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I took my young son to the zoo Look Mummy do you see that Kangaroo There’s a Joey peeping from her pouch If it grows too big does his mum say OUCH! Young chimps and monkeys made us smile And we viewed their antics for a while They swung on ropes and a trapeze And had fun climbing up the trees The golden lion roared at us I didn’t want to make a fuss But admit I was a little scared Of the massive teeth the lion bared Our favourite animals of them all Were the huge giraffes, they are so tall I watched one stick out its black tongue Gosh, I’ve never seen a tongue so long! We watch penguins out on parade And fed them fish as we had paid For lots of food for them to eat To feed them was son’s birthday treat! We shared a picnic, then buy ice creams Son drops his cone, there are loud screams The vendor sees and says ‘hey birthday boy’ Have another from me, son squeals with joy Our day out at the zoo was oh such fun But we had to leave as we had done All the exciting things we planned to do On son’s birthday trip to the local zoo Writing Challenge - 'Z' Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance la France 05/13/23

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Date: 6/11/2023 4:54:00 AM
Yes, your fun day of celebration creates our fun read. I like that your notesabout animals are specific, not vaguely general. I didn’t know giraffes had black tongues! The poem has such a smoothe telling that it’s like a poetry waterfall, outside any effort — like it would be to be born an adult. An accomplished piece. Hugs!
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Date: 5/26/2023 7:23:00 PM
What a joyful day you have written about, special memories being made , love it
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Date: 5/18/2023 9:06:00 AM
Perfect, yes will save... :) thank you and good luck. Blessings my friend
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Date: 5/16/2023 10:23:00 PM
What a zootastic poem! So clever and cute! :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/18/2023 12:00:00 AM
thanks so much fro dropping by david:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/16/2023 3:38:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/18/2023 12:00:00 AM
thanks Sara:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/15/2023 4:32:00 AM
Jan, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge, love it and congratulations !
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/15/2023 1:34:00 PM
I'm so thrilled with my placement, thanks so much Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/14/2023 8:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win in the Contest ....JAN.
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/15/2023 1:33:00 PM
Thanks so much for your comment:-) hugs Jan x
Date: 5/14/2023 5:57:00 PM
A grand assortment of Zoo creatures that give joy to all, especially children, and your young son having an ice cream perk. Congratulations! Brian
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/15/2023 1:33:00 PM
thanks Brian - pure fiction I'm afraid lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/14/2023 3:25:00 PM
A wonderful trip to the zoo Jan, it was a joyful entertaining read. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest. Hugs Belle xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/15/2023 1:33:00 PM
Thanks Belle:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/14/2023 12:34:00 PM
Jan, a sweet poem, congratulations on your first place win!
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/14/2023 12:35:00 PM
Thanks Tania, i only wrote it at school on Friday I am amazed the contest closed so quickly:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/14/2023 12:10:00 PM
Lots of wild animals around in ps, too. Hyenas, a monkey or two. I saw that congrats are in order for you. Hugs sweet friend.
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/14/2023 12:29:00 PM
Thanks Lin, this pussycat is ready to roar! hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/14/2023 11:15:00 AM
Fantastic zoo write. I hope you scored high with this one.
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/14/2023 12:31:00 PM
Thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/14/2023 10:36:00 AM
nice trip to zoo. Worth a win
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/14/2023 12:32:00 PM
Thanks Jay-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/14/2023 7:36:00 AM
A fun trip Jan. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/14/2023 12:32:00 PM
Thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/14/2023 7:03:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Jan :) - hugs
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/14/2023 12:32:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/14/2023 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations on winning the contest with your excellent poetry.
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/14/2023 12:33:00 PM
Thanks Sotto:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/14/2023 6:55:00 AM
Big Congrats to win First place. Where had been so long ? Love. Have Good Days
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/14/2023 12:34:00 PM
Thanks Anisha, had family issues kept me away from writing but i am back now:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/14/2023 2:59:00 AM
Indeed it’s a zoo out there Jan, a nice fun write and enjoyable read, also a little break from the real zoo, if you know what I mean lol, all the best in contest, cheers David
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/14/2023 4:14:00 AM
Thanks David, yeah the zoo certainly keeps growing with troublesome creatures lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/13/2023 2:43:00 PM
Hello Andrea, it sounds like everyone had fun at the zoo. A nice day to spend the day. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/14/2023 10:38:00 AM
Hello Jan, Happy Mother's Day. You are welcome. Hugs. xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/13/2023 5:03:00 PM
Thanks Darlene:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/13/2023 2:37:00 PM
nicely done Jan birthday at the zoo what could be better than that...
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/13/2023 5:04:00 PM
Pure fiction of course lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/13/2023 12:35:00 PM
- Sounds like a fun day ... an entertaining poem, Jan :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/13/2023 5:04:00 PM
Just fiction for the contest I'm afraid lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/13/2023 12:24:00 PM
Oh, awesomeness. I love it. A sure winner. God bless you always sweet lady. Love, Gina
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/13/2023 5:05:00 PM
I hope it's not too long a poem Regina but once i started it was hard to stop!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/13/2023 11:04:00 AM
A fun read, Jan. In the summer when it's really hot here, they close the zoo during the afternoons. Have a Happy Mother's Day and enjoy your weekend:)
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/13/2023 5:05:00 PM
Hi DT thanks for dropping by:-) we dont have any zoo s here, just a wildlife park:-) hugs Jan xx

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