Zippitys Playground

The playground I chose to write about,
Is open twenty four seven, night or day,
It is beyond any expectable doubt, dangerous
Paradise to young animals, some human
Children perhaps even envious!
Zippity was a young, playful giraffe,
His mother always warned him of the riffraff
He was popular, always made others laugh
As inquisitive as any human child,
He loved the wild South African bush,
This was his oyster!
Never crossed his mind, he was young,
Vulnerable and tasty prey,
Watch out Zippity mom would say.
One day, bored and wanting to play
He made a new friend
Who would not talk, but followed him
Around, ran when he ran
Got up when Zippity got up or if Zippity
Lay down so did he, 
But both did the same
At the same speed of light,
The two were so alike to Zippity’s delight.
Mom snorted for him
It was midday – he could only see the
Shape of a rock by his feet
Hey there Zippity, why don’t you post
This mystery on “Twitter”
And overnight become famous and glitter.
But gradually he reappeared 
As the day progressed, the new
Found friend became leaner and taller.
If it rained he didn’t come out to play
And if it was cloudy, the same
Zippity was confused, was his friend
Playing some new kind of game?
Right now he was happy, playing in their
Own playground, bigger than any,
They played hide and seek between
Bushes, tall grass and trees,
Splashed in puddles, the weather always hot,
With a warm easterly breeze.
One day riffraff appeared, Zippity noticed
Did not look like his friend at all,
Mom on alert and on call! 
She was bravely determined, an angry scared
Mom who stood her ground
The only sound,
Her loud and heavy snorting
And her pounding 
Foot, besides the rustling of leaves
And a hyenas laugh the fiercest of predators,
Who move silently like thieves!
The Hyena knew all too well that a kick in her side,
Or her head,
She’d be dead!
She turned and slinked away,
Leaving behind Zippity and mom,
Now the happiest animals
Under the sun.
Can I go play with my friend,
Zippity said,
My darling giraffe
That animal, is mighty
And bold but she is your riffraff
Always remember,
Your mom’s words,
And beware of such turds.
And as for your friend, 
He is called a shadow, and does not
Play, at any time during the day
When the sun is not shining,
Call him your twin
If you want, he is kind of kin.
But I prefer the name shadow shouted 
Zippity loud,
As his friend and the sun disappeared
Behind a cloud.
My Shadow, my shadow
Zipperty danced and
ran around,
“All creatures great and small,
The Lord God made them all”.
Mom neighed,
"And shadows will enthrall".

