreamt to be awoken

But of all things said and done 
And for every hurdle come
I have put a foot ahead 
And steadily I count my steps 

I was that seed buried and forgotten 
I was that onion that once was rotten 
Yet in my rot did I germinate 
And out of the ground I propagate 

BY: Adams O Elizabeth 
Lizdiamond world of poetry


Adaptation

It is a golden brown dawn
It is spring, snow is all melt gone
The grass is sprouting with weary patchy green
I wonder how it survived the harsh winter grin?
The grass was covered under snow pile
No air was there underneath the white sheath
How did it breathe?
No sunlight pierced through the soil beneath
That's why the grass looks tired 
and it has brown pith
Scientists say this is hibernation
I would say aspiration to live
under the cloud of hardship
I wish I had that adaptation skill	
And a place inside your cold heart
to revive
when your apathy destroys 
my somber will, my desire to live.
© Nirode Ray  Create an image from this poem.

Sonnet *** Change, Life and Adaptation 3

But how long should I flog myself?
Even when all else choose to beat me silly.
Or, if life be justified to change,
Should justice now lead to the gallows?
When I’ve only chosen to live life.
Or, is it just that I suffered dis-applaud
For living life on the basis of was is justified?
And if all else choose to flog me,
If all else choose not to reason my way,
Should I also flog myself?
And if so, for how long?
How long should I flog myself
When in my bid to live out the justice of life,
I am confronted with the injustice of men.
@SEPTEMBER 2017/©M.H.O.G Unveiled

Sonnet Xxix Change, Life and Adaptation 2

But why o why should I be made to apologize?
When the song changed
And the beat of the music followed
And was justified accordingly that such is life,
Then, why o why should I be made to apologize?
When I have only changed my dancing steps accordingly,
If the rules of the game be justified to change,
Right in the middle of its unraveling,
Should it in anyway be surprising
That the players in the game also made some alignments?
Or, when we are told, change is constant in life,
Should anyone be prosecuted for living?
Should anyone be penalized for observing the rules of the game?
Or, is Change now selectively constant?
@SEPTEMBER 2017/©M.H.O.G Unveiled


Adaptation

Shaded damp forests 
let ferns grow equally well 
on soil and from rocks.

Slender Kindred Glance

Slender Kindred Glance

sun drenched, a field of 
reflective grasses,
abosrbing the infernal rays 
of that hot orb, swaying 
in the breeze as they might,
their motion inspirits 
my head and torso to sway 
slowly in tandem, 
in parallel time like 
a lazy march, as the
rhythmic swirls 
of dried seed heads 
atop floral stalks, brush,
against one another, 
crashing…. serving up 
its falling germ, 
ground-ward, glancing off 
to one place or another.

as my human touch,
with its atomic currents, 
attest to their certainty of 
interaction, what would
I do, when a slender 
kindred glance of 
the ineffable breath, 
yes that breath!
engaging that crowned 
salutary word, which 
sounded the first cry 
to release, birthing 
the slow crawl of animal 
logic and its pool of 
accrued totality; the 
human sun, that human orb
bows down.

My eyes stare forward,
my breath has halted, the 
fields of grass continue 
swaying, they pay no mind, 
it all started so long ago;
seed scurrying about
over the landscape, 
lodging wherever, hidden,
patient, asleep for the 
moment, awaiting the
conditions.  Like them
I wait, I take 
a full breath.

Sonnet Xxviii Change, Life and Adaptation 1

When suddenly the rules changed
The rules and game mode changed
And I protested why?
Why do the rules need to change?
When the game and pitch is still of this life
But the experienced and vast in days’
They calmed me down, that such is life.
Then I chose not to be disoriented nor dismayed
I chose not to stay confused
Since the change, they said, is constant
I made some alterations and modification
In my principles, scope and mode of play
Then the voice that calmed me came calling again
Why? O Brother why Do you change and delude us?
@SEPTEMBER 2017/©M.H.O.G Unveiled

Adaptation

The grass is no longer strictly green
morning dew has turned to frost
it crunches in shades of yellow
when over it I walk.
The sky is clouded, over bearing
covering what was recalled
as springtime sun, and blue bonnets
fully in charge of the hill.
Nothing in this season
has been truly lost, the cost
of course is patience
and belief that new will happen again.

