Zoo

I took my young son to the zoo Look Mummy do you see that Kangaroo There’s a Joey peeping from her pouch If it grows too big does his mum say OUCH! Young chimps and monkeys made us smile And we viewed their antics for a while They swung on ropes and a trapeze And had fun climbing up the trees The golden lion roared at us I didn’t want to make a fuss But admit I was a little scared Of the massive teeth the lion bared Our favourite animals of them all Were the huge giraffes, they are so tall I watched one stick out its black tongue Gosh, I’ve never seen a tongue so long! We watch penguins out on parade And fed them fish as we had paid For lots of food for them to eat To feed them was son’s birthday treat! We shared a picnic, then buy ice creams Son drops his cone, there are loud screams The vendor sees and says ‘hey birthday boy’ Have another from me, son squeals with joy Our day out at the zoo was oh such fun But we had to leave as we had done All the exciting things we planned to do On son’s birthday trip to the local zoo Writing Challenge - 'Z' Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance la France 05/13/23
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Eslinger Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 4:54 AM
Yes, your fun day of celebration creates our fun read. I like that your notesabout animals are specific, not vaguely general. I didn’t know giraffes had black tongues! The poem has such a smoothe telling that it’s like a poetry waterfall, outside any effort — like it would be to be born an adult. An accomplished piece. Hugs!
McBride  Avatar
May 26, 2023 at 7:23 PM
What a joyful day you have written about, special memories being made , love it
Roper Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 9:06 AM
Perfect, yes will save... :) thank you and good luck. Blessings my friend
Breidenthal Avatar
May 16, 2023 at 10:23 PM
What a zootastic poem! So clever and cute! :)
Allison Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 12:00 AM
thanks so much fro dropping by david:-) hugs jan xx
Kendrick Avatar
May 16, 2023 at 3:38 AM
Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara
Allison Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 12:00 AM
thanks Sara:-) hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 4:32 AM
Jan, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge, love it and congratulations !
Allison Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 1:34 PM
I'm so thrilled with my placement, thanks so much Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
Congratulations on your great win in the Contest ....JAN.
Allison Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 1:33 PM
Thanks so much for your comment:-) hugs Jan x
Sambourne Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 5:57 PM
A grand assortment of Zoo creatures that give joy to all, especially children, and your young son having an ice cream perk. Congratulations! Brian
Allison Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 1:33 PM
thanks Brian - pure fiction I'm afraid lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Edmonds  Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 3:25 PM
A wonderful trip to the zoo Jan, it was a joyful entertaining read. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest. Hugs Belle xx
Allison Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 1:33 PM
Thanks Belle:-) hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 12:34 PM
Jan, a sweet poem, congratulations on your first place win!
Allison Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 12:35 PM
Thanks Tania, i only wrote it at school on Friday I am amazed the contest closed so quickly:-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 12:10 PM
Lots of wild animals around in ps, too. Hyenas, a monkey or two. I saw that congrats are in order for you. Hugs sweet friend.
Allison Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 12:29 PM
Thanks Lin, this pussycat is ready to roar! hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 11:15 AM
Fantastic zoo write. I hope you scored high with this one.
Allison Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 12:31 PM
Thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Narain Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 10:36 AM
nice trip to zoo. Worth a win
Allison Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 12:32 PM
Thanks Jay-) hugs Jan xx
Fowler Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 7:36 AM
A fun trip Jan. Congratulations on your win! :)
Allison Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 12:32 PM
Thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 7:03 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Jan :) - hugs
Allison Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 12:32 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Poet Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 7:02 AM
Congratulations on winning the contest with your excellent poetry.
Allison Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 12:33 PM
Thanks Sotto:-) hugs Jan xx
Dutta Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 6:55 AM
Big Congrats to win First place. Where had been so long ? Love. Have Good Days
Allison Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 12:34 PM
Thanks Anisha, had family issues kept me away from writing but i am back now:-) hugs Jan xx
Kavanagh  Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 2:59 AM
Indeed it’s a zoo out there Jan, a nice fun write and enjoyable read, also a little break from the real zoo, if you know what I mean lol, all the best in contest, cheers David
Allison Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 4:14 AM
Thanks David, yeah the zoo certainly keeps growing with troublesome creatures lol:-) hugs jan xx
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 2:43 PM
Hello Andrea, it sounds like everyone had fun at the zoo. A nice day to spend the day. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 10:38 AM
Hello Jan, Happy Mother's Day. You are welcome. Hugs. xx
Allison Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 5:03 PM
Thanks Darlene:-) hugs Jan xx
Parker Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 2:37 PM
nicely done Jan birthday at the zoo what could be better than that...
Allison Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 5:04 PM
Pure fiction of course lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 12:35 PM
- Sounds like a fun day ... an entertaining poem, Jan :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Allison Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 5:04 PM
Just fiction for the contest I'm afraid lol:-) hugs jan xx
Mcintosh Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 12:24 PM
Oh, awesomeness. I love it. A sure winner. God bless you always sweet lady. Love, Gina
Allison Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 5:05 PM
I hope it's not too long a poem Regina but once i started it was hard to stop!:-) hugs Jan xx
Turner Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 11:04 AM
A fun read, Jan. In the summer when it's really hot here, they close the zoo during the afternoons. Have a Happy Mother's Day and enjoy your weekend:)
Allison Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 5:05 PM
Hi DT thanks for dropping by:-) we dont have any zoo s here, just a wildlife park:-) hugs Jan xx
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