THIS ADOLESCENT HAD A LOT OF FUN FINDING HIS OWN SHADOW IN THE PARK

Entering Contest : Playground poetry contest
Sponsor: Shreya LN
22/06/2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 7/15/2021 9:54:00 AM
Thank you to my readers/followers. Your comments are so abundantly appreciated and each one reserves a special place within me. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/14/2021 12:57:00 AM
A wonderful story Jennifer, children everywhere are sure to love it… Belle
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Date: 7/6/2021 7:40:00 AM
I missed this one. very big congratulations, to you, my friend. Jennifer you are a talent, truly. Hugs, Pangie xx
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Date: 7/5/2021 7:17:00 PM
Wow. Double Wow. Triple Wow and Zippity-doo-dah, Jennifer. GREAT write. ~ Gershon
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Date: 7/4/2021 9:35:00 AM
back with my belated Congrats. Way to go!!!
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Date: 7/4/2021 12:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win. How are you? How is health? Take care, God bless!
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Date: 7/3/2021 12:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful/creative story/write. Love It. Have a blessed day/weekend................
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Date: 7/3/2021 10:11:00 AM
Wonderful. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/3/2021 9:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement! Wonderful spin on the contest topic :)
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Date: 6/30/2021 4:02:00 PM
You are a natural storytelller Jennifer this is delightful with a wonderful moral :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/28/2021 5:48:00 PM
Hello Jennifer, this is so lovely. enjoyed this story poem. I was getting concerned about Zippy and his friend. enjoy your evening Love Darlene
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Date: 6/28/2021 11:51:00 AM
I love this Jennifer. What a great story for a children's book. I felt like I was a small child again reading one of my Little Golden Books. Super job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/24/2021 11:17:00 PM
Hello Jennifer … your tales are always interesting and have a moral to them so while you keep me wondering where this is going I am always pleasantly surprised over the last few lines - well done again Jennifer - Lindsay
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Date: 6/24/2021 9:21:00 PM
I can only vindicate all the comments below, you have a superb mind, Jennifer, as i was reading this, i pictured a lady in front of a classroom full of children, totally captured and mesmerized with every word that penetrated their eager minds. Stay Safe My friend...
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Date: 6/24/2021 7:50:00 PM
I would love to play hide and seek with Zippity (though I don't know where a giraffe would hide) I heard about a hotel somewhere in Africa or Austraila maybe where giraffes will come right to your window and you can feed them, ever hear of any place like that?
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Date: 6/24/2021 5:25:00 PM
sweet story telling, Jennifer. You ought to write a book for kids!!
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Date: 6/24/2021 11:38:00 AM
- What a wonderful story, dear Jenny ... I can see it as a reality ... it's important to choose your friends carefully ... and I'm blessed with someone like you ... how lucky I am :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/24/2021 7:46:00 AM
Such a beautiful story so excellently told Jennifer, the giraffe is such a graceful creature to look upon and I think I remember a few in your beautiful land when I was there these many years ago. Hope all is well, blessings and hugs, Gordon
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Date: 6/24/2021 7:38:00 AM
such a wonderful story Jen... you have great story telling abilities, i was hooked through the the end! Great write! hugs
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Date: 6/23/2021 8:13:00 PM
Wow!!! Such a beautiful story. I felt like I was watching a place of masai mara in discovery/national geographic channel... Lovely story... I thoroughly enjoyed reading it...
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Date: 6/23/2021 4:01:00 PM
Ah, you tell your story very well, I agree , we need to treat our animals with gentility, all of them even the Giraffe, nice one Jennifer, thank you for sharing your creative pen :)
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Date: 6/23/2021 11:00:00 AM
Your featuring a young, playful giraffe in this charming story, is novel and interesting. So is the setting in the wild. A wonderful story, Jennifer. Blessings, Evelyn :)
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Date: 6/23/2021 1:01:00 PM
Thank you Evelyn for a wonderful comment. Do you live on the continent of Africa. I was born in Athens and for the first six years of my life lived in Cyprus and England but for maaaaaaaaaaaaaany years up until the present day, have lived in Africa, I could not live anywhere else. We lived in the then Rhodesia for a while and often saw the Victoria Falls as i was a boarder at the convent in the now Harare then we went to Zambia (Loved Kariba Lake) for 8 years in Lusaka opposite state House and then my parents came down to Johannesburg South Africa. The reason for all our moves, my father was in the military - I feel I am Africa's child for I have lived here for almost all my life Blessings and hugs Jennifer.
Date: 6/23/2021 1:24:00 AM
What a story to read. Old memories never to be forgotten. Hugs.
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Date: 6/23/2021 2:30:00 AM
Hi Victor glad you enjoyed my story. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 6/22/2021 12:14:00 PM
You have been gifted with story telling my friend, Tom is right you should start writing children books. Enjoyed reading this lovely story. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/22/2021 12:28:00 PM
Thank you Eve for reading and commenting, it means a lot to me. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 6/22/2021 10:30:00 AM
Wonderful story. Enjoyed reading. I remembered an incidence of life when very small thought shadow was a ghost. Mom laughed and explained.
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Date: 6/22/2021 12:27:00 PM
you mom and you are close, that is awesome - my dad and I were very close, also with my mother but more with my father. So glad you enjoyed Rama. Blessings, and hugs, Jennifer.
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