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Robert J. Lindley, 9/15, 9/16, 9/17
Sonnet trilogy,
( When Blessed Gifts Are Suddenly Given To One Pleading )


Note -- This new creation, was composed in three days of 
each day my reading of Thomas Gray's magnificent poem,
Elegy Written in a Country Churchyard, that was first
published in 1751....
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Elegy_Written_in_a_Country_Churchyard


Elegy Written in a Country Churchyard
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First page of Dodsley's illustrated edition of Gray's Elegy with illustration by Richard Bentley
Elegy Written in a Country Churchyard is a poem by Thomas Gray, completed in 1750 and first published in 1751.[1] The poem's origins are unknown, but it was partly inspired by Gray's thoughts following the death of the poet Richard West in 1742. Originally titled Stanzas Wrote in a Country Church-Yard, the poem was completed when Gray was living near St Giles' parish church at Stoke Poges. It was sent to his friend Horace Walpole, who popularised the poem among London literary circles. Gray was eventually forced to publish the work on 15 February 1751 in order to preempt a magazine publisher from printing an unlicensed copy of the poem.

The poem is an elegy in name but not in form; it employs a style similar to that of contemporary odes, but it embodies a meditation on death, and remembrance after death. The poem argues that the remembrance can be good and bad, and the narrator finds comfort in pondering the lives of the obscure rustics buried in the churchyard. The two versions of the poem, Stanzas and Elegy, approach death differently; the first contains a stoic response to death, but the final version contains an epitaph which serves to repress the narrator's fear of dying. With its discussion of, and focus on, the obscure and the known, the poem has possible political ramifications, but it does not make any definite claims on politics to be more universal in its approach to life and death.

Claimed as "probably still today the best-known and best-loved poem in English",[2] the Elegy quickly became popular. It was printed many times and in a variety of formats, translated into many languages, and praised by critics even after Gray's other poetry had fallen out of favour. Later critics tended to comment on its language and universal aspects, but some felt the ending was unconvincing—failing to resolve the questions the poem raised—or that the poem did not do enough to present a political statement that would serve to help the obscure rustic poor who form its central image.

Inspiration, Revelation, Adaptation, Within Poetic Verse Sonnet I I saw morn's soft hands stretching to touch bright moonlight Is but a fleeting blink betwixt man's death and birth Dark unknowing is why we so oft fear the night In that abject blindness, fail to see life's true worth Alas! Such are sorrows of mankind's constant plight That feeds malignant swellings of darkness on earth; Those of ancient times, distant long-dead yesterdays Will one day from that deepest of slumbers arise Long hidden from flown days and nights, world's weeping grays Reborn with no thoughts of the world's previous lies. As the earth spins, sounding constant evolving beats We blind to light's truth, continue our foolish acts Racing onward counting our coins and useless feats Life coming from light's truth, not so-called man-made facts. Sonnet II I that thought to profit, see beyond mortal veil Having never measured truest rectitude of life In my epic quest, the highest of mountains scale In youth, blind to sad flowing storms of mortal strife Alas! We that in our darkness refuse to see Oft face raging storms that seem to forever swirl Not realizing, Love's blessings are given free To counter lightning bolts world's malevolence hurls. I that foolishly thought to defeat that we die Later learned truth that our vanity denies We are lost because we believe world's greatest lie That we were once roaming beasts beneath earthen skies By our own greatness became gods of divine might Free to do as we please, revel in our delights. Sonnet III In June, when wondering winds our hearts so lighten I have found eager bubbling brooks streaming along Summer's morn setting up today gaily brighten Nature gifting beauty, songbirds gifting sweet song Across flowering meadows, busy bees flying Life many treasures so beautifully sharing Time to live, not sadly ponder mortal dying For truest of joy depends on our loving caring There rests much more happiness in sincere kindness And sweeter breath within Love's soft-touch inspiring Eyes truly see, the welcome defeat of blindness Rather than worldly conflicts and daily sparring To satisfy our fleshly dreams and dark desires Let's embrace light's divine truth that never expires. Robert J. Lindley, 9/15, 9/16, 9/17 Sonnet trilogy, ( When Blessed Gifts Are Suddenly Given To One Pleading ) Note -- This new creation, was composed in three days of each day my reading of Thomas Gray's magnificent poem, Elegy Written in a Country Churchyard, that was first published in 1751.... https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Elegy_Written_in_a_Country_Churchyard

