Admission Fee Poems | Examples


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Premium Member No Bowing Please

Well, I'm surprised every day

What this mind of mine will come up with

One would think I would know eh?

Nope! It's a total surprise

Sometimes think I should charge myself an admission fee

For the show, my brain puts on

Today, for instance, seems I'm back on the track

But it's real early, no telling what's round the bend

Could be some great new invention

To help the world finally find peace and all get along

Probably go down in history as the greatest human ever known

Just think, you could say you knew me when

I was just a simple loving man

Writing delightful poetry to help you through the day

No applause please, it embarrasses me

And please no bowing!!!

Remember Me

When I die dont cry cause now my soul is like a bird and it can fly... finally im being set 

free... im flying to a place where there is never an admission fee. Im flying beyond the 

deep blue seas and higher than the black walnut trees.  I will be living in a golden mansion 

where I wont even need a key... this will be the time when you start to regret that you 

never had time to spend with me.... but I just have one last request.... when you all get 

together that I will be remembered on your family tree.

Premium Member Exploration In Our Dreams

Dreams, an entryway to celestial exploration
Out of body we penetrate through meditation
The subconscious rises to visit lost loved ones 
With star smiles that through seams of heaven run

Ladies squander lifetimes hoping for a ring
Travel to Saturn, who’ll share at our bidding
Deposit feelings of anger at the red planet
Mars absorbs them like a powerful magnet

Come dance with me through the galaxies
Hover far above Earth’s narrow balconies
We’ll tip our hats to the life-giving suns
Leave star-kissed blessings where the Milky Way runs

Let us soar through the Horsehead Nebula
Stare, bright lights can’t scar a dreamer’s retina
Are you prepared to journey with me
To worlds that charge no admission fee

The universe opens doors as we leave Earth’s land
But only the subconscious can explore first-hand
Until the day we can exceed the speed of light
We behold all these wonders in the mystery of night

And if we are lucky to enter heaven’s gate
With loves of the past we may conjugate


*For Barbara's "For Heaven's Sake" challenge


Brave New World

It's the nature of the experiment
To be peeling off my autumn skin
In a gasoline waterlogged romance.
You can stay
If you want to.
We're pulling figures out of the way.
A fire in the hills 
Is luring a crowd in
And the admission fee starts
Somewhere in the infinite.
The new years Tokyo Alliance
Has brought a bouquet 
Of pharmaceutical pleasures
And I'm handing out 
Needles and narcotics
In the opium den.
This brave new world
Sells sex for a dollar and
A penniless teenager 
For even less.
And fast from the ground
Stands a Brazilian girl,
Fastening her garter belt
And smoothing her skirt
As she casts a virgin's suicide stone
Into the sounds of the sunrise.

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