2020

Lessons taught and yet to teach
Unfurl themselves from your unknown depths
Power and promise, false for each
To prove corruption with every breath
Alone, the world is blind

A push to prove our selfish ways
A push to see the truth
The people try to avert their gaze
Misfortune exists to improve
A lesson staked with life

Be appreciative...It could be worse
A new phrase engraved in my mind
My family, my friends, in love I’m immersed
My perspective was altered, by design
How strange a new normal

My want for change ever increases
Never more have my close ones been so appreciated
Taken for granted, my old normal left
And from my hopes, my life deviated
For good or not, that’s yet to be seen

Midnight Massacre(Adaptation of Poe's the Raven )

As i lay my head to sleep
I hear a sound, a scratch, a creep
A fall outside my bedroom door
Then silence, the sound exists no more
Again i hear a steady caw
A crow, as though, to something saw
Awake was i, for as i sit
Asleep in thought, my throat was slit

An Adaptation of a Poem When

An Adaptation of the Poem “IF” By Rudyard Kipling
			When


				By Gavri Hanita Hazaka Abir Selek 2nd 
				Charles Gerald Patrick Chard 2nd 


When you can keep your cool,
When others loose theirs, all around you like fools,
With all the negative words of outburst,
Their words lash out at you for the worst,
Will you in your heart make allowances for all who doubt?
Will you still pray for them, waiting without a pout?
When you hear their lies, will you lash back with lies in return?
With their hatred, not taking it personally inside when it burns?
Don’t justify yourself by trying to be wise,
When bad dreams are just bad dreams, they don’t control your anger size,
When you can’t think clearly, making evil thoughts your aim,
When you can’t meet triumph and disaster exactly the same,
When you hear the truths come from your own mouth,
Down from your own nose abit to the south,
Will it be twisted, foolish, a trap for others?
Or will it be wise counsel, my sisters, and my brothers?
When you watch things like your words, so hard, but broken and fallen apart,
Will you stand strong in your faith and not depart?
 Rebuild what has been torn down with Biblical tools,
Then you are the better person, not to be cursed with fools,
Look for that inner strength from deep within,
It will guide you away from sin,
The Word of GOD is your standard, your strength, your shield,
Your life is the LORDS to HIM you must yield,
Everything is the LORDs including the earth,
Will you rejoice in a dance, or sing a dirth.

Atrocious Time Is Born To Teach

Tree is standing still, 
Oh!  the tree is standing still. 
Dense difficulties stiff it, 
Still its muscular branches ready to beat it. 

Atrocious time will land and soon will reach its end, 
However its sturdy branches never let it to bend. 

Tree is standing still, 
Oh! the tree is standing still. 
Dense difficulties stiff it, 
Still its muscular branches ready to beat it. 

Adaptation is Adaptation living is born to learn, 
New change rise in trun.

Tree is standing still, 
Oh! the tree is standing still. 
Dense difficulties stiff it, 
Still its muscular branches ready to beat it.

Less Than Human

Two thousand years ago Robot John came by
As a gift from mom and pop at Christmas
Wrapped in orange paper made in Russia
Signed “Peace and Love Forever” Santa

The android stood as tall as life with flashing lights
Big blue eyes that never blinked or cried
It posed a million questions in need of answers
Programmed by parents bent on my happiness

Robot John would be my friend forever playing
Protecting me from bullies and enemies alike
Teaching me to speak in several languages at a time
It seemed like fun and games would never stop

How wrong was I for dreaming such a fantasy?
As I grew older the robot took control of things
It beat me every day for pleasure
Using logic and a piece of wood for my own good

Mom and dad did not believe in punishment
They delegated that to Mr. Robot friend
If only I could find the turn off switch
So I could dismantle him

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