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Date: 9/27/2020 6:20:00 AM
sonnet one had me weeping as we /blind to lights truth, continue our foolish acts/ and you carried me aloft with /time to live not sadly ponder mortal dying/ and filled me so with your words /and sweeter breath within Love's soft touch, inspiring. Robert, your gifts to us here there your poetry are many. Thank you.
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Date: 10/4/2020 4:32:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Always a gift to read your comments and your very fine poetry.. God bless..
Date: 9/22/2020 3:53:00 PM
For once. I am at a loss for words. They cannot compare to these stellar verses. I humbly cannot use my crippled words to honor this monumental piece, Love, Panagiota x
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Date: 10/4/2020 4:31:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Your kindness is a blessing.. God bless..
Date: 9/22/2020 8:27:00 AM
My dear friend, the depth and breadth of your artistry, the fire of emotion and meaningful thought, light and/or dark, knows no bounds when expressed through your creative, lush quill. I'm stunned and inspired by the thrilling shades of spiritual beauty spilled upon this page and my heart, Robert. Soulful grandeur so gracefully expressed! A fav! Warmest wishes always, dear poet and wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/22/2020 8:36:00 AM
My dear friend, your friendship and words are as always from the heart of a true friend, immensely talented, creative and wonderful artist and one that has gifted me the magnificent honor to have collaborated with in the past. Truth is many of us dearly miss your poetry here as of late and truly wish you to be able to gift us more of your inspiring and majestic poems. I merely pen from my old soul and heart. Hoping it may aid others.. God bless..
Date: 9/22/2020 7:41:00 AM
Quite true, "That feeds malignant swellings of darkness on earth;" still it is in the darkness that we best see the light. Very profound, "Life came from light's truth, not so-called man-made facts." Yes indeed, "For truest of joy depends on our loving caring". Though sometimes, it's hard to see, we must look until we do; messages are everywhere. Beautiful wisdom in this Robert.
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Date: 9/22/2020 8:30:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Your wisdom shines, light is the truth- is the way... I just this morn presented both a new poem and a new blog that came from inspirations given me by the many very kind and immensely talented poets here. That which is truly appreciated and most certainly a truly great and blessed gift.. God bless.
Date: 9/20/2020 8:21:00 PM
Very deep and spiritual, dear Robert. The last line in Sonnet III is the answer to all the turmoil of humanity. Magnificent writing, my friend.
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Date: 9/20/2020 8:39:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Never truer words said....In the light is peace, love , harmony, spirituality--out of the light is conflict, discord, havoc, evil, barbarism, war, woe, sorrows and death .... World operates in darkness, we are better off traversing only on the well lit, faithful and righteous paths.. God bless...
Date: 9/20/2020 9:26:00 AM
Greetings Robert! I enjoyed the 3 tier build...from man's selfish desires to truly finding magic surrounding us and the joy this journey promises, cheers!
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Date: 9/20/2020 3:08:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I did my best to pen what heart felt and relayed to me. I am delighted that you have found this to be an enjoyable poem to have read. God bless..
Date: 9/19/2020 7:53:00 PM
The unknown is scary, even for someone that is brave. Not knowing what lies ahead. Place your trust in the Creator, as He will make things known, when the time is right. "I saw morn's soft hands stretching to touch bright moonlight.. Tis but a fleeting blink betwixt man's death and birth" Life is like a vapor, only here for a short time, and then it vanishes away. Cherish and treasure each moment given. You and your family are in my thoughts and prayers. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 9/20/2020 3:06:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Yes, now it becomes even more important to note and cherish the gifts one has. That of family, friends, love and God's immense blessings. God bless...
Date: 9/19/2020 5:42:00 PM
You are an inspired and inspiring poet, Robert. I especially liked the last one!
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Date: 9/20/2020 3:04:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Yes, the last one sends out vibes/echoes of optimism, hope and the appreciation for love and beauty in and of life. Which is always a much needed gift.. God bless..
Date: 9/19/2020 4:18:00 PM
Good sir, it is not for me to make use of flowery language to substitute your deepest thoughts with my sawdust, which is a tawdry substitute for your blinding starlight.
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Date: 9/20/2020 3:02:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Your friendship and kindness are so appreciated. I will check out the gift of music you gave later tonight, as in a few minutes I have to leave to go to my sister's house .. Also I will check out the French poets Lamartine and de Musset, as they are not known to me. God bless....
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Date: 9/19/2020 4:19:00 PM
I know you are deeply hurting at present and your writing transports you to a kind of heaven and sometimes hell sticks its beak in unwanted; I wanted to acknowledge and thank you for this beautiful gift you have taken from your pain and shared with all. After reading your email last night, my thoughts turned to the French poets Lamartine and de Musset and the love you share with your wife. I now gift these to you, that they may give you some solace during this time. I have also included a piece of music. Much love Robert, to you, your wife and son. Thank you for all your gifts, the greatest of all being your friendship. The Light truly walks in you and with you and it surrounds your family. That is Truth. That is Love. Much Love always, Leanne. x
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Date: 9/19/2020 4:19:00 PM
Ralph Vaughan Williams - Five Variants of "Dives and Lazarus" https://youtu.be/RQoP9iLwoos
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Date: 9/19/2020 4:19:00 PM
"Le Lac" by Alphonse de Lamartine. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Le_Lac_(poem)
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Date: 9/19/2020 4:18:00 PM
"Souvenir" by Alfred de Musset https://lyricstranslate.com/en/souvenir-recollection.html
Date: 9/19/2020 11:32:00 AM
This is brilliant, Robert. A fave for me. ~Mark
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/20/2020 2:57:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I appreciate your support and advice. Your soupmail was inspiring and a very welcomed gift. God bless..
Date: 9/19/2020 11:29:00 AM
1) - "Anticipatory grief" describes a situation where you "know" that you will lose someone who means a lot in your life - This grief can also include depression, anxiety and fear, extreme worries and crisis - Living is like going through constantly new doors -
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Date: 9/20/2020 2:55:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I so appreciate your kindness, and inspiring words . True we are now going through that doorway and will have to find our way... God bless...
Date: 9/19/2020 11:28:00 AM
2) - Sometimes we know what is waiting behind, other times we have to go through to see - Death is a part of life, whether we like it or not - LIFE gets a different value and should be lived and enjoyed in the present - A poem from the heart and soul, Robert - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/20/2020 2:54:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I so appreciate your kindness, and inspiring words . God bless...
Date: 9/19/2020 7:48:00 AM
Three beautiful sonnets Robert, your amazing pen is on fire. You are such a gifted poet and a great inspiration to your fellow poets here on soup. Take care Tom
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/20/2020 2:50:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I am so very blessed to have so many wonderful poet friends here at the Soup. God bless.

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