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Zing Ding Zing Ding Zing

I called a Mommy the other day. With her 7-year-old son’s permission. I always ask the student first, Not wanting to violate their trust. “I’m afraid,” he told me. “You do it.” The minute he went back to class I called his Mommy. She answered on the eighth ring. I could hear, Zing. Zing. Ding. Ding. “Your child has one request,” I tell her, “But he was afraid to ask.” “I’m LISTENING,” she says. “Hey, I got an apple basket!” Zing. Ding. Ding. Zing. “I got a free STRAWBERRY!” she yells. I can hear a baby crying in the background now. “Your child says that since the baby came, He doesn’t feel as loved,” I tell her. “He just Needs a hug sometimes, from his Mommy.” Exasperated sigh, loud. “I don’t have time for that!” she says. Zing. Ding. Ding. Zing. I feel sad as I hang up the phone. When did technology replace Mommy?

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Date: 3/7/2018 11:00:00 PM
Great narrative...Yes, when? Perhaps the answer is--when we let it...Thanks for capturing the moment. :) gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/8/2018 12:29:00 AM
Thank you Gershon. I knew you would "get it."
Date: 3/7/2018 3:25:00 PM
Poem #1 that i read It cant be aboit me all the time What i tell people as if I wete the expert not Is hiw I come away What is the feeling i get that is how i judge This made me feel up and happy and a bit cheery although tbe mesage wad something to think about Having kids i dodged that bullet I was so druged up for so many years my kids would of been all f up I was rich but i lost all my millins I wrote a piece called on top of a hill all about my mantion in rhe hollywood hills Im of to poem # 2
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/7/2018 3:46:00 PM
Thank you Marc.

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