Zoo Unicorn

ZOO UNICORN

Seeing the posting of the zoo unicorn
Could not wait to go see his horn
My eyes just could not believe
The boy I had  been deceived
Poor horse got thrown a lot of popcorn


 a Linda-Marie   = (contest) =

adventureanimaldedicationfunnyimaginationlimerick

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Wusheh Carr

February 14, 2017 at 7:58 PM

a lot of popcorn! :)

Richard Lamoureux

July 24, 2016 at 8:00 AM

What? No real unicorn? This is a fun one. Thanks for picking my cup of empty poem. It is a personal favorite and holds much significance for me.

James Inman

October 22, 2015 at 11:15 AM

Cute, SKAT, won't bother you anymore today.

Scott Thirtyseven

July 20, 2014 at 7:49 AM

What a fun limerick. Hope it did well in the comp.

Paul Callus

May 2, 2014 at 9:51 AM

Enjoyed this humorous write Skat! Very good limerick! // paul

Bukang Liwayway

March 22, 2014 at 11:45 AM

(^___^) nice limerick friend SKAT. Thanks for your comment. Just wishing you and your family a blessed day always. hugsssssss :)

Robert Pettit

March 20, 2014 at 1:46 PM

You probably saw him next to the dodo bird and the passenger pigeon. Interesting write.

Jack Horne

August 7, 2013 at 4:35 PM

lol, had a chuckle here, Skat : )

Poet Destroyer A

July 7, 2013 at 12:10 AM

no!

Wayne Sapp

September 6, 2010 at 7:48 PM

Good stuff! This is a tough contest; I was trying to find words that worked with "Aquarius!" In any case, thank you for your kind words about "Reluctant Warrior. Look forward to reading more of your posts! Wayne

Harry Horsman

August 31, 2010 at 2:47 AM

enjoyed this limerick, catching up on poems in soup, love this. Harry

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

July 26, 2010 at 11:26 AM

hahaha poor horse! I think he might go well together with my trying hard horse? ;) at least he cuold eat the popcorn...enjoyed this Skat - nikko :)

Joseph Spence Sr

July 2, 2010 at 4:32 PM

This is so funny. I love the unicorn as a part of my mythology series. This should be a winner in the contest. Great limerick, and i am still smiling. Great job! Joseph

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

May 25, 2010 at 1:25 PM

this is really funny, Irma :) poor horse, reminds me of a story we have in school for toddlers, about this horse named Zack who wanted to be a zebra so he bought a zebra suit, lol, could be this is his brother ;) thanks as well for all your comments in my poems :) enjoy your day! :)

Sue Mason

May 20, 2010 at 8:25 PM

LOL wonderful here, Irma !! Good luck in the contest !!

John Beam

May 16, 2010 at 3:49 PM

thanks for comment congrats on win thanks for sharing enjoyed reading yours also

Daniel Cwiak

May 14, 2010 at 9:17 AM

Different sort of images for me...I never thougnt of popcorn for a horse. Congrats on your win! Dan C

Sara Kendrick

May 13, 2010 at 2:17 PM

Interesting zoo write..Congratulations on your win...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Ravindra K Kapoor

May 12, 2010 at 7:28 PM

Very funny and wonderfully penned. Congrats on your win my friend. And many thank for your precious comments on Pradoot the Messenger. Love and best wishes....Ravindra.... Irma Hole

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 12, 2010 at 11:28 AM

Thankxxx sweet BBF .. appreciate your encouragement on my contest entry ... hope all is well with u ... miss u much.. luv.. your BBF ..Linda-Marie

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

May 11, 2010 at 6:39 AM

Good Limerick, Irma. Were there really unicorns? I love the fantasy. And then, reality strikes again. This was a fun read. Good luck in the contest. Smiles, Dane Ann