Zin

Withering auras of Zin surround
The tears of a crying heart
Trickling down through ancient vines
Spilled into pools of sacred red wine

Where pain freely flows
Until the brooding heart glows
Embraced in time, sharp edges refined
Drifting to sheer delight
 
Zin pours from sepulchers divine 
Sanctioned in muted candle’s light 
Promises the spirit to ignite 
Reflected in his sparkling eyes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Guzzi Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 3:57 PM
Blessed Be. Thanks for stopping by my verses. Light & Love
Anglesey Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 9:01 PM
Thank you for the nice visit. Much appreciated :)
Breidenthal Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 2:13 AM
A most lovely and mystical composition. I enjoyed reading it all! Always, Laura
Anglesey Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 6:27 AM
Laura, thank you for the kind words :)
Bordner Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 3:16 PM
I will be happy to share some Zin with you my marvelous Poetess - many of your writes have an elegant and subtle power that gently unfolds wisdom Karen - J.A.B. %
Anglesey Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 7:46 PM
Justin, cheers to you ... your in depth critique leaves me humbled :)
Posey Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 12:16 PM
Zin could well be the wine of the Poets as saluted in my poem. Zen could be the poet. Nice work, sweetheart. Thanks for your visits and appreciated comments.... Jake
Anglesey Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 12:46 PM
Thank you Jake, Zen / Zen so much meaning behind the history of both :)
Kilmer Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 5:34 PM
I like the content an flow of this one. Makes me want sip from the fountain of desire. Nicely done. Kilmer
Anglesey Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 8:34 PM
Such a nice comment ...'sip from the fountain of desire'. I'm glad you see it that way. thank you
Mckenzie Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 12:55 PM
Very nicely put together it flowed perfectly! Laura :)
Anglesey Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 2:51 PM
Thankyou Laura, comments appreciated :)
Puddifoot Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 4:05 PM
a very well crafted piece, beautiful wording, flows nicely, like wine itself :)
Anglesey Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 6:44 PM
Charlotte, I really like your interpretation. Thank you :)
Jones Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 1:08 PM
Love your poem...it puts forth much zin ! :-)
Anglesey Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 2:14 PM
Donna, thank you for the lovely comment :)
Carroll Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 10:04 PM
Most lovely write...Thanks for sharing.. Ken..
Anglesey Avatar
August 18, 2013 at 9:30 AM
Ken....Thank you for the lovely comment
Phillips Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 8:49 AM
Nice poem with excellent use of metaphor .Very intriguing.
Anglesey Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 6:55 PM
Thank you Christine, I appreciate your point of view
Lamoureux Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 7:44 PM
This has a magical quality to it Karen. I was swept along with your words.
Anglesey Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 6:54 PM
I appreciate your encouraging comments :)
A   Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 7:02 PM
a nice tasting poem--, refreshing. Karen, you are an amazing writer... I love this poem, we are forever searching for the perfect reflection... I love it :) Linda
Anglesey Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 7:20 PM
Linda, thank you so much.. I appreciate your beautiful interpretation :)
Adams Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 3:40 PM
love the way this one flows...worded perfectly! Nice to meet you :)
Anglesey Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 5:48 PM
Sandra. Thank you very much. :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 3:17 PM
this is a lovely poem, Karen. Charming as well!
Anglesey Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 5:47 PM
Andrea , thank you ..much appreciated:)
May Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 4:52 AM
very nicely penned Karen....enjoyed...best wishes
Anglesey Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 6:49 AM
Joseph, thank you :)
Kendrick Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 2:46 PM
Enjoyed reading your uniquely creative work..Sara
Anglesey Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 3:01 PM
Sara, thank you for the nice comment. Have a great day :)
Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 8:30 AM
- A beautiful poem.... love it, Karen!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Anglesey Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 9:05 AM
Anne Lise, thank you so much. Have a lovely day :)
Tacito Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 7:57 AM
Yummy yum!!! Love this! =D Ah, them sparkling eyes, eh? ;-) Great to see a new piece from you!
Anglesey Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 8:24 AM
Drake, thank you so very much ... I am deliciously humnled :)
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 6:27 AM
Ahhh, this one is very nice -very good Karen! MC
Anglesey Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 6:37 AM
MC, thank you for stopping to comment ...very much appreciated
J.T. Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 6:17 AM
a heart filled with love. Great poem
Anglesey Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 6:37 AM
Poet, thank you ... I like your interpretation :)
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